My Mother's Body Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: A BCDEF GHIJK LMNOP QRSTG UVWXY ZTA2NT OB2C2D2E2 F2G2TH2O F2F2I2J2U OF2K2 L2M2N2 XOJ O2P2Q2 Q2F2F2 R2F2V S2TF2 OF2T BOT2 U2V2U2 F2W2F2 X2V2L2 F2PO PY2O F2J2Z2 F2OT A3B3P F2GC3 D3F2F2 E3GO BM2XG F3U2GG3 OGB3H3 B3S2PF2 F2OXI3 J3F2QT TOF2K3 L3F2OT2 GM3

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The dark socket of the yearB
the pit the cave where the sun lies downC
and threatens never to riseD
when despair descends softly as the snowE
covering all paths and choking roadsF
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then hawkfaced pain seized youG
threw you so you fell with a sharpH
cry a knife tearing a bolt of silkI
My father heard the crash but paidJ
no mind napping after lunchK
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yet fifteen hundred miles northL
I heard and dropped a dishM
Your pain sunk talons in my skullN
and crouched there cawing heavyO
as a great vessel filled with waterP
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oil or blood till suddenly next dayQ
the weight lifted and I knew your mindR
had guttered out like the ChanukahS
candles that burn so fast weepingT
veils of wax down the chanukiyaG
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Those candles were laid outU
friends invited ingredients boughtV
for latkes and apple pancakesW
that holiday for liberationX
and the winter solsticeY
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when tops turn like little planetsZ
Shall you have all or nothingT
take half or pass by untouchedA2
Nothing you got Nun said the dreydlN
as the room stopped spinningT
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The angel folded you up like laundryO
your body thin as an empty dressB2
Your clothes were curtainsC2
hanging on the window of what hadD2
been your flesh and now was glassE2
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Outside in Florida shopping plazasF2
loudspeakers blared Christmas carolsG2
and palm trees were decked with blinkingT
lights Except by the touristH2
hotels the beaches were emptyO
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Pelicans with pregnant pouchesF2
flapped overhead like pterodactylsF2
In my mind I felt you dieI2
First the pain lifted and thenJ2
you flickered and went outU
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I walk through the rooms of memoryO
Sometimes everything is shrouded in dropclothsF2
every chair ghostly and mutedK2
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Other times memory lights up from withinL2
bustling scenes acted just the other sideM2
of a scrim through which surely I could reachN2
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my fingers tearing at the flimsy curtainX
of time which is and isn't and will beO
the stuff of which we're made and unmadeJ
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In sleep the other night I met you seventeenO2
your first nasty marriage just annulledP2
thin from your abortion clutching a bookQ2
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against your cheek and trying to lookQ2
older trying to took middle classF2
trying for a job at Wanamaker'sF2
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dressing for parties in cast offR2
stage costumes of your sisters Your eyesF2
were hazy with dreams You did notV
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notice me waving as you wanderedS2
past and I saw your slip was showingT
You stood still while I fixed your clothesF2
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as if I were your mother Remember meO
combing your springy black hair ringletsF2
that seemed metallic glitteringT
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remember me dressing you my seventy yearB
old mother who was my last dollbabyO
giving you too late what your youth had wantedT2
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What is this mask of skin we wearU2
what is this dress of fleshV2
this coat of few colors and little hairU2
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This voluptuous seething heap of desiresF2
and fears squeaking mice turned upW2
in a steaming haystack with their babiesF2
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This coat has been handed down an heirloomX2
this coat of black hair and ample fleshV2
this coat of pale slightly ruddy skinL2
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This set of hips and thighs these buttocksF2
they provided cushioning for my grandmotherP
Hannah for my mother Bert and for meO
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and we all sat on them in turn those majorP
muscles on which we walk and walk and walkY2
over the earth in search of peace and plentyO
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My mother is my mirror and I am hersF2
What do we see Our face grown young againJ2
our breasts grown firm legs lean and elegantZ2
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Our arms quivering with fat eyesF2
set in the bark of wrinkles hands puffyO
our belly seamed with childbearingT
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Give me your dress that I might try it onA3
Oh it will not fit you mother you are too fatB3
I will not fit you motherP
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I will not be the bride you can dressF2
the obedient dutiful daughter you would chewG
a dog's leather bone to sharpen your teethC3
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You strike me sometimes just to hear the soundD3
Loneliness turns your fingers into hooksF2
barbed and drawing blood with their caressF2
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My twin my sister my lost loveE3
I carry you in me like an embryoG
as once you carried meO
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What is it we turn from what is it we fearB
Did I truly think you could put me back insideM2
Did I think I would fall into you as into a moltenX
furnace and be recast that I would become youG
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What did you fear in me the child who woreF3
your hair the woman who let that black hairU2
grow long as a banner of darkness when youG
a proper flapper wore yours croppedG3
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You pushed and you pulled on my rubberyO
flesh you kneaded me like a ball of doughG
Rise rise and then you pounded me flatB3
Secretly the bones formed in the breadH3
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I became willful private as a catB3
You never knew what alleys I had wanderedS2
You called me bad and I posed like a gutterP
queen in a dress sewn of knivesF2
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All I feared was being stuck in a boxF2
with a lid A good woman appeared to meO
indistinguishable from a dead oneX
except that she worked all the timeI3
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Your payday never came Your dreams ranJ3
with bright colors like Mexican cottonsF2
that bled onto the drab sheets of the dayQ
and would not bleach with scrubbingT
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My dear what you said was one thingT
but what you sang was another sweetlyO
subversive and dark as blackberriesF2
and I became the daughter of your dreamK3
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This body is your body ashes nowL3
and roses but alive in my eyes my breastsF2
my throat my thighs You run in meO
a tang of salt in the creek waters of my bloodT2
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you sing in my mind like wine What youG
did not dare in your life you dare in mineM3

Marge Piercy



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