Achievement Formula Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABB CDEF GGBB BBBB HHII JKLM| Could it be sweetness or bitterness | A |
| Light or darkness | A |
| Or is it only our wants that matter | B |
| Confusingly does it really matter | B |
| - | |
| Emptiness fills our dream homes | C |
| The crux we roam | D |
| When always wishing till night comes | E |
| Reality could feel as doom | F |
| - | |
| Deeper cravings for the parameters | G |
| Known only by the masters | G |
| Of what really makes life better | B |
| Instead of suffering it later | B |
| - | |
| Who is and where is the master | B |
| To experientially reveal this matter | B |
| Considerably isn't it better | B |
| Who knows our dreams could be better | B |
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| We exist by our fighting for survival | H |
| Live by our hunger for revival | H |
| Purposefully defined | I |
| Ignorantly defiled | I |
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| From the night age feels as death | J |
| Have the living years from depth | K |
| Measure the existing years from birth | L |
| Then confess curse or bless | M |
Effi David
Poet's note: This poem 'Achievement Formula" is mainly for the youths to continually keep them on a safe track of positive life achievement rather than regretful life at the end.
This poem serves as my secret formula in realizing how effective is my impact while living.
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