Forever Further Down The Road Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABC DEC FGC HHC HFC IJC BHC KLC BMC NOHC

I look to you from eye to eyeA
But only see your backB
Forever further down the roadC
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Love marches feeling side by sideD
But steps from back to frontE
Forever further down the roadC
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The gap between becomes a moatF
That has no beam to spanG
Forever down the roadC
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No eye to eye no beams or motesH
Just woody tear filled orbsH
Forever down the roadC
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But arms length can be very closeH
And time dries out that moatF
Forever further down the roadC
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And then you fade you re out of sightI
But I am not aloneJ
Forever down the roadC
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As you my new now see my backB
Receive my backward wordsH
Forever down the roadC
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You and I in syncopationK
Our places now reversedL
Forever further down the roadC
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You find it strange to see my backB
Don t let your marching falterM
Forever down the roadC
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Remember this your time has comeN
In sadness I m content to knowO
Your back I ll never seeH
Further down your roadC

Neil Garrod
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 02/17/2023

Poet's note: A reflection on parenthood and how one moves from trailing child to leading parent.




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