African Sun Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDE FGHIJK FLHMNO FCPQR FSTUV FWXY DZA2When I was four years old | A |
My village mates and I | B |
Used to gossip | C |
About the African sun | D |
At the cold morning river bank | E |
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WE WILL SAY | F |
It starts very young | G |
Weak like a baby | H |
With no idea of how to shine | I |
From the sea shore to the forest | J |
Under the leaves of the trees | K |
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WE WILL SAY | F |
So around eleven twelve o'clock | L |
It's migrated greatly | H |
It grows giant muscles like an old bush ape | M |
Wings and sharp big eyes | N |
To glare down on the earth | O |
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WE WILL SAY | F |
I wonder if this same sun is in Europe | C |
Freely it creeps in and out | P |
Of our patched thatched palm leaf huts | Q |
Peeping into very little holes it's sees like a thief | R |
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WE WILL SAY | F |
But I love the way it smartly sketches shadows on the warm ground | S |
Tall standing trees walking beings | T |
Trays on fish sellers heads | U |
Like it's taking photos | V |
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MY FRIEND WILL SAY | F |
Sorie Lol do you remember when I told you I saw the sun in the village well one time | W |
I wanted to catch it like a fish | X |
But I couldn't fit its face in my bucket | Y |
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I WILL CONCLUDE THE TOPIC OF THE SUN | D |
Ha ha You can't hoot it | Z |
It's bigger than you | A2 |
Ibrahim Bangura[cleffy]
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