A Tragic Dance Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDDEFGBH IJKLMANOPQ EHRDSTDTTU VDTWXOur nation is dancing to the grave | A |
A tragic dance I saw sorrowfully started | B |
In the previous regime now intensified | C |
With impunity the dance we drummers | D |
Struggled like fire extinguishers | D |
On queue to quench during elections | E |
Has now got escalated | F |
We jubilated like lunatics on a joyful journey | G |
When our votes were cast and counted | B |
We chanted political paean when APC won | H |
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But our dance is now out of the flying pan into the fire | I |
Oh great people of my fathers' Land | J |
We labour for radical changes | K |
But what kind of changes are we seeing | L |
Changing from worse to worst | M |
Our nation is dancing to the grave | A |
A sweet sorrowful dance we drum and | N |
Watch political dancers dance and twist their tongue | O |
Leaving us drummers with painful tales | P |
Deaths and hunger as pay for the price drummed | Q |
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The dancers happily dance across nations | E |
Importing goods unbeneficial to our nation | H |
Building beautiful bungalows abroad | R |
Leaving our home as dirty as the market of leftovers | D |
Saving trillions of thousands in foreign banks | S |
We sadly drum lament and die shamefully | T |
Oh patriotic drummers | D |
Let us come together and quell | T |
This tragic dance as we are still | T |
With our permanent voters card | U |
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But no more votes for old age | V |
Since our elders are total failures | D |
We are not too young to rule | T |
Let us make a move | W |
And change this tragic dance | X |
Sughnen Kwaghkar
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 07/20/2020
Poet's note: This poem was written in the year 2016, as a Lamentations to poor leadership and how we struggled to change the political party that has ruled our country for a long time without satisfying the masses. Just after a year of our struggle to change, we realized our national challenges deteriorated; as we recorded issues of killings, fulanis' attacks on other tribes, among others. Those issues stirred the idea of writing this poem. The poem present the experience of the nation where the dancers (leaders) are happily enjoying while the drummers (electorates) are suffering, dancers build beautiful hotels and house in foreign country while their country's building are dilapidated. The poem encouraged the youths to rise up and participate in the governance of their country since the elders has failed woefully.
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