Duellum (the Duel) Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABAC AAAA ADA DEE D ACFG HAIG ACA AEC I D JGJG KEKE CCA AAA D D CGCG EAEA DADAEE LDeux guerriers ont couru l'un sur l'autre leurs armes | A |
Ont clabouss l'air de lueurs et de sang | B |
Ces jeux ces cliquetis du fer sont les vacarmes | A |
D'une jeunesse en proie l'amour vagissant | C |
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Les glaives sont bris s comme notre jeunesse | A |
Ma ch re Mais les dents les ongles ac r s | A |
Vengent bient t l' p e et la dague tra tresse | A |
fureur des coeurs m rs par l'amour ulc r s | A |
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Dans le ravin hant des chats pards et des onces | A |
Nos h ros s' treignant m chamment ont roul | D |
Et leur peau fleurira l'aridit des ronces | A |
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Ce gouffre c'est l'enfer de nos amis peupl | D |
Roulons y sans remords amazone inhumaine | E |
Afin d' terniser l'ardeur de notre haine | E |
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The Duel | D |
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Two warriors rushed upon each other their arms | A |
Spattered the air with sparks and blood | C |
This fencing this clashing of steel are the uproar | F |
Of youth when it becomes a prey to puling love | G |
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The blades are broken like our youth | H |
My darling But the teeth the steely fingernails | A |
Soon avenge the sword and the treacherous dagger | I |
O Fury of mature hearts embittered by love | G |
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In the ravine haunted by lynxes and panthers | A |
Our heroes viciously clasping each other rolled | C |
And their skin will put blooms on the barren brambles | A |
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This abyss it is hell thronged with our friends | A |
Let us roll there without remorse cruel amazon | E |
So the ardor of our hatred will be immortalized | C |
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Translated by William Aggeler | I |
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Duel | D |
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Two fighters rushed together sabres bleak | J |
With crimson blood gouts lit the air above | G |
That clinking swordplay was the tender squeak | J |
Of youth when it's a prey to bleating love | G |
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The swords are splintered like our youth my darling | K |
And now it's teeth and talons are the fashion | E |
The clash of swords is child's play to the snarling | K |
Of hearts adult in ulcerated passion | E |
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In the ravine by lynx and leopard haunted | C |
Our heroes wrestling heroes roll undaunted | C |
Rags of their skin flower red upon the gorse | A |
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This gulf is hell and peopled by our friends | A |
Here hellcat Come let's roll without remorse | A |
To celebrate a feud that never ends | A |
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Translated by Roy Campbell | D |
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The Duel | D |
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Two warriors dueled upon the battle ground | C |
Their arms scattering bright sparks and blood above | G |
This sport the clash of steel gave forth the sound | C |
Of youth fallen a prey to puling love | G |
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The blades are broken darling like the moon | E |
Of our sweet youth but teeth and fingernails | A |
Avenge the sword and traitorous dagger soon | E |
Old hearts that love's old bitterness assails | A |
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In the ravine where lynx and panther ramble | D |
Our heroes bite the dust in fierce embrace | A |
Their skin shall bring new bloom to the dry bramble | D |
This pit is hell our friends' choice dwelling place | A |
Let us roll there O cruel Amazon | E |
So our fierce hatred may live on and on | E |
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Translated by Jacques LeClercq | L |
Charles Baudelaire
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