We Climbed That Hill, Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABBACCDECDFGGDFHHIJK LLMNNMDMDOPPQQKRRDDD MSSBTBTBUUTAADDIIVWD WDXDYYFZIIFA2B2B2C2Z ZKA2D2D2QE2KDF2G2G2F 2OG2QH2QQIIC2I2J2I2K 2ZK2JL2L2ZZM2N2O2A2I P2P2A2We climbed that hill | A |
The road flushed red in pride | B |
At being beauty's boundary Either side | B |
Stretched beauty beauty ever beauty still | A |
For on the left | C |
Rose sandhills bound together by the deft | C |
Long fingers of sea grass | D |
Humped like the Punch and Judy of a farce | E |
Comical cleft | C |
With gaps for wind to pass | D |
Spotted | F |
With dark | G |
Clumped tea tree stark | G |
With rushes fierce with burrs | D |
Blotted | F |
With purple earth | H |
Stains remnants marks of birth | H |
On too exuberant beauty | I |
On the right | J |
Long paddocks stooped under a cloudy sky | K |
'They're lovely paddocks Look at them ' you said | L |
I turned my head | L |
What I'd thought gray | M |
Was seen | N |
To be the young beginning of live green | N |
Under a spray | M |
Of ghostly weed stalks lilacs mauves and blues | D |
At interplay | M |
A delicate tracery of shadow hues | D |
'There's colour ' I began | O |
And straightway knew | P |
I saw what you | P |
Saw not and yet your vision was not mine | Q |
Your eyes were on the line | Q |
The sweep and curve of the fields against the sky | K |
You'd heard | R |
My poor beginning of a word | R |
I had no more to praise | D |
An unfamiliar loveliness To gaze | D |
Was all my praise | D |
At the hilltop it was your turn to say | M |
'There's colour ' You had found | S |
Silver and gold on my Tom Tiddler's ground | S |
At the roadside | B |
A clump of grasses all | T |
Caught round a little bush and tangled tied | B |
With unimagined colours people call | T |
Green when they see them This was treasure spied | B |
By your eyes with my soul | U |
You'd liked the whole | U |
Broad sweep of things had scarcely seen such small | T |
Jewel incidents until | A |
I showed you who had never watched a hill | A |
Remote in contemplation 'neath far far skies | D |
Except with eyes | D |
That had no mind to see | I |
A present beauty only what might be | I |
If distance were annihilate | V |
And then | W |
Where the road crossed the creek we could not cross | D |
We found again | W |
Our power of sight redoubled by the loss | D |
Of what I'd planned | X |
You said it was no sense | D |
To pull off shoes and fasten up a skirt | Y |
And plunge through dirt | Y |
And mud | F |
And water water | Z |
Muddy | I |
Ruddy | I |
As zinnias and paint water and a flood | F |
Of heavy auburn hair We'd better go | A2 |
Round by the beach | B2 |
Not by the cliffs to reach | B2 |
That farthest cliff | C2 |
I wanted to see tower | Z |
Above the waves in colour and in power | Z |
More solid than the sky | K |
And so | A2 |
We turned | D2 |
Seaward among the sea grass I had learned | D2 |
Some of your alien sense of beauty line | Q |
Preferred to colour distance to the near | E2 |
For it was I | K |
Who saw | D |
The lovely curve of the creek | F2 |
But the whole shore | G2 |
Yellow untrodden more | G2 |
The loveliest thing of our whole lovely week | F2 |
For subtle curve unbroken surface than | O |
For colour this wide shore | G2 |
Was yours and mine | Q |
And yours and mine the foam | H2 |
When it would shine | Q |
Flower coloured in a glint of sun But mine | Q |
The hurry | I |
And swift scurry | I |
Of wind blown tea tree up the cliff | C2 |
We gave | I2 |
A double dower | J2 |
Of beauty to each wave | I2 |
That trailed its hair in the wind before it broke | K2 |
For all the power | Z |
Of alien philosophies awoke | K2 |
Our power of sight | J |
You still proclaim the far | L2 |
Eternal unity of things that are | L2 |
Like Plato and the mountains I prefer | Z |
Inchoate beauty for my part aver | Z |
Plurality essential am content | M2 |
To find a gain in difference in a while | N2 |
Admit there's gain in union Argument | O2 |
Recurs Oh well at any rate we know | A2 |
That walk was lovely | I |
Ecstasies of mind | P2 |
And subtle mysteries of sight combined | P2 |
With the dear love of friends to make it so | A2 |
Lesbia Harford
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