The Diary Of An Old Soul. - July Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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ALAS my tent see through it a whirlwind sweepB
Moaning poor Fancy's doves are swept awayC
I sit alone a sorrow half asleepB
My consciousness the blackness all astirD
No pilgrim I a homeless wandererD
For how canst Thou be in the darkness deepB
Who dwellest only in the living dayC
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It must be somewhere in my fluttering tentE
Strange creatures half tamed only yet are pentE
Dragons lop winged birds and large eyed snakesF
Hark through the storm the saddest howling breaksF
Or are they loose roaming about the bentE
The darkness dire deepening with moan and screamG
My Morning rise and all shall be a dreamG
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Not thine my Lord the darkness all is mineH
Save that as mine my darkness too is thineH
All things are thine to save or to destroyD
Destroy my darkness rise my perfect joyD
Love primal the live coal of every nightI
Flame out scare the ill things with radiant frightI
And fill my tent with laughing morn's delightI
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Master thou workest with such common thingsJ
Low souls weak hearts I mean and hast to useK
Therefore such common means and rescuingsK
That hard we find it as we sit and museK
To think thou workest in us verilyL
Bad sea boats we and manned with wretched crewsK
That doubt the captain watch the storm spray fleeL
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Thou art hampered in thy natural working thenM
When beings designed on freedom's holy planN
Will not be free with thy poor foolish menM
Thou therefore hast to work just like a manN
But when tangling thyself in their sore needO
Thou hast to freedom fashioned them indeedO
Then wilt thou grandly move and Godlike speedO
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Will this not then show grandest fact of allL
In thy creation victory most renownedP
That thou hast wrought thy will by slow and smallL
And made men like thee though thy making boundP
By that which they were not and could not beL
Until thou mad'st them make along with theeL
Master the tardiness is but in meL
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Hence come thy checks because I still would runQ
My head into the sand nor flutter aloftR
Towards thy home with thy wind under meL
'Tis because I am mean thy ways so oftR
Look mean to me my rise is low begunQ
But scarce thy will doth grasp me ere I seeL
For my arrest and rise its stern necessityL
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Like clogs upon the pinions of thy planN
We hang like captives on thy chariot wheelsK
Who should climb up and ride with Death's conquerorD
Therefore thy train along the world's highway stealsK
So slow to the peace of heart reluctant manN
What shall we do to spread the wing and soarD
Nor straiten thy deliverance any moreD
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The sole way to put flight into the wingS
To preen its feathers and to make them growD
Is to heed humbly every smallest thingS
With which the Christ in us has aught to doT
So will the Christ from child to manhood goD
Obedient to the father Christ and soD
Sweet holy change will turn all our old things to newT
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Creation thou dost work by faint degreesK
By shade and shadow from unseen beginningS
Far far apart in unthought mysteriesK
Of thy own dark unfathomable seasK
Thou will'st thy will and thence upon the earthU
Slow travelling his way through centuries winningS
A child at length arrives at never ending birthU
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Well mayst thou then work on indocile heartsK
By small successes disappointments smallL
By nature weather failure or sore fallL
By shame anxiety bitterness and smartsK
By loneliness by weary loss of zestV
The rags the husks the swine the hunger questV
Drive home the wanderer to the father's breastV
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How suddenly some rapid turn of thoughtW
May throw the life machine all out of gearD
Clouding the windows with the steam of doubtX
Filling the eyes with dust with noise the earD
Who knows not then where dwells the engineerD
Rushes aghast into the pathless nightI
And wanders in a land of dreary frightI
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Amazed at sightless whirring of their wheelsK
Confounded with the recklessness and strifeY
Distract with fears of what may next ensueT
Some break rude exit from the house of lifeY
And plunge into a silence out of viewT
Whence not a cry no wafture once revealsK
What door they have broke open with the knifeY
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Help me my Father in whatever dismayC
Whatever terror in whatever shapeZ
To hold the faster by thy garment's hemA2
When my heart sinks oh lift it up I prayC
Thy child should never fear though hell should gapeZ
Not blench though all the ills that men affrayC
Stood round him like the Roman round JerusalemB2
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Too eager I must not be to understandC2
How should the work the master goes aboutX
Fit the vague sketch my compasses have plannedC2
I am his house for him to go in and outX
He builds me now and if I cannot seeL
At any time what he is doing with meL
'Tis that he makes the house for me too grandC2
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The house is not for me it is for himD2
His royal thoughts require many a stairC
