Letter To The Deceased Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABC DEFGH IJKLMD NFDOPQR SITDUV DWXYQDQ ZVA2YB2C2MD2E2LFYF2 DFHG2H2TI2FJ2K2M L2FM2DDN2DDO2O2UP2 DQ2R2YAS2HT2 CQU2DF2 DV2EG2N2W2FFX2 Y2Z2A3X2UDDTB3X2D AF2CX2C3CUWWD3E3 DX2A3DF3 L2Z2QUDVG3H3F2D

Dear DepartedA
Do you still argue where you areB
or did silence conquer even your convictionsC
-
Tell meD
when you arrivedE
did someone welcome youF
or did you simply realizeG
you were alone with yourselfH
-
Do you still sayI
This is my GodJ
or did the name dissolveK
before the answer cameL
And if there was no answerM
what then became of your certaintyD
-
Do tribes survive the graveN
or did you carry them with youF
like habits you could not buryD
Be honestO
do you still separate yourselvesP
even nowQ
even thereR
-
Do nations exist beneath the soilS
or have you in your quiet wayI
recreated themT
in memoryD
in biasU
in refusalV
-
Tell meD
did death end divisionW
or did it only remove the stageX
where you performed itY
Who is superior nowQ
No answer carefullyD
who believes they are superior nowQ
-
Does hierarchy dieZ
or does it become invisibleV
a silent arrangement of prideA2
with no language left to confess itY
Do the rich still feel richB2
Do the poor still feel poorC2
Or did you discoverM
that poverty was never of the pocketD2
and wealth was never of the handE2
And your nameL
does it still follow youF
or did you follow itY
into nothingF2
-
Tell meD
when no one is left to remember youF
did you finally meet yourselfH
or did you disappear with the memory of othersG2
What of your enemiesH2
did you lose themT
or did they surviveI2
inside youF
Do you still need to be rightJ2
Or is right a languageK2
that could not cross overM
-
Answer me thisL2
did death humble youF
or did it only exposeM2
how little you understood humilityD
Do you still hurryD
Strange question I knowN2
but tell meD
what is urgencyD
in a place without timeO2
Or is there timeO2
Did eternity feel endlessU
or did it feel like nothing at allP2
-
Be honest with meD
were you disappointedQ2
Did the afterlife meet your faithR2
or did it ignore itY
Did you find what you defendedA
or did you findS2
that you were defending yourselfH
all alongT2
-
Dear Silent OnesC
We assume you know nowQ
We comfort ourselves with that thoughtU2
that death is clarityD
that the grave is understandingF2
-
But tell meD
what if it is notV2
What if you arrivedE
and found no answersG2
only the echoN2
of the questions you refused to askW2
What if death did not teach youF
but only stopped youF
mid sentenceX2
-
If you could returnY2
not as a ghostZ2
but as truthA3
would you still speak with confidenceX2
Would you still divide usU
into believer and unbelieverD
native and strangerD
us and themT
Or would you hesitateB3
just onceX2
before claiming certaintyD
-
Dear DepartedA
We the livingF2
are still loud with conclusionsC
We build permanenceX2
on temporary breathC3
We defend illusionsC
as if they will outlive usU
We are certainW
so painfully certainW
of thingsD3
you can no longer confirmE3
-
So tell meD
and do not hide behind silenceX2
Did you discover the truthA3
or did you discoverD
that truth was never yours to holdF3
-
And thisL2
this is the question that disturbs me mostZ2
In all your stillness nowQ
in all your distance from usU
Are you finally freeD
or just finally unableV
to pretendG3
YoursH3
still askingF2
what you can no longer answerD

Gilbert Sordebabari
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 04/11/2026

Poet's note: Motivated by the death of some men of great influence.




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