Rachel Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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'Twas sunset in Jerusalem the lightA
Still lingered on the city's walls and crownedB
Mount Olivet with splendor while belowC
Among the trees of dark GethsemaneD
And on the Kedron gloomy shadows layE
As if but waiting for the death of dayE
To rise and mantle Zion in a shroudF
To one who watched it in that golden lightA
Across the gulf between the sunlit hillsG
The city seemed transfigured lifted highH
Above the gloom and misery of earthI
A fit abode for Israel's ancient kingsJ
The broad plateau where Abram once had kneltK
And where the hallowed Temple of the JewsL
Had glittered gorgeous with its gems and goldM
Now bore 'tis true the stately Moslem mosqueN
But bore it as a captive bears his chainsO
Whose spirit is not crushed but borne aloftP
By thrilling memories of a noble pastQ
The rays of dying day yet half illumedQ
A dreary spot outside the city wallsR
Where sat apart an old man and his childQ
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Beside them rose the cherished blocks of stoneD
Which once had graced the Temple's sacred courtQ
It was the Day of Wailing and the JewsL
A poor scant remnant of their outcast raceS
Had gathered there as is their weekly wontQ
To read of all the glories they have lostQ
And count their endless list of shattered hopesT
Some moaned at thought of their contrasted lotQ
Some plucked their beards in anguish and despairU
Some turned their tear stained faces to the wallV
And mutely kissed the precious blocks as ifW
The historic stones held sentient sympathyX
Their lamentations ended all had goneD
To their poor dwellings sadly one by oneD
Save these two lingering mourners who still satQ
With downcast eyes and slowly dropping tearsY
At length the old man raised his head and spokeZ
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Our Fathers' God whose all protecting handQ
Led us Thy people to this chosen landQ
Through the cleft waters of a distant seaX
That we might rear a temple here to TheeX
Thou who on Zion hadst Thy favorite shrineD
And in Thy majesty and power divineD
Wast daily by our suppliant race adoredQ
As sovereign Jehovah peerless LordQ
Why hast Thou cast us off to toil and dieQ
In foreign countries' harsh captivityX
Our race is scattered now the wide world o'erA2
Our wailings rise to Thee from every shoreB2
Baited or banished by the Christian PowersC2
Cursed by the Moslem mid our ruined towersC2
Like pariah dogs an execrated raceS
We crouch to day within our 'Wailing Place'S
Begging and paying dearly for the rightQ
To bathe with tears this consecrated siteQ
How long O Israel's God shall this endureD2
Are not Thy promises to Jacob sureD2
Oh speed the day when once again Thy nameE2
Shall here be worshipped and the sacred flameE2
Of pure atoning offerings shall riseS
And smoke ascend from daily sacrificeS
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Tears choked his utterance and the old man weptQ
His meagre frame convulsed with mighty sobsS
Pathetic tokens of a broken heartQ
His daughter crept beside him drew his headQ
Adorned with thin white hair upon her breastQ
And soothed him as a mother might her childQ
Then when his grief abated took his handsS
So worn and white within her own soft palmsS
And chafed them gently with a loving careU
Then pressed them to her lips and lightly layE
Her warm cheek next his own while murmuring wordsS
Of tender filial love in that old tongueF2
Which once had rung in triumph on this spotQ
When poets of her race in glowing wordsS
Had sung their glorious prophetic strainsS
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Father she whispered shall we now despairU
When we at last inhale the sacred airU
Of our ancestral glory and have comeG2
Despite long years of waiting to our homeH2
Didst thou not say when far beyond the seaS
In our dark days of want and miseryS
That thou hadst but one prayer to go to dieQ
Upon the hill where Zion's ruins lieQ
Now this is granted and thou hast attainedQ
Thy dearest wish with ample wealth retainedQ
To keep us here from want till on the breastQ
Of Olivet's gray slope in death we restQ
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She paused and faintly smiled while at her voiceS
Her father turned his tear dimmed eyes to hersS
As one who hears soft music with delightQ
The sunset glow fell full upon her faceS
A rich dark oval crowned with raven hairU
Her lustrous eyes were shrines of tendernessS
