Freedom, Not Loss Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABB CCDD EEFF EEGH IIJJ| I dimmed my light to let them stay | A |
| I bent my soul I gave away | A |
| I swallowed silence bore the sting | B |
| Accepted less than I should bring | B |
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| Disrespect became my chain | C |
| One sided love a quiet pain | C |
| I stayed subdued to dodge the fight | D |
| But lost myself in endless night | D |
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| That version s gone it will not rise | E |
| I ve shed the mask unveiled the lies | E |
| To lose those blind to all my worth | F |
| Is freedom s gift a second birth | F |
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| No longer bound by hollow ties | E |
| I walk with truth no compromise | E |
| I ll never trade myself again | G |
| For fleeting bonds or shallow friends | H |
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| My spirit stands my voice is mine | I |
| A brighter path a clearer sign | I |
| The cost of peace was breaking free | J |
| And now I live authentically | J |
Vanessa Dizon Alvarez
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