Jaja's Kids Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDAECFGHIJKL

With sunken eyes plastered on tribal marked facesA
The oldest held Ola who held his twinB
Today's return from school tasted bitterC
In deafening silence they trodded back homeD
In gloom and black Mama embraced her offspringsA
She knew the dreaded day had come father's day againE
Alas the query she flees from arrives as her own early August visitorC
Not at the doorstep but intimately trapped in the innocent bodies she begotF
Filled with spite she spits the name that burns her tongue JajaG
By now the story was etched on the lips of The oldestH
In the same hue what follows is he would be back soon from his journey to afarI
She knew Ola and his twin will join her in waiting for the bus that never arrivedJ
The intense tone of certainty in Mama's voice convinced them like me years agoK
But the months passed and still they waitedL

Obagha Chiamaka
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 12/16/2022

Poet's note: This poem was written in response to a writing prompt. However, I find myself connecting to the struggles of a single parent. I always wonder what they tell their kids when they're innocent children confront them with questions that remind them of so much. I really like this poem. It should be my second favorite.




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