The Ice-floes Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCB DDEEFFGGCCHH CCIIJJGGDDKKLLMMCCII LLCC NLLNOOPPQCQCCRCRSCCS TUUT VVQQLLCCNNCCWWCCEXEX YLYLZA2ZA2B2CB2CA2A2 C2C2CCCLLCZLZLCD2CD2 CCE2E2CCCCCCLLCA2CA2 CA2A2CCA2CA2A2A2 CCCCCCCCDawn from the Foretop Dawn from the Barrel | A |
A scurry of feet with a roar overhead | B |
The master watch wildly pointing to Northward | C |
Where the herd in front of The Eagle was spread | B |
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Steel planked and sheathed like a battleship's nose | D |
She battered her path through the drifting floes | D |
Past slob and growler we drove and rammed her | E |
Into the heart of the patch and jammed her | E |
There were hundreds of thousands of seals I'd swear | F |
In the stretch of that field 'white harps' to spare | F |
For a dozen such fleets as had left that spring | G |
To share in the general harvesting | G |
The first of the line we had struck the main herd | C |
The day was ours and our pulses stirred | C |
In that brisk live hour before the sun | H |
At the thought of the load and the sweepstake won | H |
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We stood on the deck as the morning outrolled | C |
On the fields its tissue of orange and gold | C |
And lit up the ice to the north in the sharp | I |
Clear air each mother seal and its 'harp' | I |
Lay side by side and as far as the range | J |
Of the patch ran out we saw that strange | J |
And unimaginable thing | G |
That sealers talk of every spring | G |
The 'bobbing holes' within the floes | D |
That neither wind nor frost could close | D |
Through every hole a seal could dive | K |
And search to keep her brood alive | K |
A hundred miles it well might be | L |
For food beneath that frozen sea | L |
Round sunken reef and cape she would rove | M |
And though the wind and current drove | M |
The ice fields many leagues that day | C |
We knew she would turn and find her way | C |
Back to the hole without the help | I |
Of compass or log to suckle her whelp | I |
Back to that hole in the distant floes | L |
And smash her way up with her teeth and nose | L |
But we flung those thoughts aside when the shout | C |
Of command from the master watch rang out | C |
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Assigned to our places in watches of four | N |
Over the rails in a wild carouse | L |
Two from the port and starboard bows | L |
Two from the broadsides off we tore | N |
In the breathless rush for the day's attack | O |
With the speed of hounds on a caribou's track | O |
With the rise of the sun we started to kill | P |
A seal for each blow from the iron bill | P |
Of our gaffs From the nose to the tail we ripped them | Q |
And laid their quivering carcasses flat | C |
On the ice then with our knives we stripped them | Q |
For the sake of the pelt and its lining of fat | C |
With three fathoms of rope we laced them fast | C |
With their skins to the ice to be easy to drag | R |
With our shoulders galled we drew them and cast | C |
Them in thousands around the watch's flag | R |
Then with our bodies begrimed with the reek | S |
Of grease and sweat from the toil of the day | C |
We made for The Eagle two miles away | C |
At the signal that flew from her mizzen peak | S |
And through the night as inch by inch | T |
She reached the pans with the 'harps' piled high | U |
We hoisted them up as the hours filed by | U |
To the sleepy growl of the donkey winch | T |
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Over the bulwarks again we were gone | V |
With the first faint streaks of a misty dawn | V |
Fast as our arms could swing we slew them | Q |
Ripped them 'sculped' them roped and drew them | Q |
To the pans where the seals in pyramids rose | L |
Around the flags on the central floes | L |
Till we reckoned we had nine thousand dead | C |
By the time the afternoon had fled | C |
And that an added thousand or more | N |
Would beat the count of the day before | N |
So back again to the patch we went | C |
To haul before the day was spent | C |
Another load of four 'harps' a man | W |
To make the last the record pan | W |
And not one of us saw as we gaffed and skinned | C |
And took them in tow that the north east wind | C |
Had veered off shore that the air was colder | E |
That the signs of recall were there to the south | X |
The flag of The Eagle and the long thin smoulder | E |
That drifted away from her funnel's mouth | X |
Not one of us thought of the speed of the storm | Y |
That hounded our tracks in the day's last chase | L |
For the slaughter was swift and the blood was warm | Y |
Till we felt the first sting of the snow in our face | L |
We looked south east where an hour ago | Z |
Like a smudge on the sky line someone had seen | A2 |
The Eagle and thought he had heard her blow | Z |
A note like a warning from her sirene | A2 |
We gathered in knots each man within call | B2 |
Of his mate and slipping our ropes we sped | C |
Plunging our way through a thickening wall | B2 |
Of snow that the gale was driving ahead | C |
We ran with the wind on our shoulder we knew | A2 |
That the night had left us this only clue | A2 |
Of the track before us though with each wail | C2 |
That grew to the pang of a shriek from the gale | C2 |
Some of us swore that The Eagle screamed | C |
Right off to the east to others it seemed | C |
On the southern quarter and near while the rest | C |
Cried out with every report that rose | L |
From the strain and the rend of the wind on the floes | L |
That The Eagle was firing her guns to the west | C |
And some of them turned to the west though to go | Z |
Was madness we knew it and roared but the notes | L |
Of our warning were lost as a fierce gust of snow | Z |
Eddied and strangled the words in our throats | L |
Then we felt in our hearts that the night had swallowed | C |
All signals the whistle the flare and the smoke | D2 |
To the south and like sheep in a storm we followed | C |
Each other like sheep we huddled and broke | D2 |
Here one would fall as hunger took hold | C |
Of his step here one would sleep as the cold | C |
Crept into his blood and another would kneel | E2 |
Athwart the body of some dead seal | E2 |
And with knife and nails would tear it apart | C |
To flesh his teeth in its frozen heart | C |
And another dreamed that the storm was past | C |
And raved of his bunk and brandy and food | C |
And The Eagle near though in that blast | C |
The mother was fully as blind as her brood | C |
Then we saw what we feared from the first dark places | L |
Here and there to the left of us wide yawning spaces | L |
Of water the fissures and cracks had increased | C |
Till the outer pans were afloat and we knew | A2 |
As they drifted along in the night to the east | C |
By the cries we heard that some of our crew | A2 |
Were borne to the sea on those pans and were lost | C |
And we turned with the wind in our faces again | A2 |
And took the snow with its lancing pain | A2 |
Till our eye balls cracked with the salt and the frost | C |
Till only iron and fire that night | C |
Survived on the ice as we stumbled on | A2 |
As we fell and rose and plunged till the light | C |
In the south and east disclosed the dawn | A2 |
And the sea heaving with floes and then | A2 |
The Eagle in wild pursuit of her men | A2 |
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And the rest is as a story told | C |
Or a dream that belonged to a dim mad past | C |
Of a March night and a north wind's cold | C |
Of a voyage home with a flag half mast | C |
Of twenty thousand seals that were killed | C |
To help to lower the price of bread | C |
Of the muffled beat of a drum that filled | C |
A nave at our count of sixty dead | C |
E. J. Pratt
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