The Lacuna Poem Rhyme Scheme and AnalysisRhyme Scheme: ABCD EFGH IJKL JMNO
|In the twinkle of an eyes||A|
|Things fall into pieces||B|
|The conflict of choice||C|
|The battle of supremacy||D|
|Hearts break closely apart||E|
|Originality carefully lost||F|
|Relation ignored and betrayed||G|
|Sweet pain a guiding force||H|
|No balm in Gilead can heal||I|
|This beautiful wound||J|
|The Gap is wider||K|
|With no bridge to hold it||L|
|If originality is not found||J|
|Decisions and actions not employed||M|
|This forbidden fate||N|
|Will prevail and rule||O|
Queen Shalom Ebere Anthony
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 10/28/2020
Poet's note: The Poem describes the gap in relationship which could lead to break up resulting from little things from the people involve and if care is not taken it could lead to a fatal and painful end. The poem explains some of the reasons for this gap and had thus offered a solution at the last stanza on how to save the relationship.
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Write your comment about The Lacuna poem by Queen Shalom Ebere Anthony
Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke : This poem is so touchy and emotional. Your choice of words triggers fear, hurts and neglects from the Lover who has abandoned his woman for a while. Maybe the Lover is burdened with life circumstances that has tied him down. The struggles of man goes with painful laugher.
Just wish the Poet Persona will understand that life isn't rosy for the man. I strongly believe that things will fall in pleasant places soon.
Kudos to the Poet Persona. This poem will stand the test of time. More grace to your Muse great Poet. Am happy the woman you are becoming.