Gone With A Handsomer Man. Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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JOHNA
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I've worked in the field all day a plowin' the stony streakB
I've scolded my team till I'm hoarse I've tramped till my legs are weakB
I've choked a dozen swears so's not to tell Jane fibsC
When the plow p'int struck a stone and the handles punched my ribsC
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I've put my team in the barn and rubbed their sweaty coatsC
I've fed 'em a heap of hay and half a bushel of oatsC
And to see the way they eat makes me like eatin' feelD
And Jane won't say to night that I don't make out a mealD
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Well said the door is locked but here she's left the keyE
Under the step in a place known only to her and meE
I wonder who's dyin' or dead that she's hustled off pell mellF
But here on the table's a note and probably this will tellF
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Good God my wife is gone my wife is gone astrayG
The letter it says Good bye for I'm a going awayG
I've lived with you six months John and so far I've been trueH
But I'm going away to day with a handsomer man than youH
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A han'somer man than me Why that ain't much to sayG
There's han'somer men than me go past here every dayG
There's han'somer men than me I ain't of the han'some kindI
But a lovin'er man than I was I guess she'll never findI
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Curse her curse her I say and give my curses wingsC
May the words of love I've spoke be changed to scorpion stingsC
Oh she filled my heart with joy she emptied my heart of doubtJ
And now with a scratch of a pen she lets my heart's blood outJ
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Curse her curse her say I she'll some time rue this dayG
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CURSE HER CURSE HER SAY I SHE'LL SOME TIME RUE THIS DAYG
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She'll some time learn that hate is a game that two can playG
And long before she dies she'll grieve she ever was bornK
And I'll plow her grave with hate and seed it down to scornK
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As sure as the world goes on there'll come a time when sheE
Will read the devilish heart of that han'somer man than meE
And there'll be a time when he will find as others doH
That she who is false to one can be the same with twoH
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And when her face grows pale and when her eyes grow dimL
And when he is tired of her and she is tired of himL
She'll do what she ought to have done and coolly count the costM
And then she'll see things clear and know what she has lostN
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And thoughts that are now asleep will wake up in her mindI
And she will mourn and cry for what she has left behindI
And maybe she'll sometimes long for me for me but noO
I've blotted her out of my heart and I will not have it soO
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And yet in her girlish heart there was somethin' or other she hadP
That fastened a man to her and wasn't entirely badP
And she loved me a little I think although it didn't lastQ
But I mustn't think of these things I've buried 'em in the pastQ
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I'll take my hard words back nor make a bad matter worseC
She'll have trouble enough she shall not have my curseC
But I'll live a life so square and I well know that I canR
That she always will sorry be that she went with that han'somer manR
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Ah here is her kitchen dress it makes my poor eyes blurS
It seems when I look at that as if 'twas holdin' herS
And here are her week day shoes and there is her week day hatT
And yonder's her weddin' gown I wonder she didn't take thatT
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'Twas only this mornin' she came and called me her dearest dearU
And said I was makin' for her a regular paradise hereV
O God if you want a man to sense the pains of hellF
Before you pitch him in just keep him in heaven a spellF
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Good bye I wish that death had severed us two apartW
You've lost a worshiper here you've crushed a lovin' heartW
I'll worship no woman again but I guess I'll learn to prayG
And kneel as you used to kneel before you run awayG
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And if I thought I could bring my words on heaven to bearX
And if I thought I had some little influence thereX
I would pray that I might be if it only could be soO
As happy and gay as I was a half an hour agoO
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JANEY
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enteringZ
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Why John what a litter here you've thrown things all aroundA2
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WHY JOHN WHAT A LITTER HERE YOU'VE THROWN THINGS ALL AROUNDA2
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Come what's the matter now and what 've you lost or foundA2
And here's my father here a waiting for supper tooH
I've been a riding with him he's that handsomer man than youH
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Ha ha Pa take a seat while I put the kettle onA
And get things ready for tea and kiss my dear old JohnA
Why John you look so strange Come what has crossed your trackB2
I was only a joking you know I'm willing to take it backB2
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JOHNA
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asideC2
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Well now if this ain't a joke with rather a bitter creamD2
It seems as if I'd woke from a mighty ticklish dreamD2
And I think she smells a rat for she smiles at me so queerU
