Withdrawn Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABC DEFF GHBI JBAB BBKL BJBBJ MHBNB OAJ PQOB DCPSlowly slowly | A |
Carefree and carelessly | A |
You are driving her back to | B |
her shell | C |
- | |
Little by little | D |
She keeps trying to make | E |
You see the light of her emotions | F |
Yet you tried to justify your actions | F |
- | |
You blatantly turn your eyes | G |
Away from her | H |
Questioning her naivety | B |
You stood as strong as a rock | I |
- | |
Umoved and unshaken | J |
Pride and ego rule over your heart | B |
Like the water over the sea | A |
Ignoring the voice of her protest | B |
- | |
The verdict is pronounced | B |
Unjust judgment judged | B |
By a just king | K |
He unknowingly pushed her off the cliff | L |
- | |
She closed her eyes tight | B |
And prayed to heaven | J |
She surrendered yet pained | B |
The gentle breeze lamented | B |
Heaven wept bitterly for its last creation | J |
- | |
She never express herself again | M |
Her resentment and anger | H |
Never saw the light of day | B |
Her pains and hurts are locked up | N |
in the Prison of her pride | B |
- | |
The depth of her pain | O |
Is as deep as the sea | A |
Which will remain hidden | J |
- | |
Nuturing her emotions alone | P |
Her scars take her back to the | Q |
memory lane | O |
It reminds her that it's a man's world | B |
- | |
It hurts that she is just a damsel | D |
Who will remain in her shell | C |
She is totally alone | P |
Queen Shalom Ebere Anthony
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 09/03/2020
Poet's note: The poem express the travails and struggles a girl was going through. She gave her all to man, a misunderstanding ensued in their relationship and she was judged and misunderstood by the love of her life. The aftermath of the man's action was the girl shutting off her emotions from him and the world, she was willing to accept whatever comes her way but never revealing her true emotions. She believes it's a man world and a woman's emotions has no place to stay.
The poet persona wrote this poem out of the pain she felt when she was judged and misunderstood by the love of her life.
The feeling evoke in this poem is that of sadness, pain, loneliness and total surrender to one's fate.
Writing this poem relieved my pains and loneliness. This poem serves as my healing balm.
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Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke : The poem "WITHDRAWN" is touchy and intriguing. The Poet persona decries the emotional torture she is going through in the hands of her lover. And each time she tries to make him understand, he pays deaf ears to her words. Pride and ego take hold of him. Do men actually have a destructive pride? Maybe he has his reasons for ignoring her excuses. Just hope the Poet persona will understand that love is full of sacrifices. How long will you be withdrawn in the prison of your emotions? Love conquers it all. More grace to you my Poet.
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