Jonah-s Luck Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABABCDCD EFEGHIHI HJHJKHKH EFEFELEL MIMDMHMH MHMHEBEB NHNHOPOP EQEQMRMR QQQQSKSK QQQQMHMH TUTUQVQV EWEWMXMXOUT OF LUCK mate Have a liquor Hang it where s the use complaining | A |
Take your fancy I m in funds now I can stand the racket Dan | B |
Dump your bluey in the corner camp here for the night it s raining | A |
Bet your life I m glad to see you glad to see a Daylesford man | B |
Swell Correct Dan Spot the get up and I own this blooming shanty | C |
Me the fellows christened Jonah at Jim Crow and Blanket Flat | D |
Cause my luck was so infernal you remember me and Canty | C |
Rough times those the very memory keeps a chap from getting fat | D |
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Where d I strike it That s a yarn The fire s a comfort sit up nearer | E |
Hoist your heels man take it easy till Kate s ready with the stew | F |
Yes I ll tell my little story tain t a long one but it s queerer | E |
Than those lies that Tullock pitched us on The Flat in | G |
Fancy Phil a parson now He s smug as grease the Reverend Tullock | H |
Yes he s big his wife and fam ly are a high and mighty lot | I |
Didn t I say his jaw would keep him when he tired of punching mullock | H |
Well it has he s made his pile here How d you like your whisky hot | I |
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Luck Well now I like your cheek Dan You had luck there s no denying | H |
I in thirty years had averaged just a wage of twenty bob | J |
Why at Alma there I saw men making fortunes without trying | H |
While for days I lived on possums and then had to take a job | J |
Bah you talk about misfortune my ill luck was always thorough | K |
Gold once ran away before me if I chased it for a week | H |
I was starved at Tarrangower lived on tick at Maryborough | K |
And I fell and broke my thigh bone at the start of Fiery Creek | H |
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At Avoca Canty left me Jim you know was not a croaker | E |
But he jacked the whole arrangement found we couldn t make a do | F |
Said he loved me like a brother but twas rough upon a joker | E |
When he d got to fight the devil and find luck enough for two | F |
Jim was off I didn t blame him seeing what he d had to suffer | E |
When Maginnis just beside us panned out fifty to the tub | L |
We had pegged out hours before him and had struck another duffer | E |
And each store upon the lead my lad had laid us up for grub | L |
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After that I picked up Barlow but we parted at Dunolly | M |
When we d struggled through at Alma Adelaide Lead and Ararat | I |
See my luck was hard upon him he contracted melancholy | M |
And he hung himself one morning in the shaft at Parrot Flat | D |
Ding it No Where gold was getting I was on the job and early | M |
Struck some tucker dirt at Armstrong s and just lived at Pleasant Creek | H |
Always grafting like a good un never hopeless like or surly | M |
Living partly on my earnings Dan but largely on my cheek | H |
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Good old days they like to call them they were tough old days to many | M |
I was through them and they left me still the choice to graft or beg | H |
Left me gray and worn and wrinkled aged and stumped without a penny | M |
With a chronic rheumatism and this darned old twisted leg | H |
Other work That s true in plenty But you know the real old stager | E |
Who has followed up the diggings how he hangs on to the pan | B |
How he hates to leave the pipeclay Though you mention it I ll wager | E |
That you never worked on top until you couldn t help it Dan | B |
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Years went by On many fields I worked and often missed a meal and | N |
Then I found Victoria played out and the yields were very slack | H |
So I took a turn up Northward tried Tasmania and New Zealand | N |
Dan I worked my passage over and I sneaked the journey back | H |
Times were worse I made a cradle and went fossicking old places | O |
But the Chows had been before me and had scraped the country bare | P |
There was talk of splendid patches mongst the creeks and round the races | O |
But twas not my luck to strike them and I think I lived on air | P |
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Rough That s not the word So help me Dan I hadn t got a stiver | E |
When I caved in one fine Sunday found I couldn t lift my head | Q |
They removed me and the doctor said I d got rheumatic fever | E |
And for seven months I lingered in a ward upon a bed | Q |
Came out crippled feeling done up hopeless like and very lonely | M |
And dead beat right down to bed rock as I d never felt before | R |
Bitter Just Those hopeful years of honest graft had left me only | M |
This bent leg and some asylum was the prospect I d in store | R |
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You ll be knowing how I felt then cleaned out lame completely gravelled | Q |
All the friends I d known were scattered widely north and east and west | Q |
There seemed nothing there for my sort and no chances if I travelled | Q |
No my digging days were over and I had to give it best | Q |
Though twas hard I tried to meet it like a man in digger fashion | S |
Twasn t good enough I funked it I was fairly on the shelf | K |
Cursed my bitter fortune daily and was always in a passion | S |
With the Lord sir and with everyone but mostly with myself | K |
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I was older twenty years then than I am this blessed minute | Q |
But I got a job one morning knapping rock at Ballarat | Q |
Two and three for two inch metal You may say there s nothing in it | Q |
To the man who s been through Eaglehawk and mined at Blanket Flat | Q |
Wait you d better let me finish We and ill I bucked in gladly | M |
But to get the tools I needed I was forced to pawn my swag | H |
I d no hope of golden patches but I needed tucker badly | M |
And this job I think just saved me being lumbered on the vag | H |
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Fortune is a fickle party but in spite of all her failings | T |
Don t revile her Dan as I did while you ve still a little rope | U |
Well the heap that I was put on was some heavy quartz and tailings | T |
That was carted from a local mine I think the Band of Hope | U |
Take the lesson that is coming to your heart old man and hug it | Q |
For I started on the heap with scarce a soul to call my own | V |
And in less than twenty minutes I d raked out a bouncing nugget | Q |
Scaling close on ninety ounces and just frosted round with stone | V |
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How is that for high my hearty Miracle It was by thunder | E |
After forty years of following the rushes up and down | W |
Getting old and past all prospect and about to knuckle under | E |
Struck it lucky knapping metal in the middle of a town | W |
Pass the bottle Have another Soon we ll get the word from Kitty | M |
She s a daisy cook I tell you Yes the public business pays | X |
But my pile was made beforehand made it broking in the city | M |
That s the yarn I pitch the neighbours Here s to good old now a days | X |
Edward George Dyson
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