Large dark profound and tremulously brightQ
And fringed by lashes of the deepest hueI2
Which swept the downy smoothness of her cheekJ2
While her full lips inimitably archedQ
And exquisitely mobile told her thoughtsS
Ere their soft motion framed them into speechK2
Divinely there had Beauty set her sealL2
As who should say Behold a perfect typeM2
Of southern loveliness in whose warm veinsS
The blood of good ancestral stock runs pureD2
Maintained through centuries of Spanish sunsS
The old man fondly took her hands in hisS
And bending forward kissed her broad fair browN2
Then in a faint and weary voice repliedQ
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Rachel my well belov'd I have in theeS
The only blessing left on earth to meS
The one sweet solace in my dreary lifeO2
Of fourscore years of racial hate and strifeO2
Dear Comforter 'tis true our feet now standQ
Within the limits of our people's landQ
Behind us are the obloquy and painD
Endured in cruel persecuting SpainD
Yet feel I still more keenly here than thereU
The degradation which our people shareU
Each object here speaks sadly to the JewI2
Of all the grandeur which his race once knewI2
But let that pass there is another painD
Which hurts me sorely Rachel and in vainD
I seek a remedy it is that thouN2
Hast now new lines of sorrow on thy browN2
'Tis true thou art a Jewess and must knowD
The shame which constitutes thy people's woeD
But I detect the signs of some new griefP2
For which the lapse of time brings no reliefP2
Thy cheek hath paled since our arrival hereQ2
And often on its pallor gleams a tearU
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At first she spoke not but at length her lipsS
Moved quivering as in pain while o'er her faceS
An ashen paleness came which whiter seemedQ
From startling contrast with her ebon hairU
Father she murmured speak of that no moreB2
I shared thy coming to this Syrian shoreB2
And here shall die for nothing more I craveR2
Than on these lonely hills to find a graveR2
My life though like a flower deprived of lightQ
Hath yet known moments so divinely brightQ
So full of rapture that I then forgaveR2
The insults we endured and still could braveR2
Existence in Seville if thou wouldst stayE
But in thy absence how could I betrayE
My dying mother's trust and farewell prayerU
That I henceforth thy lonely life should shareU
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She paused and from her lips a stifled moanD
Revealed the torture that her soul had knownD
Her father noted it and with a sighQ
Of self reproach attempted a replyQ
Dear child thy love for me hath cost thee muchS2
For young Emanuel shrink not from my touchS2
Was dear to thee I knew it and confessS
That I to consummate thy happinessS
Had given thee to him with full consentQ
Who with Emanuel would not be contentQ
Had not my vow and purpose of long yearsS
Compelled me to depart despite thy tearsS
I knew the struggle Rachel in thy heartQ
I felt the anguish of thy soul to partQ
From one for whom thy love was so intenseS
In truth for weeks I suffered in suspenseS
Lest thy impetuous temperament might leadQ
Even thee to leave me in my hour of needQ
Infirm with years to sail alone from SpainD
Go unattended on the stormy mainD
And lay my poor worn body in a graveR2
Unknown uncared for by a foreign waveR2
God bless thee Rachel that thy noble soulT2
Could make this filial choice and thus controlT2
A love which though supreme could not effaceS
Thy duty as a daughter of thy raceS
Thy ancestors were princes on this hillU2
Within thy veins their blood runs nobly stillU2
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Rachel sat motionless with outstretched handsS
And fingers interlocked her steadfast eyesS
Had hopeless sorrow in their stony gazeS
As though they read Fate's sentence of despairU
At length she turned her face the light had fledQ
From her young features just as in the westQ
The glow had faded from the sky and leftQ
A wintry coldness in the unlit cloudsS
She seemed about to speak when sweet and clearV2
From out the shadow of the ancient wallV
Soft vocal music stirred the evening airU
With plaintive passion thrilled a proof that loveW2
Inspired the words that floated into songX2
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Light of the glorious setting sunD
Gilding the Syrian shoreB2
Ere the bright lingering day be doneD
Guide me to her whose heart well wonD
Holds me forevermoreB2
