Forever Further Down The Road Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABC DEC FGC HHC HFC IJC BHC KLC BMC NOHCI look to you from eye to eye | A |
But only see your back | B |
Forever further down the road | C |
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Love marches feeling side by side | D |
But steps from back to front | E |
Forever further down the road | C |
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The gap between becomes a moat | F |
That has no beam to span | G |
Forever down the road | C |
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No eye to eye no beams or motes | H |
Just woody tear filled orbs | H |
Forever down the road | C |
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But arms length can be very close | H |
And time dries out that moat | F |
Forever further down the road | C |
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And then you fade you re out of sight | I |
But I am not alone | J |
Forever down the road | C |
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As you my new now see my back | B |
Receive my backward words | H |
Forever down the road | C |
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You and I in syncopation | K |
Our places now reversed | L |
Forever further down the road | C |
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You find it strange to see my back | B |
Don t let your marching falter | M |
Forever down the road | C |
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Remember this your time has come | N |
In sadness I m content to know | O |
Your back I ll never see | H |
Further down your road | C |
Neil Garrod
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 02/17/2023
Poet's note: A reflection on parenthood and how one moves from trailing child to leading parent.
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