Redemtion In A Cruel World Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABACDEF GHIH GJIKLFHMD| The world is an unfair place | A |
| Why was I brought to it | B |
| Was it to be rubbed on my face | A |
| The joy s of others | C |
| Who s out there to hear me | D |
| This struggle is too much | E |
| Indeed life you re so cruel | F |
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| What can a peasant like me do | G |
| When I m found worthy of thy punishment | H |
| I could only pray | I |
| for a savior to relief the punishment | H |
| - | |
| Come forth to my rescue | G |
| Oh my savior | J |
| But what price am I to pay | I |
| Surely nothing is free right | K |
| Yet again I seem to forget | L |
| That I m not redeemable | F |
| Nature chooses this punishment | H |
| Still I beg for redemption | M |
| Hopefully it s not too late for me | D |
Victoria James
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Poet's note: It portrays the struggle one passes through on a daily basis hoping for a savior to suddenly turn his destiny around..this poem is dedicated to everyone struggling and its an encouragement not to give up..I want people to look at the reality in this poem because most people wants to give up in life due to circumstances thinking that there’s no remedy for their future.
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