The Heavenly Message Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABBCCDDCCEEFFGGHHII JJKKLLMMGGNNOOPPMMQQ RRSSQQEETTHHCCUVWWWW EEXXYYXXXXCCRRZA2XXZ ZXXB2B2XXB2B2C2C2EEB 2D2XXE2E2F2F2C2C2C2C 2RRG2G2H2H2XXI2I2C2C 2CCGGC2C2J2J2C2C2XXC 2C2CCC2C2CCCCCCXXB2B 2C2C2MMMMThe moon is not as far as we are told | A |
The universe is not so very old | A |
The stars are not suns to earth shall they fall | B |
Those shining daily circling spheres are small | B |
And children to the sun and moon The sun | C |
Which like them daily round the earth does run | C |
The moon a little slower round earth goes | D |
Every day and the very same size shows | D |
Herself to be with her husband the sun | C |
For he which tells us when the day is done | C |
Is also smaller than earth and quite near | E |
For it s dark when he hides behind earth s sphere | E |
And only then does the moon shine clear bright | F |
Proving thereby that it has its own light | F |
One can see its light slowly revolving | G |
One hundred and eighty degrees shining | G |
Always and always it is going round | H |
Like a clock ticking but without a sound | H |
The sun is higher than the moon and yet | I |
Is seen as the same size for they are set | I |
Together in the sky and they are far | J |
But not as imagined And every star | J |
Fixed above them is somewhat higher still | K |
At the same height for together they fill | K |
Our vision above going round about | L |
The earth at the same time But further out | L |
No one can see since there is nothing there | M |
No void of space no mysterious air | M |
No light no fire no gas nor solid thing | G |
Nothing at all for our imagining | G |
And since these things be so which our eyes see | N |
A display of lights which God did decree | N |
In the heavens how then can the earth s skies | O |
Be so much wider How so vast in size | O |
For the stars which were made to be seen count | P |
Numbering in thousands is their amount | P |
How can earth not to the heavens compare | M |
How can the heavens have much room to spare | M |
For the heavens only mean the earth s sky | Q |
And they re not heavens where the earth does lie | Q |
Else the heavens would then not be above | R |
For the stars rotate as if they all love | R |
The earth for to it they are bound for it | S |
They are thus the skies have a ceiling lit | S |
The stars are not far away but they re high | Q |
With sun and moon they make a deeper sky | Q |
Earth s second heaven where no atmosphere | E |
Exists and which ends where they do appear | E |
The fixed stars are the highest things that swim | T |
In the universe s outermost rim | T |
Waters above the heavens turning round | H |
From east to west are furthest from the ground | H |
And swirling make the sun and moon s motion | C |
As if they were like ships on an ocean | C |
So moved they are by surrounding forces | U |
And so they run daily on their courses | V |
The stars themselves are in the waters flow | W |
And hence they twinkle with flickering glow | W |
But the wandering stars that are below | W |
Are free to move whichever way they go | W |
Beneath these planets is the atmosphere | E |
Herein the clouds form where the LORD is near | E |
The LORD who is God he rides upon clouds | X |
And like a veil they his Spirit enshrouds | X |
This first heaven is for his chariot | Y |
Through its thick dark mist he breaks the quiet | Y |
He walks on the wings of the wind he whirls | X |
About the world beneath the sparkling pearls | X |
The lightnings are the thunders of his voice | X |
Which though they may hurt or kill I rejoice | X |
The meek in heart God is yet a lion | C |
And he roars from the north pole from Sion | C |
He sends forth his command from there above | R |
In the north celestial pole dwells sweet love | R |
There is the hope of hearts Jerusalem | Z |
Like a dream like an untouchable gem | A2 |
Its immaterial matter is ablaze | X |
Gold palaces burn in endless amaze | X |
God does nothing except in his wisdom | Z |
In love in chastening for his kingdom | Z |
And he burns up the wicked with arrows | X |
Flames from his mouth and bright light he bellows | X |
For he is the mighty LORD of thunder | B2 |
The true God with Jesus Son of wonder | B2 |
He casts stones from heaven as he pleases | X |
And with his hand a lightning sword seizes | X |
Angels chariots and horses of fire | B2 |
He wields in his will to fulfill desire | B2 |
Swifter than eagles swift as the whirlwind | C2 |
Chariots and horses fly and exscind | C2 |
The wicked He casts a glittering spear | E |
And ball lightning in mystery floats near | E |
His anger and rebuke are flames of fire | B2 |
Yet born of music softer than a lyre | D2 |
His Spirit is love softer than the sea | X |
Yet from waves tempest tossed the wicked flee | X |
Wrath is as the wind on a sea of calm | E2 |
Love deadly but at heart a healing balm | E2 |
In the first heaven of clouds God does roam | F2 |
Yet the north celestial pole is his home | F2 |
To Jerusalem the pure in spirit | C2 |
Go and there with the King of kings they sit | C2 |
In his bosom dwelling and therein lit | C2 |
Shining like the sun and as golden writ | C2 |
In his shining eyes speak eternal love | R |
Utter words in the sweetness of the Dove | R |
The LORD S children in their childlikeness gleam | G2 |
As if they were his deep celestial dream | G2 |
But better than any phantom image | H2 |
They ever make the smiles of his visage | H2 |
Their joy is not to be pleased but to please | X |
Thus Lord Jesus died for them to appease | X |
The wrath of God which they did not deserve | I2 |
For unknowingly they did Satan serve | I2 |
For though their flesh sinned their spirit did not | C2 |
Thus for God to distinguish the bad lot | C2 |
From the good and not in rage against sin | C |
Commit injustice Jesus died and in | C |
Him we died as perfectly resisting | G |
Sin for his flesh was the representing | G |
Of us all as perfectly obedient | C2 |
For that righteousness was our true intent | C2 |
For Satan made our white appear as black | J2 |
But Jesus took that sin and changed it back | J2 |
Bearing our sin meant interpreting it | C2 |
As it really is as righteousness lit | C2 |
Up in God the bright Sun of righteousness | X |
Showing us to God as pure in whiteness | X |
Through his own spotless grand obedient act | C2 |
For his death showed our innocence as fact | C2 |
In the heart of God to his emotion | C |
To still him to calm the enraged ocean | C |
That God who is love a fiery Spirit | C2 |
Would not unjustly send into the pit | C2 |
His own children who were entangled in | C |
With their flesh the wicked doers own sin | C |
That there might be a true separation | C |
In the heart of God through the elation | C |
Of seeing in Jesus his own children | C |
As spotless as he and as distinct then | C |
As he is from the wicked For Jesus | X |
The offering for his children pleases | X |
The heart of God in a perfect manner | B2 |
And thus Christ s cross is our only banner | B2 |
Behold the pain that made crimson sin white | C2 |
That interpreted darkness as pure light | C2 |
Behold the pain the banner does declare | M |
And into this banner of Christ s cross stare | M |
Gaze till sin is stripped naked and made fair | M |
Till you see yourself as righteousness there | M |
Richard Paulson
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