You Asked How (formerly Even Now She Is Turning, Saying Everything I Always Wanted Her To Say) Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFG HGIJKLM NOPQRSTUMVWVEX

At the end there were strawsA
in her glove compartment I'd split them openB
to taste the familiar bitter residue near the endC
I ate all her Percodans hungry to knowD
how far they could take meE
A bottle of red wine each night moved her alongF
as she wrote I feel too much again and againG
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You asked how and I said Suicide and you askedH
how and I said An overdose and thenG
she shot herself and your eyes filledI
with wonder so I added In the chest so youJ
wouldn't thinkK
her face was gone and it mattered somehowL
that you knew thisM
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Every year I'm eight years old and the worldN
is no longer safe Our phone becomes unlisted our mailO
is kept in a box at the post officeP
and my mother tells me alwaysQ
leave a light on so it seemsR
someone is home She finds a copS
for her next boyfriend his hairT
greasy pushed back with his fingers He lets me playU
with his service revolver while they kissM
on the couch Cars slowly fill the windows and I aimV
making the noise with my mouth in case it's themW
and when his back is hunched over her I aimV
between his shoulder blades silentlyE
in case it's himX

Nick Flynn



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