In A Castle Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: A BCD EFGHI JKDLK MNOP Q RSSTJ KU SVEPUWM SJ SX P P SYSS JZ SA2B2PSS S L A SS C2SD2KE2 F2G2 SH2I2LJ2K2K K L2KF2 SS J2KC2 A M2M2M2M2M2M2M2M2M2I | A |
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Over the yawning chimney hangs the fog Drip hiss drip hiss | B |
fall the raindrops on the oaken log which burns and steams | C |
and smokes the ceiling beams Drip hiss the rain never stops | D |
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The wide state bed shivers beneath its velvet coverlet Above dim | E |
in the smoke a tarnished coronet gleams dully Overhead hammers and chinks | F |
the rain Fearfully wails the wind down distant corridors and there comes | G |
the swish and sigh of rushes lifted off the floors The arras blows sidewise | H |
out from the wall and then falls back again | I |
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It is my lady's key confided with much nice cunning whisperingly | J |
He enters on a sob of wind which gutters the candles almost to swaling | K |
The fire flutters and drops Drip hiss the rain never stops | D |
He shuts the door The rushes fall again to stillness along the floor | L |
Outside the wind goes wailing | K |
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The velvet coverlet of the wide bed is smooth and cold Above | M |
in the firelight winks the coronet of tarnished gold The knight shivers | N |
in his coat of fur and holds out his hands to the withering flame | O |
She is always the same a sweet coquette He will wait for her | P |
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How the log hisses and drips How warm and satisfying will be her lips | Q |
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It is wide and cold the state bed but when her head lies under the coronet | R |
and her eyes are full and wet with love and when she holds out her arms | S |
and the velvet counterpane half slips from her and alarms | S |
her trembling modesty how eagerly he will leap to cover her and blot himself | T |
beneath the quilt making her laugh and tremble | J |
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Is it guilt to free a lady from her palsied lord absent and fighting | K |
terribly abhorred | U |
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He stirs a booted heel and kicks a rolling coal His spur clinks | S |
on the hearth Overhead the rain hammers and chinks She is so pure | V |
and whole Only because he has her soul will she resign herself to him | E |
for where the soul has gone the body must be given as a sign He takes her | P |
by the divine right of the only lover He has sworn to fight her lord | U |
and wed her after Should he be overborne she will die adoring him forlorn | W |
shriven by her great love | M |
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Above the coronet winks in the darkness Drip hiss fall the raindrops | S |
The arras blows out from the wall and a door bangs in a far off hall | J |
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The candles swale In the gale the moat below plunges and spatters | S |
Will the lady lose courage and not come | X |
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The rain claps on a loosened rafter | P |
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Is that laughter | P |
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The room is filled with lisps and whispers Something mutters | S |
One candle drowns and the other gutters Is that the rain | Y |
which pads and patters is it the wind through the winding entries | S |
which chatters | S |
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The state bed is very cold and he is alone How far from the wall | J |
the arras is blown | Z |
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Christ's Death It is no storm which makes these little chuckling sounds | S |
By the Great Wounds of Holy Jesus it is his dear lady kissing and | A2 |
clasping someone Through the sobbing storm he hears her love take form | B2 |
and flutter out in words They prick into his ears and stun his desire | P |
which lies within him hard and dead like frozen fire And the little noise | S |
never stops | S |
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Drip hiss the rain drops | S |
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He tears down the arras from before an inner chamber's bolted door | L |
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II | A |
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The state bed shivers in the watery dawn Drip hiss fall the raindrops | S |
For the storm never stops | S |
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On the velvet coverlet lie two bodies stripped and fair in the cold | C2 |
grey air Drip hiss fall the blood drops for the bleeding never stops | S |
The bodies lie quietly At each side of the bed on the floor is a head | D2 |
A man's on this side a woman's on that and the red blood oozes along | K |
the rush mat | E2 |
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A wisp of paper is twisted carefully into the strands of the dead man's hair | F2 |
It says 'My Lord Your wife's paramour has paid with his life | G2 |
for the high favour ' | - |
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Through the lady's silver fillet is wound another paper It reads | S |
'Most noble Lord Your wife's misdeeds are as a double stranded | H2 |
necklace of beads But I have engaged that on your return | I2 |
she shall welcome you here She will not spurn your love as before | L |
you have still the best part of her Her blood was red her body white | J2 |
they will both be here for your delight The soul inside was a lump of dirt | K2 |
I have rid you of that with a spurt of my sword point Good luck | K |
to your pleasure She will be quite complaisant my friend I wager ' | - |
The end was a splashed flourish of ink | K |
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Hark In the passage is heard the clink of armour the tread of a heavy man | L2 |
The door bursts open and standing there his thin hair wavering | K |
in the glare of steely daylight is my Lord of Clair | F2 |
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Over the yawning chimney hangs the fog Drip hiss drip hiss | S |
fall the raindrops Overhead hammers and chinks the rain which never stops | S |
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The velvet coverlet is sodden and wet yet the roof beams are tight | J2 |
Overhead the coronet gleams with its blackened gold winking and blinking | K |
Among the rushes three corpses are growing cold | C2 |
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III | A |
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In the castle church you may see them stand | M2 |
Two sumptuous tombs on either hand | M2 |
Of the choir my Lord's and my Lady's grand | M2 |
In sculptured filigrees And where the transepts of the church expand | M2 |
A crusader come from the Holy Land | M2 |
Lies with crossed legs and embroidered band | M2 |
The page's name became a brand | M2 |
For shame He was buried in crawling sand | M2 |
After having been burnt by royal command | M2 |
Amy Lowell
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