Almost Done Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AB CD EFF GF HF II JJ KLK MNN

A thousand miles didn't start with a stepA
but a mastered thoughtB
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Created and plannedC
then carefully implementedD
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But none of that matteredE
when the last step was takenF
And all the eyes blickenF
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Singing and praising voicesG
some sentimental and genuineF
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Others were noises to the earsH
full of pain and vainF
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Glances from corner to cornerI
loves and hugs all in orderI
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With no clue of any single mileJ
some of them could still smileJ
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The warmth was wild and always will beK
with the so called fate sealedL
I need not a pleaK
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And as people chant as birds and laugh as ladsM
it gets easier to learn lessonsN
read minds and understand humansN

Ally Fred
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 10/17/2020

Poet's note: This poem is about how hard a person strives alone through hurdles and setbacks in life but upon their success everyone is suddenly a friend and a family. The poem depicts the feeling of hypocrisy among other people who after all do not appreciate what you achieve as they enjoyed while you struggled alone. It's written for anyone who comes across this state and shows that, what's important is not who celebrates or commends your success but how you personally feels about it.




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