Before The War Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCBBDBD EFEFFCF GHHHHHHH HIHIIHIH HHHHHJHJ KLKLLM M NINIIOIO PEPEQDED RSRSSCSC HTHTTDTD UVTV WV HUHTTDTD THTHHCHC HCHCCTC THTHHFHF DHDHHX

'Before the war ' she sighs 'Before the war 'A
Then blinks 'er eyes an' tries to work a smileB
'Ole scenes ' she sez 'don't look the same no moreC
Ole ways ' she sez 'seems to 'ave changed their styleB
The pleasures that we had don't seem worth whileB
Them simple joys that passed an hour awayD
An' troubles that we used to so revileB
'Ow small they look' she sez ''Ow small todayD
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'This war ' sighs ole Mar Flood An' when I seenE
The ole girl sittin' in our parlour thereF
Tellin' 'er troubles to my wife DoreenE
As though the talkin' eased 'er load 'uv careF
I thinks uv mothers 'ere and everywhereF
Smilin' a bit while they are grievin' soreC
For grown up babies fightin' Over ThereF
An' then I 'ears 'em sigh 'Before the war '-
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My wife 'as took the social 'abit badG
I ain't averse one more new word I've learnedH
Averse to tea when tea is to be 'adH
An' when it comes I reckon that it's earnedH
It's jist a drink as fur as I'm concernedH
Good for a bloke that toilin' on the landH
But when a caller comes 'ere am I turnedH
Into a social butterfly off 'andH
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Then drinkin' tea becomes a 'oly riteH
So's I won't bring the family to disgraceI
I guts a bit 'uv coachin' overnightH
On ridin' winners in this bun fed raceI
I 'ave to change me shirt an' wash me faceI
An' look reel neat from me waist up at leastH
An sling remarks in at the proper placeI
An' not makes noises drinkin' like a beastH
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''Ave some more cake Another slice now doH
An' won't yeh 'ave a second cup uv teaH
'Ow is the children ' Ar it makes me blueH
This boodoor 'abit ain't no good to meH
I likes to take me tucker plain an' freeH
Tea an' a chunk out on the job for choiceJ
So I can stoke with no one there to seeH
Besides I 'aven't got no comp'ny voiceJ
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Uv course I've 'ad it all out with the wifeK
I argues that there's work that must be doneL
An' tells 'er that I 'ates this tony lifeK
She sez there's jooties that we must not shunL
You bet that ends it so I joins the funL
An' puts 'em all at ease with silly grinsM
Slings bits uv repartee like ''Ave a bun '-
An' passes bread an' butter for my sinsM
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Since I've been marri'd say I've chucked some thingsN
An' learned a whole lot more to fill the spaceI
I've slung all slang crook words 'ave taken wingsN
An' I 'ave learned to entertain with graceI
But when ole Missus Flood comes round our placeI
I don't object to 'er for all 'er sighsO
Becos I likes 'er ways I likes 'er faceI
An' most uv all she 'as them mother's eyesO
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'Before the war ' she sighs the poor ole girlP
'Er talk it gets me thinkin' in betweenE
While I'm assistin' at this social whirlP
She comes across for comfort to DoreenE
To talk about the things that might 'ave beenQ
If Syd 'ad not been killed at Suvla BayD
Or Jim had not done a bunk at seventeenE
An' not been heard uv since 'e went awayD
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They 'ave a little farm right next to usR
'Er and 'er husband where they live aloneS
Spite uv 'er cares she ain't the sort to fussR
Or serve up sudden tears an' sob an' moanS
An' since I've known 'er some'ow I 'ave grownS
To see in 'er an' all the grief she's boreC
A million brave ole mothers 'oo 'ave knownS
Deep sorrer since them days before the warC
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'Before the war ' she sez 'Yeh mind our SydH
Poor lad But then yeh never met young JimT
'Im 'oo was charged with things 'e never didH
Ah both uv you'd 'ave been reel chums with 'imT
'Igh spirited 'e was a perfect limbT
It's six long years now since 'e went awayD
Ay drove away ' 'Er poor ole eyes git dimT
'That was ' she sighs 'that was me blackest dayD
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'Me blackest day Wot am I sayin' nowU
That was the day the parson came to tellV
The news about our Syd An' yet some'owT
My little Jim ' She pauses for a spellV
'Your 'olly'ocks is doin' reely well '-
She sez an' battles 'ard to brighten upW
'An' them there pinks uv yours 'ow sweet they smellV
An' Thanks I think I will 'ave one more cup '-
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As fur as I can get the strength uv itH
Them Floods 'ave 'ad a reel tough row to howU
First off young Jim 'oo plays it high a bitH
Narks the ole man a treat an' slings the showT
The come the war an' Syd 'e 'as to goT
'E run 'is final up at Suvla BayD
One uv the Aussies I was proud to knowT
An' Jim's cracked 'ardy since 'e went awayD
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'Er Jim These mothers Lord they're all the sameT
I wonders if Doreen will be that kindH
Syd was the son 'oo played the reel man's gameT
But Jim 'oo sloped an' left no word be'indH
His is the picter shinin' in 'er mindH
'Igh spirited I've 'eard that tale beforeC
I sometimes think she'd take it rather kindH
To 'ear that 'is 'igh spirits run to warC
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'Before the war ' she sez 'Ah times was goodH
The little farm out there an' jist us fourC
Workin' to make a decent liveli'oodH
Our Syd an' Jim Poor Jim I grieves me soreC
For Dad won't 'ave 'im mentioned 'ome no moreC
'E's 'urt I know cos 'e thinks Jim 'urt meT
As if 'e could the bonny boy I boreC
But I must off 'ome now an' git Dad's tea '-
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I seen 'er to the gate Take it frum meT
I'm some perlite She sez 'Yeh mustn't mindH
Me talkin' uv Jim but when I seeT
Your face it brings 'im back 'e's jist your kindH
Not quite so 'an'some p'r'aps nor so refinedH
I've got some toys uv 'is ' she sez 'But thereF
This is ole woman's talk an' you be'indH
With all yer work an' little time to spareF
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She gives me 'and a squeeze an' turns awayD
Sobbin' I thort but then she looks be'indH
Smilin' an' wavin' like she felt reel gayD
I wonders 'ow the women work that blindH
An' jist waves back then goes inside to findH
A lookin' glass an' takes a reel good lookX
''Not quite so 'an'some p'r'aps nor so refined '-
Gawd 'elp yeh Jim ' I thinks 'Yeh must be crook '-

Clarence Michael James Stanislaus Dennis



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