La Muse Malade (the Sick Muse) Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCB ABAB CCB BBB B CBBA DBEA FBB BBC G B CACA CBCB HHI JJI K C LAGA MAGA FFC CAA B C NBANABBN CCC BBA G

Ma pauvre muse h las qu'as tu donc ce matinA
Tes yeux creux sont peupl s de visions nocturnesB
Et je vois tour tour r fl chis sur ton teintC
La folie et l'horreur froides et taciturnesB
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Le succube verd tre et le rose lutinA
T'ont ils vers la peur et l'amour de leurs urnesB
Le cauchemar d'un poing despotique et mutinA
T'a t il noy e au fond d'un fabuleux MinturnesB
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Je voudrais qu'exhalant l'odeur de la santC
Ton sein de pensers forts f t toujours fr quentC
Et que ton sang chr tien coul t flots rythmiquesB
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Comme les sons nombreux des syllabes antiquesB
O r gnent tour tour le p re des chansonsB
Phoebus et le grand Pan le seigneur des moissonsB
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The Sick MuseB
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My poor Muse alas what ails you todayC
Your hollow eyes are full of nocturnal visionsB
I see in turn reflected on your faceB
Horror and madness cold and taciturnA
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Have the green succubus the rosy elfD
Poured out for you love and fear from their urnsB
Has the hand of Nightmare cruel and despoticE
Plunged you to the bottom of some weird MinturnaeA
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I would that your bosom fragrant with healthF
Were constantly the dwelling place of noble thoughtsB
And that your Christian blood would flow in rhythmic wavesB
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Like the measured sounds of ancient verseB
Over which reign in turn the father of all songsB
Phoebus and the great Pan lord of harvestC
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Translated by William AggelerG
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The Sick MuseB
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Alas poor Muse what ails you so todayC
Your hollow eyes with midnight visions burnA
And turn about in your complexion playC
Madness and horror cold and taciturnA
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Green succubus and rosy imp have theyC
Poured you both fear and love into one glassB
Or with his tyrant fist the nightmare sayC
Submerged you in some fabulous morassB
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I wish that breathing health your breast might nourishH
Ever robuster thoughts therein to flourishH
And that your Christian blood in rhythmic flowI
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With those old polysyllables would chimeJ
Where turn about reigned Phoebus sire of rhymeJ
And Pan the lord of harvests long agoI
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Translated by Roy CampbellK
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La Muse maladeC
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poor Muse alas what ails thee now for thyL
great hollow eyes with sights nocturnal burnA
and in they changing pallor I descryG
madness and frozen horror turn by turnA
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did rosy sprites or pale green succubiM
pour love or panic from their dream filled urnA
did the mad fist of despot nightmare tryG
to drown thee where the fiends of hell sojournA
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I would that thou wert always filled with healthF
and manly thoughts undaunted that a wealthF
of Christian blood were thine which always flowedC
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in calm broad rhythms like a Grecian odeC
now echoing forth Apollo's golden strainA
and now great Pan the lord of ripening grainA
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Translated by Lewis Piaget ShanksB
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The Sick MusedC
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My impoverished muse alas What have you for me this morningN
Your empty eyes are stocked with nocturnal visionsB
In your cheek's cold and taciturn reflectionA
I see insanity and horror formingN
The green succubus and the red urchinA
Have they poured you fear and love from their urnsB
The nightmare of a mutinous fist that despotically turnsB
Does it drown you at the bottom of a loch beyond searchingN
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I wish that your breast exhaled the scent of sanityC
That your womb of thought was not a tomb more frequentlyC
And that your Christian blood flowed around a buoy that was rhythmicalC
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Like the numberless sounds of antique syllablesB
Where reigns in turn the father of songsB
Phoebus and the great Pan the harvest sovereignA
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Translated by William A SiglerG

Charles Baudelaire



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