A Little Pang Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABC DEEF GHIJ KKLMK NOP KQK RNS

My pain let feel your painsA
Your tear won t fed my eyesB
The choice has suffocated my mindsC
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Uuh Your tasteD
With your embraceE
Have casted my faceE
To hear you say bye byeF
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One thing I dreamedG
My passion has smearedH
Ooh Now testifiedI
The spirit isn t bonedJ
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My angelK
You ve beckoned the devilK
Throwing our love in hellL
With wits and suits above allM
I ll never disprove your vitalK
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I declare the failureN
For it has dropped an ordinary princeO
From the throne of stateP
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It has swept a lion from the jangleK
Before the council of decreeQ
My love was in troubleK
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Only a sort of memory about youR
Will last foreverN
The world turnS

Daudi Mwanambuu
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 02/28/2021

Poet's note: translations The poem depicts a true story happened some years ago, within a couple which anciently seem to be as strong as that of The great Adam and Eva in the garden, but after sometimes later, the spirit of the devil invaded one of the two lovers, it was then the beginning of troubles and the return of devil’s daytime in between, things became harder and harder to the extent that true love turned to enormity. Love is in fact the necessary evil for it brings sadness and smiles at the same, it is of cause ridiculous because it is best of leading two lovers to unfulfilled plans. Northing good hasn’t badness. Make your love serious to the serious person if any, otherwise single life is healthier than engaging unreasonably in love affairs.




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