Many a tower many an outlook fairC
Of which I have no thought and need no careC
Where I am most perplexed it may be thereC
Thou mak'st a secret chamber holy dimD2
Where thou wilt come to help my deepest prayerC
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I cannot tell why this day I am illL
But I am well because it is thy willL
Which is to make me pure and right like theeL
Not yet I need escape 'tis bearableL
Because thou knowest And when harder thingsK
Shall rise and gather and overshadow meL
I shall have comfort in thy strengtheningsK
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How do I live when thou art far awayC
When I am sunk and lost and dead in sleepB
Or in some dream with no sense in its playC
When weary dull or drowned in study deepB
O Lord I live so utterly on theeL
I live when I forget thee utterlyL
Not that thou thinkest of but thinkest meL
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Thou far that word the holy truth doth blurC
Doth the great ocean from the small fish runQ
When it sleeps fast in its low weedy bowerC
Is the sun far from any smallest flowerC
That lives by his dear presence every hourC
Are they not one in oneness without stirC
The flower the flower because the sun the sunQ
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Dear presence every hour what of the nightI
When crumpled daisies shut gold sadness inE2
And some do hang the head for lack of lightI
Sick almost unto death with absence blightI
Thy memory then warm lingering in the groundP
Mourned dewy in the air keeps their hearts soundP
Till fresh with day their lapsed life beginE2
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All things are shadows of the shining trueC
Sun sea and air close potent hurtless fireC
Flowers from their mother's prison dove and dewC
Every thing holds a slender guiding clueC
Back to the mighty oneness hearts of faithF2
Know thee than light than heat endlessly nigherC
Our life's life carpenter of NazarethG2
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Sometimes perhaps the spiritual blood runs slowD
And soft along the veins of will doth flowD
Seeking God's arteries from which it cameH2
Or does the etherial creative flameH2
Turn back upon itself and latent growD
It matters not what figure or what nameH2
If thou art in me and I am not to blameH2
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In such God silence the soul's nest so longI2
As all is still no flutter and no songI2
Is safe But if my soul begin to actJ2
Without some waking to the eternal factJ2
That my dear life is hid with Christ in GodK2
I think and move a creature of earth's clodK2
Stand on the finite act upon the wrongI2
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My soul this sermon hence for itself preparesK
Then is there nothing vile thou mayst not doK2
Buffeted in a tumult of low caresK
And treacheries of the old man 'gainst the newK2
Lord in my spirit let thy spirit moveL2
Warning that it may not have to reproveL2
In my dead moments master stir the prayersK
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Lord let my soul o'erburdened then feel theeL
Thrilling through all its brain's stupidityL
If I must slumber heedless of ill harmsK
Let it not be but in my Father's armsK
Outside the shelter of his garment's foldK2
All is a waste a terror haunted woldK2
Lord keep me 'Tis thy child that cries BeholdK2
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Some say that thou their endless love host wonQ
By deeds for them which I may not believeL2
Thou ever didst or ever willedst doneQ
What matter so they love thee They receiveL2
Eternal more than the poor loom and wheelL
Of their invention ever wove and spunQ
I love thee for I must thine all from head to heelL
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The love of thee will set all notions rightK2
Right save by love no thought can be or mayC
Only love's knowledge is the primal lightK2
Questions keep camp along love's shining coastK2
Challenge my love and would my entrance stayC
Across the buzzing doubting challenging hostK2
I rush to thee and cling and cry Thou know'stK2
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Oh let me live in thy realitiesK
Nor substitute my notions for thy factsK
Notion with notion making leagues and pactsK
They are to truth but as dream deeds to actsK
And questioned make me doubt of everythingS
O Lord my God my heart gets up and criesK
Come thy own self and with thee my faith bringS
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O master my desires to work to knowD
To be aware that I do live and growD
All restless wish for anything not theeL
I yield and on thy altar offer meL
Let me no more from out thy presence goD
But keep me waiting watchful for thy willL
Even while I do it waiting watchful stillL
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Thou art the Lord of life the secret thingS
Thou wilt give endless more than I could findK2
Even if without thee I could go and seekM2
For thou art one Christ with my deepest mindK2
Duty alive self willed in me dost speakM2
And to a deeper purer being stingS
I come to thee my life my causing kindK2
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Nothing is alien in thy world immenseK
No look of sky or earth or man or beastK2
In the great hand of God I stand and thenceK
Look out on life his endless holy feastK2
To try to feel is but to court despairC
To dig for a sun within a garden fenceK
Who does thy will O God he lives upon thy airC

George Macdonald



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