Wahala In Paradise Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEF GHIJ KL ADMNOP QRS CT EA KU AVWXY ZA2 B2DZC2 KC AD2E2ZF2 G2H2TQI2 J2J2 KK2 AL2M2J2 N2F2T O2P2T IQ2 KR2 ZS2T2L2 H2B2U2 O B2RV2T CW2R| Dem say | A |
| if money land | B |
| wahala go pack go | C |
| So we run | D |
| leg no touch ground | E |
| chase paper wey no get breath | F |
| - | |
| Now account don fat | G |
| but sleep don slim | H |
| Bed soft like cloud | I |
| yet mind hard like stone | J |
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| Na so paradise start | K |
| dey leak | L |
| - | |
| Dem say | A |
| na love be the medicine | D |
| the final bus stop of loneliness | M |
| So we open chest | N |
| like market stall | O |
| display heart like tomatoes | P |
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| Person come | Q |
| carry everything | R |
| even the basket join | S |
| - | |
| Now we dey hug shadow | C |
| call am forever | T |
| - | |
| Love full ground | E |
| but peace no gree stay | A |
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| Na so paradise start | K |
| dey itch | U |
| - | |
| Dem say | A |
| build house | V |
| make your name get address | W |
| So we pile brick on brick | X |
| stack pride reach heaven gate | Y |
| - | |
| Gate tall pass humility | Z |
| fence strong pass friendship | A2 |
| - | |
| But inside | B2 |
| silence loud like siren | D |
| Room plenty | Z |
| but laughter scarce | C2 |
| - | |
| Na so paradise start | K |
| dey echo | C |
| - | |
| Dem say | A |
| fame na light | D2 |
| e go make you visible | E2 |
| So we burn our privacy | Z |
| take shine for strangers | F2 |
| - | |
| Crowd clap | G2 |
| camera smile | H2 |
| name dey trend like harmattan fire | T |
| But when night come | Q |
| darkness still sabi your name | I2 |
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| Everybody know you | J2 |
| but nobody sabi you | J2 |
| - | |
| Na so paradise start | K |
| dey blind | K2 |
| - | |
| Dem say | A |
| power na control | L2 |
| say if you hold am | M2 |
| life go obey you | J2 |
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| So we climb | N2 |
| step on shoulders | F2 |
| turn people to ladder | T |
| - | |
| At the top | O2 |
| air thin | P2 |
| trust thinner | T |
| - | |
| You fit command crowd | I |
| but you no fit command peace | Q2 |
| - | |
| Na so paradise start | K |
| dey shake | R2 |
| - | |
| So tell me | Z |
| which kain Eden be this | S2 |
| wey fruit dey sweet for mouth | T2 |
| but bitter for soul | L2 |
| - | |
| We pluck we chew we smile | H2 |
| but something inside | B2 |
| dey always ask | U2 |
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| Na this be all | O |
| - | |
| Wahala no dey outside | B2 |
| E dress like blessing | R |
| enter like prayer | V2 |
| sit down like answer | T |
| - | |
| Before you know | C |
| paradise don full | W2 |
| with quiet suffering | R |
Gilbert Sordebabari
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 06/08/2026
Poet's note: This poem, Wahala In Paradise, is a sharp philosophical reflection on the illusion of fulfillment. It uses everyday desires money, love, fame, power, and material success as mirrors to expose a deeper human contradiction: the things we chase most passionately often fail to satisfy us when we finally attain them.
Through paradox and irony, the poem dismantles the popular belief that external achievements bring internal peace. Wealth brings comfort but steals rest; love promises completeness but leaves emotional emptiness; fame gives recognition but erases true identity; power offers control but isolates the holder. Each “paradise” becomes quietly troubled—revealing that dissatisfaction is not in the absence of these things, but embedded within them when misunderstood.
The recurring line “Na so paradise start…”—acts as a structural and philosophical anchor, showing that disillusionment is not sudden but gradual. What begins as hope slowly transforms into unease, suggesting that human expectation itself may be flawed.
Ultimately, the poem argues that “wahala” (trouble) is not an external force but a disguised companion of desire. It challenges the reader to rethink the meaning of fulfillment, hinting that true peace may not lie in acquisition, but in understanding the limits of what these pursuits can offer.
It’s not just a critique of society, it’s a quiet confrontation with the human condition.
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