A Day On The Big Branch Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQR STUVWXVVVYQZWA2UB2VC 2D2E2F2G2VH2I2 DJ2VE2VK2L2E2VM2VVN2 VAO2O2VP2B2Y Q2VO2TR2LO2QO2O2VS2L O2O2VVT2T2 WU2VFVVV2O2O2VW2O2O2 VO2X2Y2R2 XVO2O2VZ2LM2VVLO2| Still half drunk after a night at cards | A |
| with the grey dawn taking us unaware | B |
| among our guilty kings and queens we drove | C |
| far North in the morning winners losers | D |
| to a stream in the high hills to climb up to a place | E |
| one of us knew with some vague view | F |
| of cutting losses or consolidating gains | G |
| by the old standard appeal to the wilderness | H |
| the desert the empty places of our exile | I |
| bringing only the biblical bread and cheese | J |
| and cigarettes got from a grocer s on the way | K |
| expecting to drink only the clear cold water | L |
| among the stones and remember or forget | M |
| Though no one said anything about atonement | N |
| there was still some purgatorial idea | O |
| in all those aching heads and ageing hearts | P |
| as we climbed the giant stair of the stream | Q |
| reaching the place around noon | R |
| - | |
| It was as promised a wonder with granite walls | S |
| enclosing ledges long and flat of limestone | T |
| or rolling of lava within the ledges | U |
| the water fast and still pouring its yellow light | V |
| and green over the tilted slabs of the floor | W |
| blackened at shady corners falling in a foam | X |
| of crystal to a calm where the waterlight | V |
| dappled the ledges as they leaned | V |
| against the sun big blue dragonflies hovered | V |
| and darted and dipped a wing hovered again | Y |
| against the low wind moving over the stream | Q |
| and shook the flakes of light from their clear wings | Z |
| This surely was it was what we had come for | W |
| was nature though it looked like art with its | A2 |
| grey fortress walls and laminated benches | U |
| as in the waiting room of some petrified station | B2 |
| But we believed and what it was we believed | V |
| made of the place a paradise | C2 |
| for ruined poker players win or lose | D2 |
| who stripped naked and bathed and dried out on the rocks | E2 |
| like gasping trout the water they drank | F2 |
| making them drunk again lit cigarettes and lay back | G2 |
| waiting for nature to say the last word | V |
| as though the stones were Memnon stones | H2 |
| which caught in a certain light would sing | I2 |
| - | |
| The silence and even the noise of the waters | D |
| was silence grew pregnant that is the phrase | J2 |
| grew pregnant but nothing else did | V |
| The mountains brought forth not a mouse and the rocks | E2 |
| unlike the ones you would expect to find | V |
| on the slopes of Purgatory or near Helicon | K2 |
| mollified by muses and with a little give to em | L2 |
| were modern American rocks and hard as rocks | E2 |
| Our easy bones groaned our flesh baked | V |
| on one side and shuddered on the other and each man | M2 |
| thought bitterly about primitive simplicity | V |
| and decadence and how he had been ruined | V |
| by civilization and forced by circumstances | N2 |
| to drink and smoke and sit up all night | V |
| inspecting those perfectly arbitrary cards | A |
| until he was broken winded as a trout on a rock | O2 |
| and had no use for the doctrines of Jean Jacques | O2 |
| Rousseau and could no longer afford | V |
| a savagery whether noble or not some | P2 |
| would never batter that battered copy of Walden | B2 |
| again | Y |
| - | |
| But all the same | Q2 |
| the water the sunlight and the wind | V |
| did something even the dragonflies | O2 |
| did something to the minds full of telephone | T |
| numbers and flushes to the flesh | R2 |
| sweating bourbon on one side and freezing on the other | L |
| And the rocks the old and tumbling boulders | O2 |
| which formed the giant stair of the stream | Q |
| induced again some purgatorial ideas | O2 |
| concerning humility concerning patience | O2 |
| and enduring what had to be endured | V |
| winning and losing and breaking even | S2 |
| ideas of weathering in whatever weather | L |
| being eroded or broken or ground down into pebbles | O2 |
| by the stream s necessitous and grave currents | O2 |
| But to these ideas did any purgatory | V |
| respond Only this one that in a world | V |
| where even the Memnon stones were carved in soap | T2 |
| one might at any rate wash with the soap | T2 |
| - | |
| After a time we talked about the War | W |
| about what we had done in the War and how near | U2 |
| some of us had been to being drowned and burned | V |
| and shot and how many people we knew | F |
| who had been drowned or burned or shot | V |
| and would it have been better to have died | V |
| in the War the peaceful old War where we were young | V2 |
| But the mineral peace or paralysis of those | O2 |
| great stones the moving stillness of the waters | O2 |
| entered our speech the ribs and blood | V |
| of the earth from which all fables grow | W2 |
| established poetry and truth in us | O2 |
| so that at last one said I shall play cards | O2 |
| until the day I die and another said | V |
| in bourbon whisky are all the vitamins | O2 |
| and minerals needed to sustain man s life | X2 |
| and still another I shall live on smoke | Y2 |
| until my spirit has been cured of flesh | R2 |
| - | |
| Climbing downstream again on the way home | X |
| to the lives we had left empty for a day | V |
| we noticed as not before how of three bridges | O2 |
| not one had held the stream which in its floods | O2 |
| had twisted the girders splintered the boards hurled | V |
| boulder on boulder and had broken into rubble | Z2 |
| smashed practically back to nature | L |
| the massive masonry of span after span | M2 |
| with its indifferent rage this was a sight | V |
| that sobered us considerably and kept us quiet | V |
| both during the long drive home and after | L |
| till it was time to deal the cards | O2 |
Howard Nemerov
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