The Diary Of An Old Soul. - July Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
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ALAS my tent see through it a whirlwind sweep | B |
Moaning poor Fancy's doves are swept away | C |
I sit alone a sorrow half asleep | B |
My consciousness the blackness all astir | D |
No pilgrim I a homeless wanderer | D |
For how canst Thou be in the darkness deep | B |
Who dwellest only in the living day | C |
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It must be somewhere in my fluttering tent | E |
Strange creatures half tamed only yet are pent | E |
Dragons lop winged birds and large eyed snakes | F |
Hark through the storm the saddest howling breaks | F |
Or are they loose roaming about the bent | E |
The darkness dire deepening with moan and scream | G |
My Morning rise and all shall be a dream | G |
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Not thine my Lord the darkness all is mine | H |
Save that as mine my darkness too is thine | H |
All things are thine to save or to destroy | D |
Destroy my darkness rise my perfect joy | D |
Love primal the live coal of every night | I |
Flame out scare the ill things with radiant fright | I |
And fill my tent with laughing morn's delight | I |
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Master thou workest with such common things | J |
Low souls weak hearts I mean and hast to use | K |
Therefore such common means and rescuings | K |
That hard we find it as we sit and muse | K |
To think thou workest in us verily | L |
Bad sea boats we and manned with wretched crews | K |
That doubt the captain watch the storm spray flee | L |
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Thou art hampered in thy natural working then | M |
When beings designed on freedom's holy plan | N |
Will not be free with thy poor foolish men | M |
Thou therefore hast to work just like a man | N |
But when tangling thyself in their sore need | O |
Thou hast to freedom fashioned them indeed | O |
Then wilt thou grandly move and Godlike speed | O |
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Will this not then show grandest fact of all | L |
In thy creation victory most renowned | P |
That thou hast wrought thy will by slow and small | L |
And made men like thee though thy making bound | P |
By that which they were not and could not be | L |
Until thou mad'st them make along with thee | L |
Master the tardiness is but in me | L |
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Hence come thy checks because I still would run | Q |
My head into the sand nor flutter aloft | R |
Towards thy home with thy wind under me | L |
'Tis because I am mean thy ways so oft | R |
Look mean to me my rise is low begun | Q |
But scarce thy will doth grasp me ere I see | L |
For my arrest and rise its stern necessity | L |
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Like clogs upon the pinions of thy plan | N |
We hang like captives on thy chariot wheels | K |
Who should climb up and ride with Death's conqueror | D |
Therefore thy train along the world's highway steals | K |
So slow to the peace of heart reluctant man | N |
What shall we do to spread the wing and soar | D |
Nor straiten thy deliverance any more | D |
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The sole way to put flight into the wing | S |
To preen its feathers and to make them grow | D |
Is to heed humbly every smallest thing | S |
With which the Christ in us has aught to do | T |
So will the Christ from child to manhood go | D |
Obedient to the father Christ and so | D |
Sweet holy change will turn all our old things to new | T |
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Creation thou dost work by faint degrees | K |
By shade and shadow from unseen beginning | S |
Far far apart in unthought mysteries | K |
Of thy own dark unfathomable seas | K |
Thou will'st thy will and thence upon the earth | U |
Slow travelling his way through centuries winning | S |
A child at length arrives at never ending birth | U |
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Well mayst thou then work on indocile hearts | K |
By small successes disappointments small | L |
By nature weather failure or sore fall | L |
By shame anxiety bitterness and smarts | K |
By loneliness by weary loss of zest | V |
The rags the husks the swine the hunger quest | V |
Drive home the wanderer to the father's breast | V |
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How suddenly some rapid turn of thought | W |
May throw the life machine all out of gear | D |
Clouding the windows with the steam of doubt | X |
Filling the eyes with dust with noise the ear | D |
Who knows not then where dwells the engineer | D |
Rushes aghast into the pathless night | I |
And wanders in a land of dreary fright | I |
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Amazed at sightless whirring of their wheels | K |
Confounded with the recklessness and strife | Y |
Distract with fears of what may next ensue | T |
Some break rude exit from the house of life | Y |
And plunge into a silence out of view | T |
Whence not a cry no wafture once reveals | K |
What door they have broke open with the knife | Y |
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Help me my Father in whatever dismay | C |
Whatever terror in whatever shape | Z |
To hold the faster by thy garment's hem | A2 |
When my heart sinks oh lift it up I pray | C |
Thy child should never fear though hell should gape | Z |
Not blench though all the ills that men affray | C |
Stood round him like the Roman round Jerusalem | B2 |
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Too eager I must not be to understand | C2 |
How should the work the master goes about | X |
Fit the vague sketch my compasses have planned | C2 |
I am his house for him to go in and out | X |
He builds me now and if I cannot see | L |
At any time what he is doing with me | L |
'Tis that he makes the house for me too grand | C2 |
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The house is not for me it is for him | D2 |
His royal thoughts require many a stair | C |
