Defeated! Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDB AEEEE AFFFF AAAGG AHHHH I| I feel defeated | A |
| I can't soldier on | B |
| All my strength is gone | C |
| Here I am wandering in the losers' zone | D |
| I've lost faith in where my hope was hinged upon | B |
| - | |
| I feel defeated | A |
| I discern the situation I'm in | E |
| Failure has locked me in | E |
| As it had locked all in before it has locked me in | E |
| What can I do this is the world we are living in | E |
| - | |
| I feel defeated | A |
| I can't hold on any longer | F |
| My will isn't getting any stronger | F |
| They say what doesn't kill me makes me stronger | F |
| But I can't take it any longer | F |
| - | |
| I feel defeated | A |
| I feel defeated god damn I swear I feel defeated | A |
| What can one do when he feels defeated | A |
| I suggest you keep on fighting till you feel undefeated | G |
| That way I guarantee you a feeling of being undefeated | G |
| - | |
| I felt defeated | A |
| But now I feel victorious | H |
| They gave me advice that has made me vicious | H |
| Vicious against defeat and now they are curious | H |
| I've broken the chains of defeat and this has made my haters furious | H |
| - | |
| THE END | I |
Mthandazo Mkhwananzi
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