Old Man Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFEE GHIJAKLMNODPQRCASTUV APWGXAYDIZYA2

Old Man or Lads Love in the name there's nothingA
To one that knows not Lads Love or Old ManB
The hoar green feathery herb almost a treeC
Growing with rosemary and lavenderD
Even to one that knows it well the namesE
Half decorate half perplex the thing it isF
At least what that is clings not to the namesE
In spite of time And yet I like the namesE
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The herb itself I like not but for certainG
I love it as someday the child will love itH
Who plucks a feather from the door side bushI
Whenever she goes in or out of the houseJ
Often she waits there snipping the tips and shrivellingA
The shreds at last on to the pathK
Thinking perhaps of nothing till she sniffsL
Her fingers and runs off The bush is stillM
But half as tall as she 'though it is as oldN
So well she clips it Not a word she saysO
And I can only wonder how much hereafterD
She will remember with that bitter scentP
Of garden rows and ancient damson treesQ
Topping a hedge a bent path to a doorR
A low thick bush beside the door and meC
Forbidding her to pickA
As for myselfS
Where first I met the bitter scent is lostT
I too often shrivel the grey shredsU
Sniff them and think and sniff again and tryV
Once more to think what it is I am rememberingA
Always in vain I cannot like the scentP
Yet I would rather give up others more sweetW
With no meaning than this bitter oneG
I have mislaid the key I sniff the sprayX
And think of nothing I see and I hear nothingA
Yet seem too to be listening lying in waitY
For what I should yet never can rememberD
No garden appears no path no hoar green bushI
Of Lad's love or Old Man no child besideZ
Neither father nor mother nor any playmateY
Only an avenue dark nameless without endA2

Edward Thomas



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