Something For The Touts, The Nuns, The Grocery Clerks, And You . . . Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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we have everything and we have nothingA
and some men do it in churchesB
and some men do it by tearing butterfliesC
in halfD
and some men do it in Palm SpringsE
laying it into butterblondesE
with Cadillac soulsE
Cadillacs and butterfliesE
nothing and everythingA
the face melting down to the last puffF
in a cellar in Corpus ChristiG
there's something for the touts the nunsE
the grocery clerks and youH
something at a m something in the libraryG
something in the riverI
everything and nothingA
in the slaughterhouse it comes running alongJ
the ceiling on a hook and you swing itK
oneL
twoH
threeG
and then you've got it worth of deadM
meat its bones against your bonesE
something and nothingA
it's always early enough to die andN
it's always too lateO
and the drill of blood in the basin whiteP
it tells you nothing at allQ
and the gravediggers playing poker overI
a m coffee waiting for the grassE
to dismiss the frostR
they tell you nothing at allQ
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we have everything and we have nothingA
days with glass edges and the impossible stinkS
of river moss worse than shitK
checkerboard days of moves and countermovesE
fagged interest with as much sense in defeat asE
in victory slow days like mulesE
humping it slagged and sullen and sun glazedT
up a road where a madman sits waiting amongU
bluejays and wrens netted in and sucked a flakeyU
greyV
good days too of wine and shouting fightsE
in alleys fat legs of women striving aroundW
your bowels buried in moansE
the signs in bullrings like diamonds holleringU
Mother Capri violets coming out of the groundW
telling you to forget the dead armies and the lovesE
that robbed youH
days when children say funny and brilliant thingsE
like savages trying to send you a message throughH
their bodies while their bodies are stillX
alive enough to transmit and feel and run upY
and down without locks and paychecks andN
ideals and possessions and beetle likeU
opinionsE
days when you can cry all day long inZ
a green room with the door locked daysE
when you can laugh at the breadmanZ
because his legs are too long daysE
of looking at hedgesE
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and nothing and nothing the days ofA2
the bosses yellow menZ
with bad breath and big feet menZ
who look like frogs hyenas men who walkU
as if melody had never been invented menZ
who think it is intelligent to hire and fire andN
profit men with expensive wives they possessE
like acres of ground to be drilledB2
or shown off or to be walled away fromC2
the incompetent men who'd kill youH
because they're crazy and justify it becauseE
it's the law men who stand in front ofA2
windows feet wide and see nothingU
men with luxury yachts who can sail aroundW
the world and yet never get out of their vestD2
pockets men like snails men like eels menZ
like slugs and not as goodE2
and nothing getting your last paycheckU
at a harbor at a factory at a hospital at anZ
aircraft plant at a penny arcade at aF2
barbershop at a job you didn't wantG2
anywayV
income tax sickness servility brokenZ
arms broken heads all the stuffingU
come out like an old pillowH2
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we have everything and we have nothingU
some do it well enough for a while andN
then give way fame gets them or disgustI2
or age or lack of proper diet or inkU
across the eyes or children in collegeJ2
or new cars or broken backs while skiingU
in Switzerland or new politics or new wivesE
or just natural change and decayV
the man you knew yesterday hookingU
for ten rounds or drinking for three days andN
three nights by the Sawtooth mountains nowZ
just something under a sheet or a crossE
or a stone or under an easy delusionZ
or packing a bible or a golf bag or aF2
briefcase how they go how they go allQ
the ones you thought would never goH2
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days like this like your day todayV
maybe the rain on the window trying toH
get through to you what do you see todayV
what is it where are you the bestD2
days are sometimes the first sometimesE
the middle and even sometimes the lastK2
the vacant lots are not bad churches inZ
Europe on postcards are not bad people inZ
wax museums frozen into their best sterilityG
are not bad horrible but not bad theF2
cannon think of the cannon and toast forL2
breakfast the coffee hot enough youH
know your tongue is still there threeG
geraniums outside a window trying to beG
red and trying to be pink and trying to beG
geraniums no wonder sometimes the womenZ
cry no wonder the mules don't wantG2
to go up the hill are you in a hotel roomM2
in Detroit looking for a cigarette one moreL2
good day a little bit of it and asE
the nurses come out of the building afterI
their shift having had enough eight nursesE
with different names and different placesE
to go walking across the lawn some of themN2
want cocoa and a paper some of them want aF2
hot bath some of them want a man someC2
of them are hardly thinking at all enoughF
and not enough arcs and pilgrims orangesE
gutters ferns antibodies boxes ofA2
tissue paperI
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in the most decent sometimes sunZ
there is the softsmoke feeling from urnsE
and the canned sound of old battleplanesE
and if you go inside and run your fingerI
along the window ledge you'll findO2
dirt maybe even earthP2
and if you look out the windowH2
there will be the day and as youH
get older you'll keep lookingU
keep lookingU
sucking your tongue in a littleQ2
ah ah no no maybeG
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some do it naturallyG
some obscenelyG
everywhereR2
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Submitted by Dylan SkolaG

Charles Bukowski



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Sarah Landig: I see the juxtaposition beginning in the title of the poem. Admittedly, I googled touts. I never heard that word before. He's addressing the poem to people in different walks of life thereby showing that this is a message for everyone. From the pious to the agressive, to the everyday clerk and to "you" which could be anything at all. I feel the general theme is that of a type of void filling. The filling of your days with whatever everything means to you. A sense of the days of nothingness. A sense that it all amounts to nothing in the end. It made me ask myself what means everything and what means nothing in my own life. It almost felt like Bukowski was checking me when he starts in with the questions. days like this. like your day today.
maybe the rain on the window trying to
get through to you. what do you see today?
what is it? where are you?
I think about this concept often. I guess it just brings up for me the question of what fills my own void with what I want to be inside? What memories do I want to carry with me and how many days do I want to spend working a mundane job doing mundane shit? Are those memories I want to carry around to the grave?
I love
are you in a hotel room
in Detroit looking for a cigarette? one more
good day. a little bit of it.
I remember moments like this. That seem like nothing but are everything in retrospect.

We have everything. We have nothing. It's a concept that applies to everybody universally.
Beautiful poem. I find it inspiring instead of depressing.
 

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