Wahala In Paradise Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEF GHIJ KL ADMNOP QRS CT EA KU AVWXY ZA2 B2DZC2 KC AD2E2ZF2 G2H2TQI2 J2J2 KK2 AL2M2J2 N2F2T O2P2T IQ2 KR2 ZS2T2L2 H2B2U2 O B2RV2T CW2R

Dem sayA
if money landB
wahala go pack goC
So we runD
leg no touch groundE
chase paper wey no get breathF
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Now account don fatG
but sleep don slimH
Bed soft like cloudI
yet mind hard like stoneJ
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Na so paradise startK
dey leakL
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Dem sayA
na love be the medicineD
the final bus stop of lonelinessM
So we open chestN
like market stallO
display heart like tomatoesP
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Person comeQ
carry everythingR
even the basket joinS
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Now we dey hug shadowC
call am foreverT
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Love full groundE
but peace no gree stayA
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Na so paradise startK
dey itchU
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Dem sayA
build houseV
make your name get addressW
So we pile brick on brickX
stack pride reach heaven gateY
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Gate tall pass humilityZ
fence strong pass friendshipA2
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But insideB2
silence loud like sirenD
Room plentyZ
but laughter scarceC2
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Na so paradise startK
dey echoC
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Dem sayA
fame na lightD2
e go make you visibleE2
So we burn our privacyZ
take shine for strangersF2
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Crowd clapG2
camera smileH2
name dey trend like harmattan fireT
But when night comeQ
darkness still sabi your nameI2
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Everybody know youJ2
but nobody sabi youJ2
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Na so paradise startK
dey blindK2
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Dem sayA
power na controlL2
say if you hold amM2
life go obey youJ2
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So we climbN2
step on shouldersF2
turn people to ladderT
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At the topO2
air thinP2
trust thinnerT
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You fit command crowdI
but you no fit command peaceQ2
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Na so paradise startK
dey shakeR2
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So tell meZ
which kain Eden be thisS2
wey fruit dey sweet for mouthT2
but bitter for soulL2
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We pluck we chew we smileH2
but something insideB2
dey always askU2
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Na this be allO
-
Wahala no dey outsideB2
E dress like blessingR
enter like prayerV2
sit down like answerT
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Before you knowC
paradise don fullW2
with quiet sufferingR

Gilbert Sordebabari
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 06/08/2026

Poet's note: This poem, Wahala In Paradise, is a sharp philosophical reflection on the illusion of fulfillment. It uses everyday desires money, love, fame, power, and material success as mirrors to expose a deeper human contradiction: the things we chase most passionately often fail to satisfy us when we finally attain them. Through paradox and irony, the poem dismantles the popular belief that external achievements bring internal peace. Wealth brings comfort but steals rest; love promises completeness but leaves emotional emptiness; fame gives recognition but erases true identity; power offers control but isolates the holder. Each “paradise” becomes quietly troubled—revealing that dissatisfaction is not in the absence of these things, but embedded within them when misunderstood. The recurring line “Na so paradise start…”—acts as a structural and philosophical anchor, showing that disillusionment is not sudden but gradual. What begins as hope slowly transforms into unease, suggesting that human expectation itself may be flawed. Ultimately, the poem argues that “wahala” (trouble) is not an external force but a disguised companion of desire. It challenges the reader to rethink the meaning of fulfillment, hinting that true peace may not lie in acquisition, but in understanding the limits of what these pursuits can offer. It’s not just a critique of society, it’s a quiet confrontation with the human condition.




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