Tam Lin Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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Child Part II p Burns's VersionA
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O I forbid you maidens a'B
That wear gowd on your hairC
To come or gae by CarterhaughD
For young Tam Lin is thereC
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There's nane that gaes by CarterhaughD
But they leave him a wadE
Either their rings or green mantlesF
Or else their maidenheadE
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Janet has kilted her green kirtleG
A little aboon her kneeH
And she has braided her yellow hairC
A little aboon her breeH
And she's awa' to CarterhaughD
As fast as she can hieD
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When she came to CarterhaughD
Tam Lin was at the wellG
And there she fand his steed standingI
But away was himselG
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She had na pu'd a double roseJ
A rose but only twaK
Till up then started young Tam LinL
Says Lady thou's pu nae maeM
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Why pu's thou the rose JanetE
And why breaks thou the wandE
Or why comes thou to CarterhaughD
Withoutten my commandE
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Carterhaugh it is my ainL
My daddie gave it meH
I'll come and gang by CarterhaughD
And ask nae leave at theeH
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Janet has kilted her green kirtleG
A little aboon her kneeH
And she has snooded her yellow hairC
A little aboon her breeH
And she is to her father's haD
As fast as she can hieD
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Four and twenty ladies fairC
Were playing at the baN
And out then cam the fair JanetE
Ance the flower amang them a'B
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Four and twenty ladies fairC
Were playing at the chessO
And out then cam the fair JanetE
As green as onie grassP
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Out then spak an auld grey knightE
Lay oer the castle waD
And says Alas fair Janet for theeH
But we'll be blamed a'B
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Haud your tongue ye auld fac'd knightE
Some ill death may ye dieE
Father my bairn on whom I willG
I'll father nane on theeH
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Out then spak her father dearQ
And he spak meek and mildE
And ever alas sweet Janet he saysR
I think thou gaes wi childE
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If that I gae wi' child fatherS
Mysel maun bear the blameT
There's neer a laird about your haD
Shall get the bairn's nameT
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If my love were an earthly knightE
As he's an elfin greyM
I wad na gie my ain true loveU
For nae lord that ye haeD
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The steed that my true love rides onL
Is lighter than the windE
Wi siller he is shod beforeV
Wi burning gowd behindE
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Janet has kilted her green kirtleG
A little aboon her kneeH
And she has snooded her yellow hairC
A little aboon her breeH
And she's awa' to CarterhaughD
As fast as she can hieD
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When she cam to CarterhaughD
Tam Lin was at the wellG
And there she fand his steed standingI
But away was himselG
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She had na pu'd a double roseJ
A rose but only twaD
Till up then started young Tam LinL
Says Lady thou pu's nae maeM
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Why pu's thou the rose JanetE
Amang the groves sae greenL
And a' to kill the bonie babeN
That we gat us betweenL
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O tell me tell me Tam Lin she saysR
For's sake that died on treeH
If eer ye was in holy chapelG
Or christendom did seeH
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Roxbrugh he was my grandfatherS
Took me with him to bideE
And ance it fell upon a dayM
That wae did me betideE
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And ance it fell upon a dayM
A cauld day and a snellG
When we were frae the hunting comeW
That frae my horse I fellG
The Queen o Fairies she caught meH
In yon green hill to dwellG
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And pleasant is the fairy landE
But an eerie tale to tellG
Ay at the end of seven yearsX
We pay a tiend to hellG
I am sae fair and fu' o fleshY
I'm feared it be myselG
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But the night is Halloween ladyH
The morn is HallowdayH
Then win me win me an ye willG
For weel I wat ye mayM
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Just at the mirk and midnight hourS
The fairy folk will rideH
And they that wad their true love winL
At Miles Cross they maun bideH
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But how shall I thee ken Tam LinL
Or how my true love knowL
Amang sae mony unco knightsZ
The like I never sawA2
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O first let pass the black ladyH
And syne let pass the brownL
But quickly run to the milk white steedH
Pu ye his rider downL
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For I'll ride on the milk white steedH
And ay nearest the townL
Because I was an earthly knightH
They gie me that renownL
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My right hand will be gloyd ladyH
My left hand will be bareC
Cockt up shall my bonnet beH
And kaimd down shall my hairC
And thae's the takens I gie theeH
Nae doubt I will be thereC
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They'll turn me in your arms ladyH
Into an esk and adderS
But hold me fast and fear me notH
I am your bairn's fatherS
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They'll turn me to a bear sae grimB2
And then a lion boldH
But hold me fast and fear me notH
As ye shall love your childH
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Again they'll turn me in your armsC2
To a red het gaud of airnL
But hold me fast and fear me notH
I'll do to you nae harmD2
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And last they'll turn me in your armsC2
Into the burning gleedH
Then throw me into well waterS
O throw me in wi speedH
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And then I'll be your ain true loveU
I'll turn a naked knightH
Then cover me wi your green mantleG
And cover me out o sightH
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Gloomy gloomy was the nightH
And eerie was the wayM
As fair Jenny in her green mantleG
To Miles Cross she did gaeE
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About the middle o' the nightH
She heard the bridles ringI
This lady was as glad at thatH
As any earthly thingI
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First she let the black pass byE
And syne she let the brownL
But quickly she ran to the milk white steedH
And pu'd the rider downL
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Sae weel she minded whae he did sayM
And young Tam Lin did winL
Syne coverd him wi her green mantleG
As blythe's a bird in springI
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Out then spak the Queen o FairiesE2
Out of a bush o broomF2
Them that has gotten young Tam LinL
Has gotten a stately groomF2
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Out then spak the Queen o FairiesE2
And an angry woman was sheH
Shame betide her ill far'd faceG2
And an ill death may she dieE
For she's taen awa the bonniest knightH
In a' my companieL
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But had I kend Tam Lin she saysR
What now this night I seeH
I wad hae taen out thy twa grey e'enL
And put in twa een o treeH

Andrew Lang



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