So Long Love... Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCD EFG HIJK LMNJ OJPBQR| It's another night | A |
| Unlike the wonted times this one's a deviation | B |
| It's been a whole boresome day | C |
| After the hustles bustles of life | D |
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| The moon's out | E |
| It illuminates the little it can | F |
| With the help of the staring stars a somewhat unfathomable sight is captured | G |
| - | |
| But it doesn't really seem to pass a message | H |
| Rather it reincarnates a regrettable memory | I |
| You were niched in love | J |
| You wondered if time didn't take it's course and all of this was a mere facade | K |
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| Those moments you did spend together didn't seem as though it would birth this aftermath | L |
| Your eyes being closed the whole time | M |
| You teleported back in time and saw yr life in a retrospect | N |
| You couldn't help but cry to soothe yrself | J |
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| That obsolete voice of his whispers into your seemly unconscious mind | O |
| SO LONG LOVE | J |
| You both left the niche and wandered as solitary beings | P |
| Not minding the aftermath of the separation | B |
| Those last words of his still rings every night like an alarm in your ears | Q |
| It all started a night and ended another | R |
Tobi Olanipekun
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Denis Barasa: An apt description of the feeling of separation.Beautiful.
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