The Promise Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABC DEF GHI JDK

I remember the promise you made in JuneA
You were fluting softly my darlingB
I was swept away by the Cuban balladC
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You were sitting on a flat rock by the seaD
I was standing beside you on the sandE
The waves were moving towards the shoreF
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You looked elegant in the long white dressG
I told you that I would always love youH
The words I spoke came from my heartI
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You promised to love me until you dieJ
The gusty wind took away your love for meD
And you broke the promise you madeK

Marlon Pitter
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 12/01/2024



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