The Asteroid Is Here. Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFG HCIJKLL MG NOPQMR| The asteroid is here | A |
| Harbinger of our doom | B |
| hurtling through the space | C |
| The asteroid is here too soon | D |
| The message came out | E |
| only for the chosen few | F |
| the asteroid said you neglected the duties of a watchman | G |
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| Distraction befalls man | H |
| love has no space | C |
| Greed rules the world | I |
| compassion is a fantasy | J |
| The poor are reeds in a wind | K |
| tears can't reach a heart | L |
| Hatred already reached that part | L |
| - | |
| If we don't change our ways we are doomed for distraction You are the change | M |
| Remember your role as a watchman | G |
| - | |
| We got distracted by selfishness | N |
| the impact was rapid | O |
| But we can still go back to our positions | P |
| The position of a watchman is vacant | Q |
| apply and be the change | M |
| This is the message from the asteroid | R |
James Ntivane
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Poet's note: This is about the life as we live it. The end days are near and the asteroid is just a messager telling us to change our ways
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