Lilli Alm Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDE FBGAHGIJKL MNOPQRSTUVWXXYAZUASS A2B2SXC2DDXD2XXE2YXX DF2SDXG2DH2DXXHXDADV DD DF2XI2XXG2DXJ2K2DL2M 2 N2F2DO2ADADDXYI2P2Q2 XXXD XR2DDS2XXVXDT2X XU2UN2XV2SXW2X2DD XXXVVVVDXQ2R2XDDDY2X XDDZ2DDXXA3XD

In Lola Schaefer's studio in the TowerA
Tea being served to painters poets singersB
Herr Ludwig Haibt a none too welcome guestC
Of vital body brisk too loud of voiceD
And Lilli Alm crossed swordsE
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It came aboutF
When Ludwig Haibt said Have you read the papersB
About this Elenor Murray And then saidG
I tried to train her voice she was a failureA
And Lilli Alm who taught the art of songH
Looked at him half contemptuous and saidG
Why did she fail To which Herr Ludwig answeredI
She tried too hard She made her throat too tenseJ
And made its muscles stiff by too much thoughtK
Anxiety for song the vocal triumphL
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O yes I understand said Lilli AimM
Then stabbing him she added since you droppedN
The Perfect Institute and dropped the ideaO
Which stresses training muscles of the tongueP
And all that thing be fair and shoulder halfQ
The failure of poor Elenor Murray onR
Your system's failure For I chanced to knowS
The girl myself She started work with meT
And I am sure that if I had been ableU
With time enough I could have done it tooV
To rid her mind of muscles and to fixW
The thought alone of music in her mindX
She would have sung Now listen Ludwig HaibtX
You've come around to see that song's the thingY
I take a pupil and I say to herA
The mind must fix itself on music sayZ
I would make song pure tones and beautifulU
That comes from spirit from the Plato raptureA
Which gets the idea It is well to knowS
Some physiology I grant to knowS
When how to move the vocal organs feelA2
How they are moving through the ear to placeB2
These organs in relation and to knowS
The soft palate is drawn against the hardX
The tongue can take positions numerousC2
Can be used at the root a throaty voiceD
Or with the tip produce expressivenessD
But what must we avoid rigidityX
And if that girl was over zealous thenD2
So much the more her teaching should have keptX
Mind off the larynx and the tongue and fixedX
Upon the spiritual matters so to giveE2
The snake like power of loosening contractingY
The muscles used for singing Ludwig HaibtX
I can forgive your system since abandonedX
I can't forgive your words to day who sayD
This woman failed for trying over muchF2
When I know that your system made her throwS
An energy truly wonderful on musclesD
And when I think of your book where you saidX
The singing voice is the result observeG2
Of physical conditions like the stringsD
Or tubes of brass While granting that it's wellH2
To know the art of tuning up the stringsD
And how to place them after all the artX
Of tuning and of placing comes from mindX
The idea and the art of making songH
Is just the breathing of the perfect spiritX
Upon the strings The throat is but the leavesD
Let them be flexible the mouth's the flowerA
The tone the perfume And your olden wayD
Of harping on the larynx well since youV
Turned from it I'm ungenerous perhapsD
To scold you thus to dayD
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But this I sayD
Let us be frank as teachers Take the fetichF2
Of breathing and see how you cripple talentX
Or take that matter of the laryngyscopeI2
Whereby you photograph a singer's throatX
Caruso's Galli Curci's at the momentX
Of greatest beauty in song and thus preserveG2
In photographs before you how the musclesD
Looked and were placed that moment Then attemptX
To get the like effect by placing themJ2
In similar fashion Oh you know Herr LudwigK2
These fetiches go by One thing remainsD
The idea in the soul of beauty musicL2
The hope to give it forthM2
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Alas to thinkN2
So many souls are wasted while we teachF2
This thing or that The strong survive of courseD
But take this Elenor Murray why that girlO2
Was just a flame I never saw such hungerA
For self development and beauty richnessD
In all experience in life I knew herA
That's why I say so take her as I sayD
And put her to a practice yours we'll sayD
Where this great zeal she had is turned and pressedX
Upon the physical just the very thingY
To make her throat constrict and fill her upI2
With over anxiety and make her failP2
When had she come to me at first this passionQ2
Directed to the beauty the ideaX
Had put her soul at ease to ease her bodyX
Which gradually and beautifully had answeredX
That flame of hersD
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Well Ludwig Haibt you're punishedX
For wasting several years upon a systemR2
Since put away as half erroneousD
If not quite worthless But I must confessD
Since I have censured you to my own sinS2
This girl ran out of money came to meX
And told me so To which I said Too badX
You will have money later when you doV
Come back to me She stood a silent momentX
Her hand upon the knob I saw her tearsD
Just little dim tears then she said good byeT2
And vanished from meX
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Well I now repentX
I who have thought of beauty all my lifeU2
And taught the art of sound made beautifulU
Let slip a chance for beauty why I thinkN2
A beauty just as great as song You seeX
I had a chance to serve a hungering soulV2
I could have said just let the money goS
Or let it go until you get the moneyX
I let that chance for beauty slip Even nowW2
I see poor Elenor Murray at the doorX2
Who paused no doubt in hope that I would sayD
What I thought not to sayD
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So Ludwig HaibtX
We are a poor lot let us have some teaX
We are a poor lot Ludwig Haibt repliedX
But since this is confessional I absolve youV
If you'll permit me from your sin Will youV
Absolve me if I say I'm sorry tooV
I'll tell you something it is really trueV
I changed my system more I think becauseD
Of what I learned from teaching Elenor MurrayX
Than on account of any other personQ2
She demonstrated better where my systemR2
Was lacking than all pupils that I hadX
And so I changed it and of course I sayD
The thing is music just as poets sayD
The thing is beauty not the rhyme and wordsD
With which they bring it instruments that's allY2
And not the thing but beautyX
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So they talkedX
Forgave each other And that very dayD
Two priests were talking of confessionalsD
A mile or so from the Tower where Lilli AlmZ2
And Ludwig Haibt were having tea You sayD
The coroner was ignorant of thisD
What is the part it plays with Elenor MurrayX
Or with the inquest Wait a little yetX
And see if Merival has told to himA3
What thing of value touching Elenor MurrayX
Is lodged in Father Whimsett's heart or wordsD

Edgar Lee Masters



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