An Old Master Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCB DEFE GHIH FEJ KCGC CK GCCC ILGL CCJC GFJF GMJM GGC CCGC

We were cartin' lathes and palin's from the slopes of Mount St LeonardA
With our axles near the road bed and the mud as stiff as glueB
And our bullocks weren't precisely what you'd call conditioned nicelyC
And meself and Messmate Mitchell had our doubts of gettin' throughB
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It had rained a tidy skyful in the week before we startedD
But our tucker bag depended on the sellin' of our loadE
So we punched 'em on by inches liftin' 'em across the pinchesF
Till we struck the final section of the worst part of the roadE
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We were just congratulatin' one another on the goin'G
When we blundered in a pot hole right within the sight of goalH
Where the bush track joins the metal Mitchell as he saw her settleI
Justified his reputation at the peril of his soulH
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We were in a glue pot certain red and stiff and most tenaciousF
Over naves and over axles waggon sittin' on the roadE
''Struth ' says I 'they'll never lift her Take a shot from Hell to shift herJ
Nothin' left us but unyoke 'em and sling off the blessed load '-
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Now beside our scene of trouble stood a little one roomed humpyK
Home of an enfeebled party by the name of Dad McGeeC
Daddy was I pause to mention livin' on an old age pensionG
Since he gave up bullock punchin' at the age of eighty threeC
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Startled by our exclamations Daddy hobbled from the shantyC
Gazin' where the stranded waggon looked like some half foundered shipK
When the state o' things he spotted 'Looks ' he says 'like you was potted '-
And he toddles up to Mitchell 'Here ' says he 'gimme that whip '-
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Well I've heard of transformations heard of fellers sort of changin'G
In the face of sudden danger or some great emergencyC
Heard the like in song and story and in bush traditions hoaryC
But I nearly dropped me bundle as I looked at Dad McGeeC
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While we gazed he seemed to toughen as his fingers gripped the handleI
His old form grew straight and supple and a light leapt in his eyeL
And he stepped around the waggon not with footsteps weak and laggin'G
But with firm determined bearin' as he flung the whip on highL
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Now he swung the leaders over while the whip lash snarled and volleyedC
And they answered like one bullock strainin' to each crack and cloutC
But he kept his cursin' under till old Brindle made a blunderJ
Then I thought all Hell had hit me and the master opened outC
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And the language Oh the language Seemed to me I must be dreamin'G
While the wondrous words and phrases only genius could produceF
Roared and rumbled fast and faster in the throat of that Old MasterJ
Oaths and curses tipped with lightning cracklin' flames of fierce abuseF
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Then we knew the man before us was a Master of our callin'G
One of those great lords of language gone for ever from Out backM
Heroes of an ancient order men who punched across the borderJ
Vanished giants of the sixties puncher princes of the trackM
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Now we heard the timbers strainin' heard the waggon's loud complainin'G
And the master cried triumphant as he swung 'em into lineG
As they put their shoulders to it lifted her and pulled her through itC
'That's the way we useter do it in the days o' sixty nine '-
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Near the foot of Mount St Leonard lives an old enfeebled partyC
Who retired from bullock punchin' at the age of eighty threeC
If you seek him folk will mention merely that he draws the pensionG
But to us he looms a Master Prince of Punchers Dad McGeeC

Clarence Michael James Stanislaus Dennis



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