We Climbed That Hill, Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABBACCDECDFGGDFHHIJK LLMNNMDMDOPPQQKRRDDD MSSBTBTBUUTAADDIIVWD WDXDYYFZIIFA2B2B2C2Z ZKA2D2D2QE2KDF2G2G2F 2OG2QH2QQIIC2I2J2I2K 2ZK2JL2L2ZZM2N2O2A2I P2P2A2

We climbed that hillA
The road flushed red in prideB
At being beauty's boundary Either sideB
Stretched beauty beauty ever beauty stillA
For on the leftC
Rose sandhills bound together by the deftC
Long fingers of sea grassD
Humped like the Punch and Judy of a farceE
Comical cleftC
With gaps for wind to passD
SpottedF
With darkG
Clumped tea tree starkG
With rushes fierce with burrsD
BlottedF
With purple earthH
Stains remnants marks of birthH
On too exuberant beautyI
On the rightJ
Long paddocks stooped under a cloudy skyK
'They're lovely paddocks Look at them ' you saidL
I turned my headL
What I'd thought grayM
Was seenN
To be the young beginning of live greenN
Under a sprayM
Of ghostly weed stalks lilacs mauves and bluesD
At interplayM
A delicate tracery of shadow huesD
'There's colour ' I beganO
And straightway knewP
I saw what youP
Saw not and yet your vision was not mineQ
Your eyes were on the lineQ
The sweep and curve of the fields against the skyK
You'd heardR
My poor beginning of a wordR
I had no more to praiseD
An unfamiliar loveliness To gazeD
Was all my praiseD
At the hilltop it was your turn to sayM
'There's colour ' You had foundS
Silver and gold on my Tom Tiddler's groundS
At the roadsideB
A clump of grasses allT
Caught round a little bush and tangled tiedB
With unimagined colours people callT
Green when they see them This was treasure spiedB
By your eyes with my soulU
You'd liked the wholeU
Broad sweep of things had scarcely seen such smallT
Jewel incidents untilA
I showed you who had never watched a hillA
Remote in contemplation 'neath far far skiesD
Except with eyesD
That had no mind to seeI
A present beauty only what might beI
If distance were annihilateV
And thenW
Where the road crossed the creek we could not crossD
We found againW
Our power of sight redoubled by the lossD
Of what I'd plannedX
You said it was no senseD
To pull off shoes and fasten up a skirtY
And plunge through dirtY
And mudF
And water waterZ
MuddyI
RuddyI
As zinnias and paint water and a floodF
Of heavy auburn hair We'd better goA2
Round by the beachB2
Not by the cliffs to reachB2
That farthest cliffC2
I wanted to see towerZ
Above the waves in colour and in powerZ
More solid than the skyK
And soA2
We turnedD2
Seaward among the sea grass I had learnedD2
Some of your alien sense of beauty lineQ
Preferred to colour distance to the nearE2
For it was IK
Who sawD
The lovely curve of the creekF2
But the whole shoreG2
Yellow untrodden moreG2
The loveliest thing of our whole lovely weekF2
For subtle curve unbroken surface thanO
For colour this wide shoreG2
Was yours and mineQ
And yours and mine the foamH2
When it would shineQ
Flower coloured in a glint of sun But mineQ
The hurryI
And swift scurryI
Of wind blown tea tree up the cliffC2
We gaveI2
A double dowerJ2
Of beauty to each waveI2
That trailed its hair in the wind before it brokeK2
For all the powerZ
Of alien philosophies awokeK2
Our power of sightJ
You still proclaim the farL2
Eternal unity of things that areL2
Like Plato and the mountains I preferZ
Inchoate beauty for my part averZ
Plurality essential am contentM2
To find a gain in difference in a whileN2
Admit there's gain in union ArgumentO2
Recurs Oh well at any rate we knowA2
That walk was lovelyI
Ecstasies of mindP2
And subtle mysteries of sight combinedP2
With the dear love of friends to make it soA2

Lesbia Harford



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