Jonah-s Luck Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABABCDCD EFEGHIHI HJHJKHKH EFEFELEL MIMDMHMH MHMHEBEB NHNHOPOP EQEQMRMR QQQQSKSK QQQQMHMH TUTUQVQV EWEWMXMX

OUT OF LUCK mate Have a liquor Hang it where s the use complainingA
Take your fancy I m in funds now I can stand the racket DanB
Dump your bluey in the corner camp here for the night it s rainingA
Bet your life I m glad to see you glad to see a Daylesford manB
Swell Correct Dan Spot the get up and I own this blooming shantyC
Me the fellows christened Jonah at Jim Crow and Blanket FlatD
Cause my luck was so infernal you remember me and CantyC
Rough times those the very memory keeps a chap from getting fatD
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Where d I strike it That s a yarn The fire s a comfort sit up nearerE
Hoist your heels man take it easy till Kate s ready with the stewF
Yes I ll tell my little story tain t a long one but it s queererE
Than those lies that Tullock pitched us on The Flat inG
Fancy Phil a parson now He s smug as grease the Reverend TullockH
Yes he s big his wife and fam ly are a high and mighty lotI
Didn t I say his jaw would keep him when he tired of punching mullockH
Well it has he s made his pile here How d you like your whisky hotI
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Luck Well now I like your cheek Dan You had luck there s no denyingH
I in thirty years had averaged just a wage of twenty bobJ
Why at Alma there I saw men making fortunes without tryingH
While for days I lived on possums and then had to take a jobJ
Bah you talk about misfortune my ill luck was always thoroughK
Gold once ran away before me if I chased it for a weekH
I was starved at Tarrangower lived on tick at MaryboroughK
And I fell and broke my thigh bone at the start of Fiery CreekH
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At Avoca Canty left me Jim you know was not a croakerE
But he jacked the whole arrangement found we couldn t make a doF
Said he loved me like a brother but twas rough upon a jokerE
When he d got to fight the devil and find luck enough for twoF
Jim was off I didn t blame him seeing what he d had to sufferE
When Maginnis just beside us panned out fifty to the tubL
We had pegged out hours before him and had struck another dufferE
And each store upon the lead my lad had laid us up for grubL
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After that I picked up Barlow but we parted at DunollyM
When we d struggled through at Alma Adelaide Lead and AraratI
See my luck was hard upon him he contracted melancholyM
And he hung himself one morning in the shaft at Parrot FlatD
Ding it No Where gold was getting I was on the job and earlyM
Struck some tucker dirt at Armstrong s and just lived at Pleasant CreekH
Always grafting like a good un never hopeless like or surlyM
Living partly on my earnings Dan but largely on my cheekH
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Good old days they like to call them they were tough old days to manyM
I was through them and they left me still the choice to graft or begH
Left me gray and worn and wrinkled aged and stumped without a pennyM
With a chronic rheumatism and this darned old twisted legH
Other work That s true in plenty But you know the real old stagerE
Who has followed up the diggings how he hangs on to the panB
How he hates to leave the pipeclay Though you mention it I ll wagerE
That you never worked on top until you couldn t help it DanB
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Years went by On many fields I worked and often missed a meal andN
Then I found Victoria played out and the yields were very slackH
So I took a turn up Northward tried Tasmania and New ZealandN
Dan I worked my passage over and I sneaked the journey backH
Times were worse I made a cradle and went fossicking old placesO
But the Chows had been before me and had scraped the country bareP
There was talk of splendid patches mongst the creeks and round the racesO
But twas not my luck to strike them and I think I lived on airP
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Rough That s not the word So help me Dan I hadn t got a stiverE
When I caved in one fine Sunday found I couldn t lift my headQ
They removed me and the doctor said I d got rheumatic feverE
And for seven months I lingered in a ward upon a bedQ
Came out crippled feeling done up hopeless like and very lonelyM
And dead beat right down to bed rock as I d never felt beforeR
Bitter Just Those hopeful years of honest graft had left me onlyM
This bent leg and some asylum was the prospect I d in storeR
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You ll be knowing how I felt then cleaned out lame completely gravelledQ
All the friends I d known were scattered widely north and east and westQ
There seemed nothing there for my sort and no chances if I travelledQ
No my digging days were over and I had to give it bestQ
Though twas hard I tried to meet it like a man in digger fashionS
Twasn t good enough I funked it I was fairly on the shelfK
Cursed my bitter fortune daily and was always in a passionS
With the Lord sir and with everyone but mostly with myselfK
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I was older twenty years then than I am this blessed minuteQ
But I got a job one morning knapping rock at BallaratQ
Two and three for two inch metal You may say there s nothing in itQ
To the man who s been through Eaglehawk and mined at Blanket FlatQ
Wait you d better let me finish We and ill I bucked in gladlyM
But to get the tools I needed I was forced to pawn my swagH
I d no hope of golden patches but I needed tucker badlyM
And this job I think just saved me being lumbered on the vagH
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Fortune is a fickle party but in spite of all her failingsT
Don t revile her Dan as I did while you ve still a little ropeU
Well the heap that I was put on was some heavy quartz and tailingsT
That was carted from a local mine I think the Band of HopeU
Take the lesson that is coming to your heart old man and hug itQ
For I started on the heap with scarce a soul to call my ownV
And in less than twenty minutes I d raked out a bouncing nuggetQ
Scaling close on ninety ounces and just frosted round with stoneV
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How is that for high my hearty Miracle It was by thunderE
After forty years of following the rushes up and downW
Getting old and past all prospect and about to knuckle underE
Struck it lucky knapping metal in the middle of a townW
Pass the bottle Have another Soon we ll get the word from KittyM
She s a daisy cook I tell you Yes the public business paysX
But my pile was made beforehand made it broking in the cityM
That s the yarn I pitch the neighbours Here s to good old now a daysX

Edward George Dyson



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