Lilli Alm Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDE FBGAHGIJKL MNOPQRSTUVWXXYAZUASS A2B2SXC2DDXD2XXE2YXX DF2SDXG2DH2DXXHXDADV DD DF2XI2XXG2DXJ2K2DL2M 2 N2F2DO2ADADDXYI2P2Q2 XXXD XR2DDS2XXVXDT2X XU2UN2XV2SXW2X2DD XXXVVVVDXQ2R2XDDDY2X XDDZ2DDXXA3XDIn Lola Schaefer's studio in the Tower | A |
Tea being served to painters poets singers | B |
Herr Ludwig Haibt a none too welcome guest | C |
Of vital body brisk too loud of voice | D |
And Lilli Alm crossed swords | E |
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It came about | F |
When Ludwig Haibt said Have you read the papers | B |
About this Elenor Murray And then said | G |
I tried to train her voice she was a failure | A |
And Lilli Alm who taught the art of song | H |
Looked at him half contemptuous and said | G |
Why did she fail To which Herr Ludwig answered | I |
She tried too hard She made her throat too tense | J |
And made its muscles stiff by too much thought | K |
Anxiety for song the vocal triumph | L |
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O yes I understand said Lilli Aim | M |
Then stabbing him she added since you dropped | N |
The Perfect Institute and dropped the idea | O |
Which stresses training muscles of the tongue | P |
And all that thing be fair and shoulder half | Q |
The failure of poor Elenor Murray on | R |
Your system's failure For I chanced to know | S |
The girl myself She started work with me | T |
And I am sure that if I had been able | U |
With time enough I could have done it too | V |
To rid her mind of muscles and to fix | W |
The thought alone of music in her mind | X |
She would have sung Now listen Ludwig Haibt | X |
You've come around to see that song's the thing | Y |
I take a pupil and I say to her | A |
The mind must fix itself on music say | Z |
I would make song pure tones and beautiful | U |
That comes from spirit from the Plato rapture | A |
Which gets the idea It is well to know | S |
Some physiology I grant to know | S |
When how to move the vocal organs feel | A2 |
How they are moving through the ear to place | B2 |
These organs in relation and to know | S |
The soft palate is drawn against the hard | X |
The tongue can take positions numerous | C2 |
Can be used at the root a throaty voice | D |
Or with the tip produce expressiveness | D |
But what must we avoid rigidity | X |
And if that girl was over zealous then | D2 |
So much the more her teaching should have kept | X |
Mind off the larynx and the tongue and fixed | X |
Upon the spiritual matters so to give | E2 |
The snake like power of loosening contracting | Y |
The muscles used for singing Ludwig Haibt | X |
I can forgive your system since abandoned | X |
I can't forgive your words to day who say | D |
This woman failed for trying over much | F2 |
When I know that your system made her throw | S |
An energy truly wonderful on muscles | D |
And when I think of your book where you said | X |
The singing voice is the result observe | G2 |
Of physical conditions like the strings | D |
Or tubes of brass While granting that it's well | H2 |
To know the art of tuning up the strings | D |
And how to place them after all the art | X |
Of tuning and of placing comes from mind | X |
The idea and the art of making song | H |
Is just the breathing of the perfect spirit | X |
Upon the strings The throat is but the leaves | D |
Let them be flexible the mouth's the flower | A |
The tone the perfume And your olden way | D |
Of harping on the larynx well since you | V |
Turned from it I'm ungenerous perhaps | D |
To scold you thus to day | D |
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But this I say | D |
Let us be frank as teachers Take the fetich | F2 |
Of breathing and see how you cripple talent | X |
Or take that matter of the laryngyscope | I2 |
Whereby you photograph a singer's throat | X |
Caruso's Galli Curci's at the moment | X |
Of greatest beauty in song and thus preserve | G2 |
In photographs before you how the muscles | D |
Looked and were placed that moment Then attempt | X |
To get the like effect by placing them | J2 |
In similar fashion Oh you know Herr Ludwig | K2 |
These fetiches go by One thing remains | D |
The idea in the soul of beauty music | L2 |
The hope to give it forth | M2 |
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Alas to think | N2 |
So many souls are wasted while we teach | F2 |
This thing or that The strong survive of course | D |
But take this Elenor Murray why that girl | O2 |
Was just a flame I never saw such hunger | A |
For self development and beauty richness | D |
In all experience in life I knew her | A |
That's why I say so take her as I say | D |
And put her to a practice yours we'll say | D |
Where this great zeal she had is turned and pressed | X |
Upon the physical just the very thing | Y |
To make her throat constrict and fill her up | I2 |
With over anxiety and make her fail | P2 |
When had she come to me at first this passion | Q2 |
Directed to the beauty the idea | X |
Had put her soul at ease to ease her body | X |
Which gradually and beautifully had answered | X |
That flame of hers | D |
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Well Ludwig Haibt you're punished | X |
For wasting several years upon a system | R2 |
Since put away as half erroneous | D |
If not quite worthless But I must confess | D |
Since I have censured you to my own sin | S2 |
This girl ran out of money came to me | X |
And told me so To which I said Too bad | X |
You will have money later when you do | V |
Come back to me She stood a silent moment | X |
Her hand upon the knob I saw her tears | D |
Just little dim tears then she said good bye | T2 |
And vanished from me | X |
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Well I now repent | X |
I who have thought of beauty all my life | U2 |
And taught the art of sound made beautiful | U |
Let slip a chance for beauty why I think | N2 |
A beauty just as great as song You see | X |
I had a chance to serve a hungering soul | V2 |
I could have said just let the money go | S |
Or let it go until you get the money | X |
I let that chance for beauty slip Even now | W2 |
I see poor Elenor Murray at the door | X2 |
Who paused no doubt in hope that I would say | D |
What I thought not to say | D |
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So Ludwig Haibt | X |
We are a poor lot let us have some tea | X |
We are a poor lot Ludwig Haibt replied | X |
But since this is confessional I absolve you | V |
If you'll permit me from your sin Will you | V |
Absolve me if I say I'm sorry too | V |
I'll tell you something it is really true | V |
I changed my system more I think because | D |
Of what I learned from teaching Elenor Murray | X |
Than on account of any other person | Q2 |
She demonstrated better where my system | R2 |
Was lacking than all pupils that I had | X |
And so I changed it and of course I say | D |
The thing is music just as poets say | D |
The thing is beauty not the rhyme and words | D |
With which they bring it instruments that's all | Y2 |
And not the thing but beauty | X |
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So they talked | X |
Forgave each other And that very day | D |
Two priests were talking of confessionals | D |
A mile or so from the Tower where Lilli Alm | Z2 |
And Ludwig Haibt were having tea You say | D |
The coroner was ignorant of this | D |
What is the part it plays with Elenor Murray | X |
Or with the inquest Wait a little yet | X |
And see if Merival has told to him | A3 |
What thing of value touching Elenor Murray | X |
Is lodged in Father Whimsett's heart or words | D |
Edgar Lee Masters
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