One Who Strived For Stars Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABB CDEE FFBB BBEE GGHB IJEE KKBL MMEE NNOP QRSS KAET SSUV| The boy stood up and looked to the skies | A |
| With his hair in the air and determined eyes | A |
| He put his hand to his chest his heart beat faster | B |
| With a mind that was made he became a dreamer | B |
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| Children like me lose more than I gain | C |
| Still in my heart the dream remains | D |
| The stars in the sky I will reach someday | E |
| This is what he said that day | E |
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| The teen he became grew to learn from mistakes | F |
| With society's eyes heightening the stakes | F |
| He reached out his arms to someone that loved a dreamer | B |
| With faith it was then that he became a lover | B |
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| Teenagers like us have more things to discover | B |
| And now we carry the first duty on our shoulder | B |
| The stars in the sky we will reach someday | E |
| This is what they declared that day | E |
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| The man he soon was husband to his wife | G |
| Aged sourly because of hardships and strife | G |
| He envied he grieved he lost things that mattered | H |
| With desperation he became a desirer | B |
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| Adults like us have far too many burdens | I |
| The visions in our hearts disappear in clouded judgement | J |
| The stars are but an old fantasy to throw away | E |
| This is what they thought that day | E |
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| The people they were led lives seasons brushed by | K |
| Their tomorrows turned to yesterdays in the blink of an eye | K |
| They shared the sorrows as much as the laughter | B |
| With age old regrets they became thinkers | L |
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| A widower like me bargained for plenty a stuff | M |
| Sometimes I gained other times I didn't have enough | M |
| Still in the eternal our dream will stay | E |
| This is what he said that day | E |
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| Though our hopes were never always met | N |
| We were both sad and happy that you can bet | N |
| When you want the universe never always gives | O |
| But when you appreciate you'll recognize its gifts | P |
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| Forever is a long time much longer than I could ever imagine | Q |
| But her hands remain in mine as my last days clock in | R |
| Life has been cruel life has been rewarding | S |
| Life has been full of love and desiring | S |
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| Dreams live on though dreamers die | K |
| Love blossoms though lovers say their goodbyes | A |
| Desires remain though desirers pass away | E |
| Thoughts are forever so don't be afraid | T |
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| My children along the way I gave up on wanting | S |
| And I realized too late that it was alright to keep going | S |
| Little ones forgive me for leaving you bereft | U |
| Said the dreamer to his family under his last dying breath | V |
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(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 03/13/2021
Poet's note: This is arguably one of my favorite poems I've written because it makes me tear up almost every single time. There is a fascinating aspect in a dream. Especially if that dream, to an extent, is but the mind's way of forming the impossible. One Who Strived For Stars was written back on July 4, 2020.
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