I hope she don't good Lord I hope that they didn't hearV
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'Twas one of her practical drives she thought I'd understandE2
But I'll never break sod again till I get the lay of the landE2
But one thing's settled with me to appreciate heaven wellF
'Tis good for a man to have some fifteen minutes of hellF
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JOHNNY RICHF2
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Raise the light a little JimL
For it's getting rather dimL
And with such a storm a howlin' 'twill not do to douse the glimL
Hustle down the curtains LuH
Poke the fire a little SuH
This is somethin' of a flurry mother somethin' of a whewH
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Goodness gracious how it poursC
How it beats ag'in the doorsC
You will have a hard one Jimmy when you go to do the choresC
Do not overfeed the grayG
Give a plenty to the bayG
And be careful with your lantern when you go among the hayG
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See the horses have a bedG2
When you've got 'em fairly fedG2
Feed the cows that's in the stable and the sheep that's in the shedG2
Give the spotted cow some mealD
Where the brindle can not stealD
For she's greedy as a porker and as slipp'ry as an eelD
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Hang your lantern by the ringZ
On a nail or on a stringZ
For the Durham calf 'll bunt it if there's any such a thingZ
He's a handsome one to seeE
And a knowin' one is heE
I stooped over t'other morning and he up and went for meE
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Rover thinks he hears a noiseC
Just keep still a minute boysC
Nellie hold your tongue a second and be silent with your toysC
Stop that barkin' now you whelpH2
Or I'll kick you till you yelpH2
Yes I hear it 'tis somebody that's callin' out for helpH2
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Get the lantern Jim and TomL
Mother keep the babies calmL
And we'll follow up that halloa and we'll see where it is fromL
'Tis a hairy sort of nightI2
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'TIS A HAIRY SORT OF NIGHT FOR A MAN TO FACE AND FIGHTI2
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For a man to face and fightI2
And the wind is blowin' Hang it Jimmy bring another lightI2
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Ah 'twas you then Johnny RichF2
Yelling out at such a pitchF2
For a decent man to help you while you fell into the ditchF2
'Tisn't quite the thing to sayG
But we ought to've let you layG
While your drunken carcass died a drinkin' water any wayG
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And to see you on my floorJ2
And to hear the way you snoreJ2
Now we've lugged you under shelter and the danger all is o'erS
And you lie there quite resignedI
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AND YOU LIE THERE QUITE RESIGNED WHISKY DEAF AND WHISKY BLINDI
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Whisky deaf and whisky blindI
And it will not hurt your feelin's so I guess I'll free my mindI
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Do you mind you thievin' dunceG
How you robbed my orchard onceG
Takin' all the biggest apples leavin' all the littlest runtsG
Do you mind my melon patchK2
How you gobbled the whole batchK2
Stacked the vines and sliced the greenest melons just to raise theL2
scratchK2
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Do you think you drunken wagM2
It was any thing to bragM2
To be cornered in my hen roost with two pullets in a bagM2
You are used to dirty densG
You have often slept in pensG
I've a mind to take you out there now and roost you with the hensG
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Do you call to mind with meE
How one night you and your threeE
Took my wagon all to pieces for to hang it on a treeE
How you hung it up you eelsG
Straight and steady by the wheelsG
I've a mind to take you out there now and hang you by your heelsG
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How the Fourth of last JulyN2
When you got a little highN2
You went back to Wilson's counter when you thought he wasn't nighN2
How he heard some specie chinkO2
And was on you in a winkO2
And you promised if he'd hush it that you never more would drinkO2
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Do you mind our temperance hallP2
How you're always sure to callP2
And recount your reformation with the biggest speech of allP2
How you talk and how you singZ
That the pledge is just the thingZ
How you sign it every winter and then smash it every springZ
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Do you mind how Jennie GreenQ2
Was as happy as a queenQ2
When you walked with her on Sunday looking sober straight and cleanQ2
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WHEN YOU WALKED WITH HER ON SUNDAY LOOKING SOBER STRAIGHT AND CLEANQ2
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How she cried out half her sightI2
When you staggered by next nightI2
Twice as dirty as a serpent and a hundred times as tightI2
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How our hearts with pleasure warmedR2
When your mother though it stormedR2
Run up here one day to tell us that you truly had reformedR2
How that very self same dayG
When upon her homeward wayG
She run on you where you'd hidden full three quarters o'er the bayG
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Oh you little whisky kegS2
Oh you horrid little eggS2
You're goin' to destruction with your swiftest foot and legS2
I've a mind to take you outJ
Underneath the water spoutJ
Just to rinse you up a little so you'll know what you're aboutJ
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But you've got a handsome eyeN2
And although I can't tell whyN2
Somethin' somewhere in you always lets you get another tryN2
So for all that I have saidG2
I'll not douse you but insteadG2
I will strip you I will rub you I will put you into bedG2

Will Carleton



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