My Star Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AABBCCDEFFGGCCHH IIGGBBAA

When all my dreams had faded awayA
when all my thoughts had gone astrayA
you suddenly came to rescue meB
and brought me back to where I should beB
you help me reach the unreachable starC
and heal my heart from a previous scarC
you added and strengthened my confidenceD
you held me up to reach the heavensE
It was indeed great and amazingF
I had everything I want but something s still missingF
I looked at you then I knewG
you re all I need and all my dreams will come trueG
but I realize you are farC
harder to reach than the farthest starC
I stepped beak and I fallH
I thought you d catch me so your name I callH
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Sad to know you weren t thereI
in my lonely nights and great despairI
sad to say I could never have youG
because I was careless and my love was so trueG
and now I m back to my old sanityB
my fame is in deep vanityB
for the man I love had faded awayA
and caused my thoughts to go astrayA

Mosh Wolf
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 02/21/2021

Poet's note: Memory




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