The Ice-floes Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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Dawn from the Foretop Dawn from the BarrelA
A scurry of feet with a roar overheadB
The master watch wildly pointing to NorthwardC
Where the herd in front of The Eagle was spreadB
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Steel planked and sheathed like a battleship's noseD
She battered her path through the drifting floesD
Past slob and growler we drove and rammed herE
Into the heart of the patch and jammed herE
There were hundreds of thousands of seals I'd swearF
In the stretch of that field 'white harps' to spareF
For a dozen such fleets as had left that springG
To share in the general harvestingG
The first of the line we had struck the main herdC
The day was ours and our pulses stirredC
In that brisk live hour before the sunH
At the thought of the load and the sweepstake wonH
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We stood on the deck as the morning outrolledC
On the fields its tissue of orange and goldC
And lit up the ice to the north in the sharpI
Clear air each mother seal and its 'harp'I
Lay side by side and as far as the rangeJ
Of the patch ran out we saw that strangeJ
And unimaginable thingG
That sealers talk of every springG
The 'bobbing holes' within the floesD
That neither wind nor frost could closeD
Through every hole a seal could diveK
And search to keep her brood aliveK
A hundred miles it well might beL
For food beneath that frozen seaL
Round sunken reef and cape she would roveM
And though the wind and current droveM
The ice fields many leagues that dayC
We knew she would turn and find her wayC
Back to the hole without the helpI
Of compass or log to suckle her whelpI
Back to that hole in the distant floesL
And smash her way up with her teeth and noseL
But we flung those thoughts aside when the shoutC
Of command from the master watch rang outC
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Assigned to our places in watches of fourN
Over the rails in a wild carouseL
Two from the port and starboard bowsL
Two from the broadsides off we toreN
In the breathless rush for the day's attackO
With the speed of hounds on a caribou's trackO
With the rise of the sun we started to killP
A seal for each blow from the iron billP
Of our gaffs From the nose to the tail we ripped themQ
And laid their quivering carcasses flatC
On the ice then with our knives we stripped themQ
For the sake of the pelt and its lining of fatC
With three fathoms of rope we laced them fastC
With their skins to the ice to be easy to dragR
With our shoulders galled we drew them and castC
Them in thousands around the watch's flagR
Then with our bodies begrimed with the reekS
Of grease and sweat from the toil of the dayC
We made for The Eagle two miles awayC
At the signal that flew from her mizzen peakS
And through the night as inch by inchT
She reached the pans with the 'harps' piled highU
We hoisted them up as the hours filed byU
To the sleepy growl of the donkey winchT
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Over the bulwarks again we were goneV
With the first faint streaks of a misty dawnV
Fast as our arms could swing we slew themQ
Ripped them 'sculped' them roped and drew themQ
To the pans where the seals in pyramids roseL
Around the flags on the central floesL
Till we reckoned we had nine thousand deadC
By the time the afternoon had fledC
And that an added thousand or moreN
Would beat the count of the day beforeN
So back again to the patch we wentC
To haul before the day was spentC
Another load of four 'harps' a manW
To make the last the record panW
And not one of us saw as we gaffed and skinnedC
And took them in tow that the north east windC
Had veered off shore that the air was colderE
That the signs of recall were there to the southX
The flag of The Eagle and the long thin smoulderE
That drifted away from her funnel's mouthX
Not one of us thought of the speed of the stormY
That hounded our tracks in the day's last chaseL
For the slaughter was swift and the blood was warmY
Till we felt the first sting of the snow in our faceL
We looked south east where an hour agoZ
Like a smudge on the sky line someone had seenA2
The Eagle and thought he had heard her blowZ
A note like a warning from her sireneA2
We gathered in knots each man within callB2
Of his mate and slipping our ropes we spedC
Plunging our way through a thickening wallB2
Of snow that the gale was driving aheadC
We ran with the wind on our shoulder we knewA2
That the night had left us this only clueA2
Of the track before us though with each wailC2
That grew to the pang of a shriek from the galeC2
Some of us swore that The Eagle screamedC
Right off to the east to others it seemedC
On the southern quarter and near while the restC
Cried out with every report that roseL
From the strain and the rend of the wind on the floesL
That The Eagle was firing her guns to the westC
And some of them turned to the west though to goZ
Was madness we knew it and roared but the notesL
Of our warning were lost as a fierce gust of snowZ
Eddied and strangled the words in our throatsL
Then we felt in our hearts that the night had swallowedC
All signals the whistle the flare and the smokeD2
To the south and like sheep in a storm we followedC
Each other like sheep we huddled and brokeD2
Here one would fall as hunger took holdC
Of his step here one would sleep as the coldC
Crept into his blood and another would kneelE2
Athwart the body of some dead sealE2
And with knife and nails would tear it apartC
To flesh his teeth in its frozen heartC
And another dreamed that the storm was pastC
And raved of his bunk and brandy and foodC
And The Eagle near though in that blastC
The mother was fully as blind as her broodC
Then we saw what we feared from the first dark placesL
Here and there to the left of us wide yawning spacesL
Of water the fissures and cracks had increasedC
Till the outer pans were afloat and we knewA2
As they drifted along in the night to the eastC
By the cries we heard that some of our crewA2
Were borne to the sea on those pans and were lostC
And we turned with the wind in our faces againA2
And took the snow with its lancing painA2
Till our eye balls cracked with the salt and the frostC
Till only iron and fire that nightC
Survived on the ice as we stumbled onA2
As we fell and rose and plunged till the lightC
In the south and east disclosed the dawnA2
And the sea heaving with floes and thenA2
The Eagle in wild pursuit of her menA2
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And the rest is as a story toldC
Or a dream that belonged to a dim mad pastC
Of a March night and a north wind's coldC
Of a voyage home with a flag half mastC
Of twenty thousand seals that were killedC
To help to lower the price of breadC
Of the muffled beat of a drum that filledC
A nave at our count of sixty deadC

E. J. Pratt



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