Life Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGDHIJKKGLKKMMM MMNN| I'm in a state of collapse | A |
| My soul has literally being fraying at with a curse | B |
| You have flattered my edges | C |
| And profoundly hurt me in a bust | D |
| Put together all my fears that have being on edge | E |
| Just to let my heart bleed red | F |
| They call me heavy hearted and I don't even feel despondent | G |
| How can I change the way I feel when you haven't noticed | D |
| Where were you when I was in disbelief | H |
| Merely making it to breath | I |
| You let me down now I don't believe | J |
| You judged me in agitation | K |
| You proved it in your action | K |
| Treated me as if I'm a psycho patient | G |
| Waiting on you to change with no patience | L |
| You love me but with no action | K |
| You console me for your satisfaction | K |
| Destroyed our friendship left me sobbing on my pillow | M |
| Silently happy for my sorrow | M |
| Wishing me a wrecked tomorrow | M |
| Hoping I was the one you would follow | M |
| The pattern never changes in your tomorrow | M |
| And when you conclude the time worn by doubt | N |
| Don't forget your time has worn out | N |
Jade Oakes
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