5:05 Today Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis


I ask you to release me from the promise that I madeA
You said you re free to go at todayB
And as the seconds passed it seemed more like a dayB
Sweetheart our world ended at todayB
It hurt so bad inside the pain won t go awayB
I knew we d never recover from todayB
I thought it was all over I got up to walk awayB
I knew theirs no returning from TodayB
But then you changed your mind you said the hell I willC
You made me a promise and I hold you to it stillC
You said I won t release you I won t let you walk awayB
You owe me a promise please don t walk awayB
You said you would try dear don t wait another dayB
The clock is ticking on our world From todayB
Let s start our life over sweetheart let s start todayB
Let s say our love started at todayB

Richard Martin
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 09/21/2022

Poet's note: I started to break up with a girlfriend. [email protected]


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