Vi'lits Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AABCC DDEE DDEEFF G DD DDHHII JJDDII FFKKI LLIIDD FFIIII DDFFH FDDMM

I wus pickin' gipsy vi'lits fer to try an' square DoreenA
We 'ad words about pianners fer she wants one awful keenA
'Igh words about 'igh toned idears an' like a love sick fool 'Ere I'm pickin' gipsy vl'llts when the kid come 'ome frum schoolB
'E started school a month ago an' ain't got very farC
But judgin' be the scraps 'e 'as 'e's takin' after ParC
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I tips there's somethin' wrong the way 'e sneaks around the 'ouseD
An' then I seen 'is eye Oh strike 'E 'ad a bonzer mouseD
A reel black eye that in me day I would 'a' worn wiv prideE
But I'm a father now an' sez ''Ere son you git insideE
An' show yer mother that there eye 'Ow did it come about '-
Sez 'e 'A big bloke gimme that I knocked the beggar out '-
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I looks fer 'arf a second at the fambily disgraceD
Then I picks another vi'lit so 'e couldn't see me faceD
I wus grinnin' most unfatherlike an' feelin' good insideE
'You show yer Mar that eye uv yours I'm 'shamed uv you ' I liedE
I watch 'im creep inside the 'ouse an' 'ear 'is mother's yellF
An' then I straightens up me face an' goes inside as wellF
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'Twus raw beef steak an' vinegar an' tears before she's doneG
An' the sort uv look she gimme sez 'Yeh see 'ow 'e's begun '-
I don't disturb the rites excep' to give some kind adviceD
In younger days I've caught black eyes an' give 'em once or twiceD
'That big boy should be punished ' sez Doreen ''oo 'it our Bill '-
I pats the 'ero's bandages an' answers 'er ''E will '-
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That ev'nin' down be'ind the shed near where the scrub grows denseD
I gives young Bill a lesson in the art uv self defenceD
I teaches 'im an uppercut that Ginger Mick tort meH
In ole days down in Spadger's Lane I gits down on me kneeH
To show 'im 'ow to time 'is 'it 'E sneaks beneath me guardI
Quite sudden while I'm yappin' an' 'e cracks me one reel 'ardI
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Did it please me Wot do you think Strike That kid 'as got the knackJ
An' it pleased me all to pieces 'ow the ole game all came backJ
Left swings an' jolts an' short arm jabs the 'ole dash box uv tricksD
Sich as we used down in the Lane when we wus short uv bricksD
I'm showin' 'im a fancy 'it a reel ole ding dong cloutI
When the murderin' young savage tries to knock me front teeth outI
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Uv course 'e 'urt 'is little 'and an' fetches out a yellF
That brings Doreen down double quick An' then it wus merry 'ellF
She grabs the kid up in 'er arms an' gives me sich a lookK
As I ain't seen since years ago when I done somethin' crookK
'You'll 'ave 'im like you wus ' she cries 'I'd sooner see 'im deadI
You want to make'im ' 'Don't ' I sez 'We'll take the rest as said '-
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It 'urt to see 'er shieldin' 'im as tho' I wus a plagueL
An' ain't 'e mine as much as 'ers Yet I seen sort o' vagueL
The woman's way she looked at it the picters that she 'adI
Uv young Bill goin' to the pack an' follerin' 'is dadI
I tries me 'ardest to ixplain an' made some fool ixcuseD
But I'm marri'd to a woman an' Aw wot's the flamin' useD
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I tells 'er if we'd 'ave young Bill keep up 'is end at schoolF
'E will 'ave to use 'is flippers but I sez it like a foolF
I sez it like I wus ashamed to 'ave 'im learn to fightI
When all the time down in me 'cart I knoo that I wus rightI
She just gives me another look an' goes in wiv the kidI
An' me I picks them vi'lits up not knowin' wot I didI
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I 'as them fool things in me 'and when I lobs in the 'ouseD
An' makes bets wiv meself about the chances that she'll rouseD
But 'er she comes the calm an' cold Think's I ''Ere's where I fallF
Fer a forty quid pianner if I want to square it allF
Goo' bye to forty lovely quid time paymint fifty threeH
Then all at once she smiles an' sez 'Did you pick those fer me '-
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'Did you pick those fer me ' she sez 'Oh Bill ' 'an then 'Oh Bill '-
I 'ints I 'ad idears to leave 'em to 'er in me willF
She grabs them dilly vi'lits an' she 'olds 'em to 'er noseD
'Oh Bill ' she smiles 'You alwus knoo 'ow fond I wus uv thoseD
Oh Bill You dear ' She 'ugs me then jist in the same ole wayM
'Struth I'm marri'd to a woman an' I'll learn young Bill some dayM

Clarence Michael James Stanislaus Dennis



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