Additions Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: A BABBBBA CDEFFD GHIIH FHFFFH JHJJH IFIIF HAHHHA AAAAAA IFIIF JAJJJA HHHHHH KKHKKKH LHLLLH FIFFFI HIHHHI LALLLA BI BI BHBBBH FFLFFFFL| The Fire at Tranter Sweatley's | A |
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| THEY had long met o' Zundays her true love and she | B |
| And at junketings maypoles and flings | A |
| But she bode wi' a thirtover uncle and he | B |
| Swore by noon and by night that her goodman should be | B |
| Naibor Sweatley a gaffer oft weak at the knee | B |
| From taking o' sommat more cheerful than tea | B |
| Who tranted and moved people's things | A |
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| She cried O pray pity me Nought would he hear | C |
| Then with wild rainy eyes she obeyed | D |
| She chid when her Love was for clinking off wi' her | E |
| The pa'son was told as the season drew near | F |
| To throw over pu'pit the names of the pe ir | F |
| As fitting one flesh to be made | D |
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| The wedding day dawned and the morning drew on | G |
| The couple stood bridegroom and bride | H |
| The evening was passed and when midnight had gone | I |
| The folks horned out God save the King and anon | I |
| The two home along gloomily hied | H |
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| The lover Tim Tankens mourned heart sick and drear | F |
| To be thus of his darling deprived | H |
| He roamed in the dark ath'art field mound and mere | F |
| And a'most without knowing it found himself near | F |
| The house of the tranter and now of his Dear | F |
| Where the lantern light showed 'em arrived | H |
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| The bride sought her cham'er so calm and so pale | J |
| That a Northern had thought her resigned | H |
| But to eyes that had seen her in tide times of weal | J |
| Like the white cloud o' smoke the red battlefield's vail | J |
| That look spak' of havoc behind | H |
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| The bridegroom yet laitered a beaker to drain | I |
| Then reeled to the linhay for more | F |
| When the candle snoff kindled some chaff from his grain | I |
| Flames spread and red vlankers wi' might and wi' main | I |
| And round beams thatch and chimley tun roar | F |
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| Young Tim away yond rafted up by the light | H |
| Through brimble and underwood tears | A |
| Till he comes to the orchet when crooping thereright | H |
| In the lewth of a codlin tree bivering wi' fright | H |
| Wi' on'y her night rail to screen her from sight | H |
| His lonesome young Barbree appears | A |
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| Her cwold little figure half naked he views | A |
| Played about by the frolicsome breeze | A |
| Her light tripping totties her ten little tooes | A |
| All bare and besprinkled wi' Fall's chilly dews | A |
| While her great gallied eyes through her hair hanging loose | A |
| Sheened as stars through a tardle o' trees | A |
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| She eyed en and as when a weir hatch is drawn | I |
| Her tears penned by terror afore | F |
| With a rushing of sobs in a shower were strawn | I |
| Till her power to pour 'em seemed wasted and gone | I |
| From the heft o' misfortune she bore | F |
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| O Tim my own Tim I must call 'ee I will | J |
| All the world ha' turned round on me so | A |
| Can you help her who loved 'ee though acting so ill | J |
| Can you pity her misery feel for her still | J |
| When worse than her body so quivering and chill | J |
| Is her heart in its winter o' woe | A |
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| I think I mid almost ha' borne it she said | H |
| Had my griefs one by one come to hand | H |
| But O to be slave to thik husbird for bread | H |
| And then upon top o' that driven to wed | H |
| And then upon top o' that burnt out o' bed | H |
| Is more than my nater can stand | H |
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| Tim's soul like a lion 'ithin en outsprung | K |
| Tim had a great soul when his feelings were wrung | K |
| Feel for 'ee dear Barbree he cried | H |
| And his warm working jacket about her he flung | K |
| Made a back horsed her up till behind him she clung | K |
| Like a chiel on a gipsy her figure uphung | K |
| By the sleeves that around her he tied | H |
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| Over piggeries and mixens and apples and hay | L |
| They lumpered straight into the night | H |
| And finding bylong where a halter path lay | L |
| At dawn reached Tim's house on'y seen on their way | L |
| By a naibor or two who were up wi' the day | L |
| But they gathered no clue to the sight | H |
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| Then tender Tim Tankens he searched here and there | F |
| For some garment to clothe her fair skin | I |
| But though he had breeches and waistcoats to spare | F |
| He had nothing quite seemly for Barbree to wear | F |
| Who half shrammed to death stood and cried on a chair | F |
| At the caddle she found herself in | I |
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| There was one thing to do and that one thing he did | H |
| He lent her some clouts of his own | I |
| And she took 'em perforce and while in 'em she slid | H |
| Tim turned to the winder as modesty bid | H |
| Thinking O that the picter my duty keeps hid | H |
| To the sight o' my eyes mid be shown | I |
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| In the tallet he stowed her there huddied she lay | L |
| Shortening sleeves legs and tails to her limbs | A |
| But most o' the time in a mortal bad way | L |
| Well knowing that there'd be the divel to pay | L |
| If 'twere found that instead o' the elements' prey | L |
| She was living in lodgings at Tim's | A |
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| Where's the tranter said men and boys where can er be | B |
| Where's the tranter said Barbree alone | I |
| Where on e'th is the tranter said everybod y | - |
| They sifted the dust of his perished roof tree | B |
| And all they could find was a bone | I |
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| Then the uncle cried Lord pray have mercy on me | B |
| And in terror began to repent | H |
| But before 'twas complete and till sure she was free | B |
| Barbree drew up her loft ladder tight turned her key | B |
| Tim bringing up breakfast and dinner and tea | B |
| Till the news of her hiding got vent | H |
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| Then followed the custom kept rout shout and flare | F |
| Of a skimmington ride through the naiborhood ere | F |
| Folk had proof o' wold Sweatley's decay | L |
| Whereupon decent people all stood in a stare | F |
| Saying Tim and his lodger should risk it and pair | F |
| So he took her to church An' some laughing lads there | F |
| Cried to Tim After Sweatley She said I declare | F |
| I stand as a maiden to day | L |
Thomas Hardy
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