Psychoanalysis: An Elegy Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: A BCDDEDFGDDHIJKI L BDFCBFBMBNDDOP Q FRSRTUFDVFWGTLXYLO L ZJFA2BIL Q B

What are you thinking aboutA
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I am thinking of an early summerB
I am thinking of wet hills in the rainC
Pouring water Shedding itD
Down empty acres of oak and manzanitaD
Down to the old green brush tangled in the sunE
Greasewood sage and spring mustardD
Or the hot wind coming down from Santa AnaF
Driving the hills crazyG
A fast wind with a bit of dust in itD
Bruising everything and making the seed sweetD
Or down in the city where the peach treesH
Are awkward as young horsesI
And there are kites caught on the wiresJ
Up above the street lampsK
And the storm drains are all choked with dead branchesI
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What are you thinkingL
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I think that I would like to write a poem that is slow as a summerB
As slow getting startedD
As th of July somewhere around the middle of the second stanzaF
After a lot of unusual rainC
California seems long in the summerB
I would like to write a poem as long as CaliforniaF
And as slow as a summerB
Do you get me Doctor It would have to be as slowM
As the very tip of summerB
As slow as the summer seemsN
On a hot day drinking beer outside RiversideD
Or standing in the middle of a white hot roadD
Between Bakersfield and HellO
Waiting for Santa ClausP
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What are you thinking nowQ
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I m thinking that she is very much like CaliforniaF
When she is still her dress is like a roadmap HighwaysR
Traveling up and down her skinS
Long empty highwaysR
With the moon chasing jackrabbits across themT
On hot summer nightsU
I am thinking that her body could be CaliforniaF
And I a rich Eastern touristD
Lost somewhere between Hell and TexasV
Looking at a map of a long wet dancing CaliforniaF
That I have never seenW
Send me some penny picture postcards ladyG
Send themT
One of each breast photographed lookingL
Like curious national monumentsX
One of your body sweeping like a three lane highwayY
Twenty seven miles from a night s lodgingL
In the world s oldest hotelO
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What are you thinkingL
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I am thinking of how many times this poemZ
Will be repeated How many summersJ
Will torture CaliforniaF
Until the damned maps burnA2
Until the mad cartographerB
Falls to the ground and possessesI
The sweet thick earth from which he has been hidingL
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What are you thinking nowQ
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I am thinking that a poem could go on foreverB

Jack Spicer



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