My Own Way. Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDE DDFGE HBIJE KKKLE MNODEP| You want special treatment | A |
| You crave for my cajoles | B |
| You love to snuggle with me | C |
| You think I don't love the offer play | D |
| If only I could I could | E |
| - | |
| Your ways of loving are snobby you say | D |
| You actually don't love I say | D |
| You insatiably crave love | F |
| Yet offer something unreachable | G |
| If only I could I could | E |
| - | |
| Domineering is what you are | H |
| You could be but always | B |
| I can be too | I |
| I chose to be meekly obedient not a second longer | J |
| If only I could I could | E |
| - | |
| I could buy you so much | K |
| I could love you so much | K |
| I could crave you so much | K |
| I could show you so much more | L |
| If only I could I could | E |
| - | |
| Your lack of a laissez faire attitude | M |
| Your overly insatiable desire of full attention | N |
| Gets monotonously infuriating | O |
| If only you let me do it my way | D |
| If only I could I could | E |
| But I can't cause your needs are not in my reach | P |
Laurie Lae
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 01/07/2021
Poet's note: To those that feel overly demanded for what they can't offer yet. Everyone loves to be loved but it can't always be your way. Let people love you their own way, in a way they know how to.
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