A Day On The Big Branch Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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Still half drunk after a night at cardsA
with the grey dawn taking us unawareB
among our guilty kings and queens we droveC
far North in the morning winners losersD
to a stream in the high hills to climb up to a placeE
one of us knew with some vague viewF
of cutting losses or consolidating gainsG
by the old standard appeal to the wildernessH
the desert the empty places of our exileI
bringing only the biblical bread and cheeseJ
and cigarettes got from a grocer s on the wayK
expecting to drink only the clear cold waterL
among the stones and remember or forgetM
Though no one said anything about atonementN
there was still some purgatorial ideaO
in all those aching heads and ageing heartsP
as we climbed the giant stair of the streamQ
reaching the place around noonR
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It was as promised a wonder with granite wallsS
enclosing ledges long and flat of limestoneT
or rolling of lava within the ledgesU
the water fast and still pouring its yellow lightV
and green over the tilted slabs of the floorW
blackened at shady corners falling in a foamX
of crystal to a calm where the waterlightV
dappled the ledges as they leanedV
against the sun big blue dragonflies hoveredV
and darted and dipped a wing hovered againY
against the low wind moving over the streamQ
and shook the flakes of light from their clear wingsZ
This surely was it was what we had come forW
was nature though it looked like art with itsA2
grey fortress walls and laminated benchesU
as in the waiting room of some petrified stationB2
But we believed and what it was we believedV
made of the place a paradiseC2
for ruined poker players win or loseD2
who stripped naked and bathed and dried out on the rocksE2
like gasping trout the water they drankF2
making them drunk again lit cigarettes and lay backG2
waiting for nature to say the last wordV
as though the stones were Memnon stonesH2
which caught in a certain light would singI2
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The silence and even the noise of the watersD
was silence grew pregnant that is the phraseJ2
grew pregnant but nothing else didV
The mountains brought forth not a mouse and the rocksE2
unlike the ones you would expect to findV
on the slopes of Purgatory or near HeliconK2
mollified by muses and with a little give to emL2
were modern American rocks and hard as rocksE2
Our easy bones groaned our flesh bakedV
on one side and shuddered on the other and each manM2
thought bitterly about primitive simplicityV
and decadence and how he had been ruinedV
by civilization and forced by circumstancesN2
to drink and smoke and sit up all nightV
inspecting those perfectly arbitrary cardsA
until he was broken winded as a trout on a rockO2
and had no use for the doctrines of Jean JacquesO2
Rousseau and could no longer affordV
a savagery whether noble or not someP2
would never batter that battered copy of WaldenB2
againY
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But all the sameQ2
the water the sunlight and the windV
did something even the dragonfliesO2
did something to the minds full of telephoneT
numbers and flushes to the fleshR2
sweating bourbon on one side and freezing on the otherL
And the rocks the old and tumbling bouldersO2
which formed the giant stair of the streamQ
induced again some purgatorial ideasO2
concerning humility concerning patienceO2
and enduring what had to be enduredV
winning and losing and breaking evenS2
ideas of weathering in whatever weatherL
being eroded or broken or ground down into pebblesO2
by the stream s necessitous and grave currentsO2
But to these ideas did any purgatoryV
respond Only this one that in a worldV
where even the Memnon stones were carved in soapT2
one might at any rate wash with the soapT2
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After a time we talked about the WarW
about what we had done in the War and how nearU2
some of us had been to being drowned and burnedV
and shot and how many people we knewF
who had been drowned or burned or shotV
and would it have been better to have diedV
in the War the peaceful old War where we were youngV2
But the mineral peace or paralysis of thoseO2
great stones the moving stillness of the watersO2
entered our speech the ribs and bloodV
of the earth from which all fables growW2
established poetry and truth in usO2
so that at last one said I shall play cardsO2
until the day I die and another saidV
in bourbon whisky are all the vitaminsO2
and minerals needed to sustain man s lifeX2
and still another I shall live on smokeY2
until my spirit has been cured of fleshR2
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Climbing downstream again on the way homeX
to the lives we had left empty for a dayV
we noticed as not before how of three bridgesO2
not one had held the stream which in its floodsO2
had twisted the girders splintered the boards hurledV
boulder on boulder and had broken into rubbleZ2
smashed practically back to natureL
the massive masonry of span after spanM2
with its indifferent rage this was a sightV
that sobered us considerably and kept us quietV
both during the long drive home and afterL
till it was time to deal the cardsO2

Howard Nemerov



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