My Mother, Me And Our Special Moment Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABBA CBBD EFGE EHHI JKFL HMAF NOPH

My world is small restrictedA
I wake up it's warm and darknessB
I'm floating in the water but i dont feel coldnessB
I feel loved and protectedA
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Where am iC
Yes i know i'm in my mother's uterusB
I can feel her touch and tendernessB
She give me peace and silenceD
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When i am naughty dancingE
She sing for me so lovelyF
I hear her voice like an echoG
Directly to me vibratingE
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But what is happeningE
I'm moving in stormy waterH
I am going down with the waterH
Absorbed in the vacuumI
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I feel the presure i can hear my mother screams of painJ
I spring outside as a bird will take a flightK
And there they give me directlyF
To my mother loving armsL
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Our looks encounterH
She saw my blue eyesM
Her eyes was by tears invadedA
Of happiness for having meF
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I felt her heart i felt her loveN
I said proud in my baby mindO
I will reward her with a smileP
Above all she is my motherH

Cristina Teodor
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 01/01/2000



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