The Revenge Of Hamish Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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It was three slim does and a ten tined buck in the bracken layA
And all of a sudden the sinister smell of a manB
Awaft on a wind shift wavered and ranB
Down the hill side and sifted along through the bracken and passed that wayA
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Then Nan got a tremble at nostril she was the daintiest doeC
In the print of her velvet flank on the velvet fernD
She reared and rounded her ears in turnD
Then the buck leapt up and his head as a king's to a crown did goC
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Full high in the breeze and he stood as if Death had the form of a deerE
And the two slim does long lazily stretching aroseF
For their day dream slowlier came to a closeG
Till they woke and were still breath bound with waiting and wonder and fearE
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Then Alan the huntsman sprang over the hillock the hounds shot byH
The does and the ten tined buck made a marvellous boundI
The hounds swept after with never a soundI
But Alan loud winded his horn in sign that the quarry was nighH
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For at dawn of that day proud Maclean of Lochbuy to the hunt had waxed wildJ
And he cursed at old Alan till Alan fared off with the houndsK
For to drive him the deer to the lower glen groundsK
I will kill a red deer quoth Maclean in the sight of the wifeL
and the childJ
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So gayly he paced with the wife and the child to his chosen standM
But he hurried tall Hamish the henchman ahead Go turnD
Cried Maclean if the deer seek to cross to the burnD
Do thou turn them to me nor fail lest thy back be red as thy handM
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Now hard fortuned Hamish half blown of his breath with the heightN
of the hillO
Was white in the face when the ten tined buck and the doesP
Drew leaping to burn ward huskily roseF
His shouts and his nether lip twitched and his legs were o'er weakQ
for his willO
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So the deer darted lightly by Hamish and bounded away to the burnD
But Maclean never bating his watch tarried waiting belowC
Still Hamish hung heavy with fear for to goC
All the space of an hour then he went and his face was greenish and sternD
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And his eye sat back in the socket and shrunken the eyeballs shoneR
As withdrawn from a vision of deeds it were shame to seeS
Now now grim henchman what is't with theeS
Brake Maclean and his wrath rose red as a beacon the wind hath upblownR
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Three does and a ten tined buck made out spoke Hamish full mildJ
And I ran for to turn but my breath it was blown and they passedT
I was weak for ye called ere I broke me my fastT
Cried Maclean Now a ten tined buck in the sight of the wife and the childJ
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I had killed if the gluttonous kern had not wrought me a snail's own wrongU
Then he sounded and down came kinsmen and clansmen allV
Ten blows for ten tine on his back let fallV
And reckon no stroke if the blood follow not at the bite of thongU
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So Hamish made bare and took him his strokes at the last he smiledJ
Now I'll to the burn quoth Maclean for it still may beS
If a slimmer paunched henchman will hurry with meS
I shall kill me the ten tined buck for a gift to the wife and the childJ
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Then the clansmen departed by this path and that and over the hillO
Sped Maclean with an outward wrath for an inward shameW
And that place of the lashing full quiet becameW
And the wife and the child stood sad and bloody backed Hamish sat stillO
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But look red Hamish has risen quick about and about turns heS
There is none betwixt me and the crag top he screams under breathX
Then livid as Lazarus lately from deathX
He snatches the child from the mother and clambers the crag toward the seaS
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Now the mother drops breath she is dumb and her heart goes dead for a spaceY
Till the motherhood mistress of death shrieks shrieks through the glenR
And that place of the lashing is live with menR
And Maclean and the gillie that told him dash up in a desperate raceY
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Not a breath's time for asking an eye glance reveals all the tale untoldZ
They follow mad Hamish afar up the crag toward the seaS
And the lady cries Clansmen run for a feeS
Yon castle and lands to the two first hands that shall hook him and holdZ
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Fast Hamish back from the brink and ever she flies up the steepA2
And the clansmen pant and they sweat and they jostle and strainR
But mother 'tis vain but father 'tis vainR
Stern Hamish stands bold on the brink and dangles the child o'er the deepA2
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Now a faintness falls on the men that run and they all stand stillO
And the wife prays Hamish as if he were God on her kneesB2
Crying Hamish O Hamish but please but pleaseB2
For to spare him and Hamish still dangles the child with a wavering willO
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On a sudden he turns with a sea hawk scream and a gibe and a songU
Cries So I will spare ye the child if in sight of ye allV
Ten blows on Maclean's bare back shall fallV
And ye reckon no stroke if the blood follow not at the bite of the thongU
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Then Maclean he set hardly his tooth to his lip that his tooth was redC2
Breathed short for a space said Nay but it never shall beS
Let me hurl off the damnable hound in the seaS
But the wife Can Hamish go fish us the child from the sea if deadC2
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Say yea Let them lash ME Hamish Nay HusbandD2
the lashing will healE2
But oh who will heal me the bonny sweet bairn in his graveF2
Could ye cure me my heart with the death of a knaveF2
Quick Love I will bare thee so kneel Then Maclean 'gan slowlyS
to kneelE2
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With never a word till presently downward he jerked to the earthG2
Then the henchman he that smote Hamish would tremble and lagH2
Strike hard quoth Hamish full stern from the cragH2
Then he struck him and One sang Hamish and danced with the childJ
in his mirthG2
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And no man spake beside Hamish he counted each stroke with a songH2
When the last stroke fell then he moved him a pace down the heightN
And he held forth the child in the heartaching sightN
Of the mother and looked all pitiful grave as repenting a wrongH2
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And there as the motherly arms stretched out with the thanksgiving prayerI2
And there as the mother crept up with a fearful swift paceY
Till her finger nigh felt of the bairnie's faceY
In a flash fierce Hamish turned round and lifted the child in the airI2
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And sprang with the child in his arms from the horrible height in the seaS
Shrill screeching Revenge in the wind rush and pallid MacleanR
Age feeble with anger and impotent painR
Crawled up on the crag and lay flat and locked hold of dead rootsJ2
of a treeS
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And gazed hungrily o'er and the blood from his back drip drippedK2
in the brineR
And a sea hawk flung down a skeleton fish as he flewL2
And the mother stared white on the waste of blueL2
And the wind drove a cloud to seaward and the sun began to shineR
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BaltimoreM2

Sidney Lanier



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