Not Here, But Still Near Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABBCDCEFGHHIJFKLLDMD NCNCOPPDQQRRSTUVV| There are so many things | A |
| I wanted you to know | B |
| but I had no idea you'd go | B |
| My friend our brother | C |
| We'll miss you | D |
| there'll be no other | C |
| standing on a mountain | E |
| standing on the edge | F |
| ready to fall because I'll never hear your call | G |
| Do you know how it feels | H |
| knowing that we'll never share our school break meals | H |
| Everyone says time heal | I |
| but it feels like it kills | J |
| I'm walking on a ledge | F |
| about to fall in a hole | K |
| Everything I feel inside | L |
| because of my stupid pride | L |
| but I miss you | D |
| and I know you can hear | M |
| even though we can't see you | D |
| I know we feel you near | N |
| maybe in the future I'll feel better | C |
| and the clouds will clear | N |
| and change the weather | C |
| I'll take this as a sign | O |
| to start living life | P |
| and cut out all strife | P |
| we all should too | D |
| life is short | Q |
| it's time to abort | Q |
| all the bad | R |
| that makes us sad | R |
| he may be gone but he's at peace | S |
| but he has the keys | T |
| to all our hearts | U |
| and we'll never forget | V |
| the eternal mark he set | V |
Duwayne Frieslaar
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 06/05/2021
Poet's note: I wrote this poem for everyone who has lost a loved one. I want to express hope for light and love. It's about a school mate who has passed away. This poem was written on the fifth of June 2021.
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