Additions Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: A BABBBBA CDEFFD GHIIH FHFFFH JHJJH IFIIF HAHHHA AAAAAA IFIIF JAJJJA HHHHHH KKHKKKH LHLLLH FIFFFI HIHHHI LALLLA BI BI BHBBBH FFLFFFFL

The Fire at Tranter Sweatley'sA
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THEY had long met o' Zundays her true love and sheB
And at junketings maypoles and flingsA
But she bode wi' a thirtover uncle and heB
Swore by noon and by night that her goodman should beB
Naibor Sweatley a gaffer oft weak at the kneeB
From taking o' sommat more cheerful than teaB
Who tranted and moved people's thingsA
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She cried O pray pity me Nought would he hearC
Then with wild rainy eyes she obeyedD
She chid when her Love was for clinking off wi' herE
The pa'son was told as the season drew nearF
To throw over pu'pit the names of the pe irF
As fitting one flesh to be madeD
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The wedding day dawned and the morning drew onG
The couple stood bridegroom and brideH
The evening was passed and when midnight had goneI
The folks horned out God save the King and anonI
The two home along gloomily hiedH
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The lover Tim Tankens mourned heart sick and drearF
To be thus of his darling deprivedH
He roamed in the dark ath'art field mound and mereF
And a'most without knowing it found himself nearF
The house of the tranter and now of his DearF
Where the lantern light showed 'em arrivedH
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The bride sought her cham'er so calm and so paleJ
That a Northern had thought her resignedH
But to eyes that had seen her in tide times of wealJ
Like the white cloud o' smoke the red battlefield's vailJ
That look spak' of havoc behindH
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The bridegroom yet laitered a beaker to drainI
Then reeled to the linhay for moreF
When the candle snoff kindled some chaff from his grainI
Flames spread and red vlankers wi' might and wi' mainI
And round beams thatch and chimley tun roarF
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Young Tim away yond rafted up by the lightH
Through brimble and underwood tearsA
Till he comes to the orchet when crooping thererightH
In the lewth of a codlin tree bivering wi' frightH
Wi' on'y her night rail to screen her from sightH
His lonesome young Barbree appearsA
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Her cwold little figure half naked he viewsA
Played about by the frolicsome breezeA
Her light tripping totties her ten little tooesA
All bare and besprinkled wi' Fall's chilly dewsA
While her great gallied eyes through her hair hanging looseA
Sheened as stars through a tardle o' treesA
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She eyed en and as when a weir hatch is drawnI
Her tears penned by terror aforeF
With a rushing of sobs in a shower were strawnI
Till her power to pour 'em seemed wasted and goneI
From the heft o' misfortune she boreF
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O Tim my own Tim I must call 'ee I willJ
All the world ha' turned round on me soA
Can you help her who loved 'ee though acting so illJ
Can you pity her misery feel for her stillJ
When worse than her body so quivering and chillJ
Is her heart in its winter o' woeA
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I think I mid almost ha' borne it she saidH
Had my griefs one by one come to handH
But O to be slave to thik husbird for breadH
And then upon top o' that driven to wedH
And then upon top o' that burnt out o' bedH
Is more than my nater can standH
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Tim's soul like a lion 'ithin en outsprungK
Tim had a great soul when his feelings were wrungK
Feel for 'ee dear Barbree he criedH
And his warm working jacket about her he flungK
Made a back horsed her up till behind him she clungK
Like a chiel on a gipsy her figure uphungK
By the sleeves that around her he tiedH
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Over piggeries and mixens and apples and hayL
They lumpered straight into the nightH
And finding bylong where a halter path layL
At dawn reached Tim's house on'y seen on their wayL
By a naibor or two who were up wi' the dayL
But they gathered no clue to the sightH
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Then tender Tim Tankens he searched here and thereF
For some garment to clothe her fair skinI
But though he had breeches and waistcoats to spareF
He had nothing quite seemly for Barbree to wearF
Who half shrammed to death stood and cried on a chairF
At the caddle she found herself inI
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There was one thing to do and that one thing he didH
He lent her some clouts of his ownI
And she took 'em perforce and while in 'em she slidH
Tim turned to the winder as modesty bidH
Thinking O that the picter my duty keeps hidH
To the sight o' my eyes mid be shownI
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In the tallet he stowed her there huddied she layL
Shortening sleeves legs and tails to her limbsA
But most o' the time in a mortal bad wayL
Well knowing that there'd be the divel to payL
If 'twere found that instead o' the elements' preyL
She was living in lodgings at Tim'sA
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Where's the tranter said men and boys where can er beB
Where's the tranter said Barbree aloneI
Where on e'th is the tranter said everybod y-
They sifted the dust of his perished roof treeB
And all they could find was a boneI
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Then the uncle cried Lord pray have mercy on meB
And in terror began to repentH
But before 'twas complete and till sure she was freeB
Barbree drew up her loft ladder tight turned her keyB
Tim bringing up breakfast and dinner and teaB
Till the news of her hiding got ventH
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Then followed the custom kept rout shout and flareF
Of a skimmington ride through the naiborhood ereF
Folk had proof o' wold Sweatley's decayL
Whereupon decent people all stood in a stareF
Saying Tim and his lodger should risk it and pairF
So he took her to church An' some laughing lads thereF
Cried to Tim After Sweatley She said I declareF
I stand as a maiden to dayL

Thomas Hardy



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