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Moon that hath spanned the silvered plainD
Olivet's brow to kissS
Lead her by memory's golden chainD
Back to the olive groves of SpainD
Back to our days of blissS
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Star of the evening's darkening skyQ
Gemming the lonely hillU2
Whisper to her that I am nighQ
Waiting in hope for her replyQ
Tell her I love her stillU2
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The song had ended Rachel stood erectQ
Her pale lips parted breathlessly her headQ
Bent forward to receive the words which cameE2
Like grateful raindrops to a drooping flowerB2
Her slender form was quivering with delightQ
And sudden rush of feeling she scarce knewI2
If this were all a dream or if in truthY2
She heard Emanuel's welcome accents thereB2
Her heart for that brief moment wanted naughtQ
To supplement its rapture 'twas enoughZ2
To stand thus in expectancy and knowD
The idol of her soul was drawing nearB2
At length her father touched her hand and spokeZ
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'Tis he my Rachel thy sweet power hath drawnD
Thy lover o'er the sea Again the dawnD
Of love and hope is kindled in thy faceS
The concentrated beauty of thy raceS
Illumes thy features now alas I knowD
That thy self sacrifice hath cost thee woeD
Intenser than I thought I too rejoiceS
To hear the music of Emanuel's voiceS
Although I tremble lest his purpose beS
To lure thee Rachel far away from meS
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His daughter even in the thrill of blissS
Which filled her throbbing heart yet saw the painD
That marked his closing words and turning twinedQ
Her arms about the old man's drooping neckA3
Dear Father fear not that she gently saidQ
Though it be true that ardent love hath ledQ
Emanuel to this distant Syrian shoreB2
Thy lot shall still be mine forevermoreB2
Doubt not thy faithful child for none the lessS
'Twill be thy Rachel's greatest happinessS
At thy dear side to minister to theeS
For only death can come 'twixt thee and meS
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She paused and hid her face upon his breastQ
Her father clasped her fondly in his armsS
And bent his cheek to hers his whitened locksS
On her dark tresses glistening like the snowD
'Twas thus Emanuel found them silentlyS
He stood before them in a dread suspenseS
His very soul seemed poised upon the wordQ
Which left at last his trembling lips RachelB3
She raised her head and their bright ardent eyesS
Exchanged the voiceless language of the soulT2
A joy ineffable diffused its flushC3
O'er both their faces yet she did not speakJ2
But only clung the closer to her sireB2
As if in fear to lose her self controlT2
At length Emanuel spoke in tones so chargedQ
With deep emotion that the very airB2
Seemed tremulous with thoughts transcending speechK2
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Rachel my more than life Canst thou forgiveD3
The momentary thought that I could liveE3
Without thee See our separation endsS
Henceforth I know no country home or friendsS
Save thine my love I gladly leave them allV
Obedient to a higher nobler callV
The cry of my whole being to be nearB2
Thee thee my Rachel now so wholly dearB2
That life without thee is but lingering deathF3
Already with thee a diviner breathF3
Of inspiration lifts my soul to gainD
The purest loftiest heights I can attainD
Not to entice thee from thy father's careB2
Have I come hither but to seek a shareB2
In that dear filial duty and to giveD3
Love loyalty and homage while I liveE3
To him the honored hero of our raceS
Beside whom here I also crave a placeS
Not only do I plead my love anewI2
But also thus lay open to thy viewI2
The dearest wishes of my soul and waitQ
To learn thy answer Do I come too lateQ
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In doubt 'twixt hope and fear she raised her eyesS
To read her fate in her lov'd father's faceS
Who taking her fair hands within his ownD
Advanced with her to where Emanuel stoodQ
And laid them in her lover's eager graspG3
With softened radiance from their lonely pathsS
The far off stars beheld their kneeling formsS
While with his hands in benediction raisedQ
The old man stood absorbed in silent prayerB2
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The old old story ever newI2
Alike in Gentile and in JewI2
For Love remains man's sovereign yetQ
In Eden and on OlivetQ

John L. Stoddard



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