The Lacuna Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis


In the twinkle of an eyesA
Things fall into piecesB
The conflict of choiceC
The battle of supremacyD
Hearts break closely apartE
Originality carefully lostF
Relation ignored and betrayedG
Sweet pain a guiding forceH
No balm in Gilead can healI
This beautiful woundJ
The Gap is widerK
With no bridge to hold itL
If originality is not foundJ
Decisions and actions not employedM
This forbidden fateN
Will prevail and ruleO

Queen Shalom Ebere Anthony
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 10/28/2020

Poet's note: The Poem describes the gap in relationship which could lead to break up resulting from little things from the people involve and if care is not taken it could lead to a fatal and painful end. The poem explains some of the reasons for this gap and had thus offered a solution at the last stanza on how to save the relationship.


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Write your comment about The Lacuna poem by Queen Shalom Ebere Anthony

Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke : This poem is so touchy and emotional. Your choice of words triggers fear, hurts and neglects from the Lover who has abandoned his woman for a while. Maybe the Lover is burdened with life circumstances that has tied him down. The struggles of man goes with painful laugher.
Just wish the Poet Persona will understand that life isn't rosy for the man. I strongly believe that things will fall in pleasant places soon.

Kudos to the Poet Persona. This poem will stand the test of time. More grace to your Muse great Poet. Am happy the woman you are becoming.
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