Immortal Love 2 Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABC DEF GHI JKL MNO PEQ IRI HPP FPP JKS TPA UPA VJW

I was the only being on earth existing with immortal loveA
For millennia I sought true love that could not dieB
But this kind of love did not exist on the planetC
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The love of the daughters of earth could not last foreverD
They were mortals and I was an immortal beingE
I knew that the love I had been searching for would come one dayF
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I awaited the arrival of a compatible being with love like mineG
How I wanted to get out of this dying worldH
Then at last I saw an advanced starship descending slowlyI
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An alien appeared on the ground in a beam of lightJ
She had the likeness of an earthly womanK
But her beauty far exceeded that of human speciesL
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The night breeze was blowing through her long flowing hairM
Her crown sparkled like transparent crystalN
She was wearing a long heelless bootie and a golden cloakO
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The fire of immortal love was in her grey eyesP
I was stunned by the sight of the extra terrestrial beingE
My heart was palpitating but my love was strongQ
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I walked out into the clear so she could see meI
She stood there for a while and looked aroundR
And then she walked gracefully towards meI
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The moment we met she knew that I was not from this worldH
She introduced herself as Xenia of GalaxiaP
And she spoke softly with the voice of a goddessP
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She came from an obscured planet ten thousand light years awayF
It was in a galaxy near the border of the universeP
The inhabitants of her world enjoyed perfect peaceP
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Her starship was capable of flying at the speed of lightJ
She travelled for ten thousand years to reach this constellationK
Time did not affect her for she had immortal lifeS
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Her ardent love had neither beginning nor endT
She came here in search of a life form with love like hersP
And she could tell that my love was an unending loveA
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We were from different worlds located far apartU
Most surprisingly we were compatible beingsP
I finally found a supernatural entity with immortal loveA
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She asked me to go with her to her world and I agreedV
We disappeared as we walked into the beam of lightJ
The starship ascended the cloud and it flew away in a flashW

Marlon Pitter
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