On The Edge Of Eternity Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCD EFAGHI JHKL MNOPK QL

We are but shadows beneath the Sun's goldenA
rays Created from dust we are the Earth ForeverB
trapped and forced to survive in the HellC
we have constructed for ourselvesD
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There is great evil in the forest Will a torchE
light for us the way to Truth Why even bother toF
surely dishonor yourself in a blaze of forgottenA
promises The flame will be extinguished beforeG
it even has enough time to emit any warmth to theH
seekers of knowledgeI
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Isolated yet surrounded by mirror images ofJ
themselves our world leaders convey to us aH
master plan of suicide and destruction while weK
applaud salute and wave banners of acceptanceL
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There will not be another dawn The Sun willM
never light up the desolate emptiness of spaceN
again for we have seen our last sunset inhaledO
our last breath of fresh air prayed our lastP
prayer of forgiveness and finallyK
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fulfilled our sad destiny by truly destroyingQ
ourselves with greed lust and ignoranceL
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Michael Mcguire
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 03/26/2026



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