Many a tower many an outlook fair | C |
Of which I have no thought and need no care | C |
Where I am most perplexed it may be there | C |
Thou mak'st a secret chamber holy dim | D2 |
Where thou wilt come to help my deepest prayer | C |
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I cannot tell why this day I am ill | L |
But I am well because it is thy will | L |
Which is to make me pure and right like thee | L |
Not yet I need escape 'tis bearable | L |
Because thou knowest And when harder things | K |
Shall rise and gather and overshadow me | L |
I shall have comfort in thy strengthenings | K |
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How do I live when thou art far away | C |
When I am sunk and lost and dead in sleep | B |
Or in some dream with no sense in its play | C |
When weary dull or drowned in study deep | B |
O Lord I live so utterly on thee | L |
I live when I forget thee utterly | L |
Not that thou thinkest of but thinkest me | L |
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Thou far that word the holy truth doth blur | C |
Doth the great ocean from the small fish run | Q |
When it sleeps fast in its low weedy bower | C |
Is the sun far from any smallest flower | C |
That lives by his dear presence every hour | C |
Are they not one in oneness without stir | C |
The flower the flower because the sun the sun | Q |
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Dear presence every hour what of the night | I |
When crumpled daisies shut gold sadness in | E2 |
And some do hang the head for lack of light | I |
Sick almost unto death with absence blight | I |
Thy memory then warm lingering in the ground | P |
Mourned dewy in the air keeps their hearts sound | P |
Till fresh with day their lapsed life begin | E2 |
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All things are shadows of the shining true | C |
Sun sea and air close potent hurtless fire | C |
Flowers from their mother's prison dove and dew | C |
Every thing holds a slender guiding clue | C |
Back to the mighty oneness hearts of faith | F2 |
Know thee than light than heat endlessly nigher | C |
Our life's life carpenter of Nazareth | G2 |
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Sometimes perhaps the spiritual blood runs slow | D |
And soft along the veins of will doth flow | D |
Seeking God's arteries from which it came | H2 |
Or does the etherial creative flame | H2 |
Turn back upon itself and latent grow | D |
It matters not what figure or what name | H2 |
If thou art in me and I am not to blame | H2 |
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In such God silence the soul's nest so long | I2 |
As all is still no flutter and no song | I2 |
Is safe But if my soul begin to act | J2 |
Without some waking to the eternal fact | J2 |
That my dear life is hid with Christ in God | K2 |
I think and move a creature of earth's clod | K2 |
Stand on the finite act upon the wrong | I2 |
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My soul this sermon hence for itself prepares | K |
Then is there nothing vile thou mayst not do | K2 |
Buffeted in a tumult of low cares | K |
And treacheries of the old man 'gainst the new | K2 |
Lord in my spirit let thy spirit move | L2 |
Warning that it may not have to reprove | L2 |
In my dead moments master stir the prayers | K |
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Lord let my soul o'erburdened then feel thee | L |
Thrilling through all its brain's stupidity | L |
If I must slumber heedless of ill harms | K |
Let it not be but in my Father's arms | K |
Outside the shelter of his garment's fold | K2 |
All is a waste a terror haunted wold | K2 |
Lord keep me 'Tis thy child that cries Behold | K2 |
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Some say that thou their endless love host won | Q |
By deeds for them which I may not believe | L2 |
Thou ever didst or ever willedst done | Q |
What matter so they love thee They receive | L2 |
Eternal more than the poor loom and wheel | L |
Of their invention ever wove and spun | Q |
I love thee for I must thine all from head to heel | L |
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The love of thee will set all notions right | K2 |
Right save by love no thought can be or may | C |
Only love's knowledge is the primal light | K2 |
Questions keep camp along love's shining coast | K2 |
Challenge my love and would my entrance stay | C |
Across the buzzing doubting challenging host | K2 |
I rush to thee and cling and cry Thou know'st | K2 |
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Oh let me live in thy realities | K |
Nor substitute my notions for thy facts | K |
Notion with notion making leagues and pacts | K |
They are to truth but as dream deeds to acts | K |
And questioned make me doubt of everything | S |
O Lord my God my heart gets up and cries | K |
Come thy own self and with thee my faith bring | S |
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O master my desires to work to know | D |
To be aware that I do live and grow | D |
All restless wish for anything not thee | L |
I yield and on thy altar offer me | L |
Let me no more from out thy presence go | D |
But keep me waiting watchful for thy will | L |
Even while I do it waiting watchful still | L |
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Thou art the Lord of life the secret thing | S |
Thou wilt give endless more than I could find | K2 |
Even if without thee I could go and seek | M2 |
For thou art one Christ with my deepest mind | K2 |
Duty alive self willed in me dost speak | M2 |
And to a deeper purer being sting | S |
I come to thee my life my causing kind | K2 |
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Nothing is alien in thy world immense | K |
No look of sky or earth or man or beast | K2 |
In the great hand of God I stand and thence | K |
Look out on life his endless holy feast | K2 |
To try to feel is but to court despair | C |
To dig for a sun within a garden fence | K |
Who does thy will O God he lives upon thy air | C |
George Macdonald
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