Unwanted Visitor Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCD AA EEFE GGG HHH II| Here again pain crawling at my door | A |
| what do you want I have nothing to give to you cause i am so poor | B |
| I couldn't take a step forward towards my door cause of my fears | C |
| fears that I had nothing to give to pain not even my tears | D |
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| am not gonna do this with you on like before | A |
| leave me alone I don't wanna cry anymore | A |
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| what's your gain | E |
| why do you enjoy seeing tears flowing from my eyes to the ground like rain | E |
| Oh mine not again | F |
| I yelled at pain | E |
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| all I wanted at that moment was my happiness | G |
| I had to beg pain to please go with sadness | G |
| and pain said it's gonna stay with you cause of your loneliness | G |
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| right now I need a friend | H |
| someone that can put all these to an end someone that won't completely break my cracked heart but amend | H |
| someone that won't push me away but his shoulders he will lend | H |
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| all the things pain listed for me to offer before it leaves I had none | I |
| please pain go I promise to get one | I |
Edith Nornubari
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 04/30/2026
Poet's note: This poem was written when I was depressed. The only friend available was my pen and paper.
It is an expression of pain and hurt due to loneliness.
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